need more

Famous last words, huh? I hope you really do post the last chapter someday. I remember reading this years ago and when I saw it had an update date from this year, I was shocked.

You bastard! Ill fucking get you

HELLO!

No matter how much time passes between your uploads, it's ALWAYS good to see your new pieces of text XD
I smiled when the two lovebirds talked about the Hut/Ger ) even if I wonder if the thing Lyn's thinking about is what Michael told her about returning to Caelin and taking his responsibilities... you know, the kiss on the ship and the promise. But DAMMIT! (in a good way) you cut RIGHT at that point! Should I guess in the next line someone will open wide the door saying: "WE'RE UNDER ATTACK!" cutting him again?

I have a question not concerning this story but FE Heroes... Just how much orbs do you used to have Brave Lyn 10? I have her 3 and the two move versions weren't supposed to be found XD. I think you like/love her more than me, don't you XD?

Well, I'll be waiting for the next upload, no matter what it is, and... I know I'm pretty late but, MERRY CHRISTMAS and HAPPY NEW YEAR! At the end of this month, I'll have to start a class that will keep me busy for all the week not counting the weekends so... I hope I'll be able to catch you.

Bye for now!

I like this take on Hector already. That last line was hilarious!

Can someone explain what actually happened, did Lyn actually die, or was it some sort of morph?

Been soooo long since I've last read this. Looking forward to spending a weekend binge reading this.

Soooooooooooo... you let us know Leila will return from Valor with the group EVEN if we don't know now she actually is. And Michael discussed some important things with Ninian remembering as well another piece of his past... Interesting at least. This is sure. I'll look forward for the next chapter, no matter what story is ). It's wonderful seeing again your uploads. Bye!

Question when is micheals Mom and dad going to come back into play

OK... In the end you don't uploaded anything FOR NOW but it's good seeing again Rekka No Ken A Story Retold on the wave ) I'll follow your uploads from now on.

Sweet, Crap. I don't mean to sound bitchy but this took forever, your absense was really worrying y'know, you could have at least said you'd be a while in an update, but it's good to have you back now.
Anyway, good chapter although you said soup de grace instead of coup de grace

Hope you update this fic again soon

An interesting chapter, but I think there were quite a few choppy sentences and repeating phrases. Also the conversation between Eliwood and his mother seemed a bit stiff, but I suppose that can be excused.

An all round good chapter, I enjoyed the fighting scenes and the way you characterized Hector.

A good concluding chapter, but darn it Lyn and Michael should have kissed! Haha anyways, I've noticed most of your spelling errors are on plural words which probably means your S key is messed up, or used to be... (Considering when these chapters were uploaded).

Anywho, I hope the next arc is as good as this one :)