You might want to take a look at Claudia Boleyn's tumblr page, to see where all these anti Moffat, things are coming from. Regardless, you have the right to still admire him/or his stories.

I love this version so much better than the original! I wish it was more like this, I feel that the other version gipped everyone in the scenario.

You definitely are in sync with 11... And I completely agree!

It should've been.
Sadly, it was not.

Dear Betawho,

KIDNEYS.

That is all.

Some of this goes against what's said in the End of Time, and there's a little stab at Tens last words.

I like it! I'm a hardcore modern-day Whovian, and this has helped my sadness at the way 11 left us. So, thank you!
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I LOVE IT but maybe you should have added the "Raggedy Man, Goodnight" part because that just sings feels

I like this! It's less jarring than in the actual show. Nice job!

Capaldi has blue eyes, not silver.

Ok, so first: what is with him taking off when he regenerated? He KEEPS doing it, and he keeps doing -or nearly doing- crash landings afterwards while he tried to figure out how to fly...

Anyway. I actually liked the original (even with 12 and the evil leer) but this was so beautiful! Wish this has happened.

I like it. Keep smiling. :-)

I liked this extended take! Gonna be a bit difficult settling in on a new face.

Nice alternate ending! Yours is much more satisfying! :)

I loved it! Much better than the actual regeneration, which is so sad to say. Thanks for writing a regeneration scene I'd be thrilled to see!