Shouldn't it have been that Sesshoumaru is 3 years older than Kagome. That is if the high school they go to is a 4 year one. Personally, when I was a freshman my brother, who is 3 years older than me, was a senior.

You need to mark when they are speaking and when you are just describing what is happening in the story. The use of quotation marks would be much appreciated.

Either way, this story is still one of my favorites.

Great write, I wanted to hit Shesshomaru several times and I felt horrible for Inu-yasha almost as many times. Loved it!

Great story!

Wait so inuyasha likes kagome? Anyway I loved it and the ending was funny and inuyasha,koga,sesshomaru, and kagome part was so funny :-) :-) :-)

Awwwwwww that so sad and sucks man but it was great :-) I loved it :-)

I loved it and it was sad at the end I guess but it was still great :-)

I loved it and man I hope kagome win but I don't see any kag/sessh interaction but they better get together at the end

Awwwwww sesshomaru is actually opening up for breakfast but I loved it and it was great and kind of funny I guess :-)

Hmmm this was cool and I loved it :-)

I loved it and it was great and kikyo is just jealous and man isn't he mean :-)

Yay koga I love him but hate they make him so desprate but anyway I loved it and it was great :-)

Ugh why did you bring kikyo?! But anyway I loved it :-)

Hmmmm kind of confused but I'll get it soon but I loved it :-)