Ultimate crack fic

Great story but has some plot holes. Biggest one is "Tobi" is not that strong. He has a couple great eye tricks but nothing else. Talk a those away and he is a punk.

Put in Cassandra cain

This has a lot of errors and mistakes. I had trouble even getting halfway into first chapter

This was poorly written, I couldn’t even get halfway through the first chapter...smh

Its a great story but now the next onw is gonna be even better watch out artemis

Dude im glad you stopped writing this story. It was going downhill with that madara bullshit honestly he and obito are the worst characters in naruto when concerning goals seriously fucken moon eye plan? Pathetic. You would have ruined this. But besides the ending good story.

Wow

Please continue this because I like how this story is going.

yo man love the story still after reading it 10 times now but 3 years of no updates is taking the mickey a bit

Giving up on this story on the Fourth Chapter. I never even made it past 1/3 of the chapter and got tired of it.

Too much empowerment fantasy and Gary Stu-ness all around. But my biggest problem really was how much you depowered the Justice League just so that Naruto could be OP. Really, anyone on Superman's level would solo the Narutoverse with zero ease. He'd shatter Susano'o with a punch, one punch would insta-kill Naruto. This is the man that shattered reality on multiple occasions with a few punches.

lmao whats the strom style?

Dear writer please make more chapter

Dude i hope you continue this cause it has been a fun read and you left at a damn infuriating cliff hanger.

Great madara is back