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OMG! OMG!
Hermoso, hermoso! Es increiblemente perfecto, y solo un capitulo lo mas triste de este mundo... Dejalo crecer! Esta historia es WOW me encantaria leer mas!
P.D: AFA es una obra de arte! Felicidades artista!

Well, if you keep writing the story, I'll beta for you.

gran inicio me encanta tu forma de escribir y vale la pena la espera para cada capitulo de tus magnificas historias

Very good, would love to see a sequel.

Stunning!Elsa and Flustered!Anna are just about too cute for description.

There should most DEFINITELY be more of this. And if you need a beta, I'll volunteer. PM me.

This is lovely. You really should continue it. And I've Not Beta Read for anyone for a long time, but I would be very interested in doing so if you still need it. :-)

Do you plan on continuing this story? I really like it so far.

Sweet short story :D keep it up

This seems great so far

I'm only just now finding this, and it seems you have a thing for Elsa and Anna admiring each other in really tight riding breeches. (I think I do too to be perfectly honest.) This basically gave me AFA vibes all the way through, and I'm very strongly reminded of chapter 9 (10? I think you know the one I'm talking about. It's basically my favorite intimate scene in the whole story.)

This really isn't a review is, it? Just me spewing about Elsa and Anna in breeches. Whatever. I'm posting it anyway because I can.

Love your work, you manage to show their personalities so well! I'm hoping you continue this in the future!

I love the writing style expressed in this story. I love how you've captured both Anna's and Elsa's character, as well.

(Dare I mention I LOVE the hints of a Protective!Possessive!Elsa in regards to Anna's wellbeing?)

Should you ever return and update this story (er, if you plan to, I mean) I for one would love to see more of it. (As well as see more of Anna's love for Elsa develop from platonic to romantic!)

I do believe this is the first continuation fic I have found. I can't wait to see what you do with the characters. I love your writing style.

this is cute as fuck!