Reviews for Olimar's Experiences on Guard Duty
DJ Absony chapter 2 . 8/23/2018
Oh shoot, I didn't even know Roy could be in this story! That would've been a good guess. Also, it may be preferable to say "Forbidden 5" instead of "Melee Rejects". Just a suggestion, though.
DJ Absony chapter 1 . 8/23/2018
I personally think this story was very entertaining and well written. If I were IGN, I would give it a 10/10 rating, just enough water. But in all seriousness, you should continue this series. It always brings me joy when someone writes good fan-fiction about Olimar. I mean, he never really seems to be that popular, so people just forget about him. It's very refreshing. As to who stole Marth's hair supplies, I am not sure, but I would have to guess it was... Samus! I mean, she could be sneaky, and it's probably hard to maintain your hair when you always have to wear that power suit! Also, she is probably not one for asking. About the bear in Pit's room, somebody probably became a bear because of some dumb accident. I'm not sure who, it could literally be anybody! I'm excited to find out in the next chapters, so I hope you finish this series. If not, that's fine, but just remember this very sad, disappointed face );
Cheers!
Adam43 chapter 2 . 3/12/2016
The beginning of the fanfiction suddenly becomes a fanfiction with cartoon physics.
Creativetomboy chapter 11 . 12/9/2014
To answer the first two questions, I have no idea. I guess I was still trying to remember what happened last time. Crazy Hand interrupted Roy because he... just likes to be silly. That sounds logical. I have no comment for the who's cooler question. I might their feelings. If it doesn't directly affect Mewtwo, then he doesn't care what's going on; that's why the randomness didn't faze him.
I have a scheduling suggestion: First off, I have the same problem. I have so many ideas stored in my brain that it's hard to pick a single one to focus on. To help myself, I alternate what I work on. On Monday, Wednesday, and Friday, you could work on project 1. Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday, work on project 2. On Sunday, just take that time to write down any small ideas you came up with but couldn't find a place to use them. That's my schedule, and it works pretty well for me.
Destiny Willowleaf chapter 11 . 12/9/2014
1. A waffle, Fox, and a lightbulb.
2. NOPE! *goes to check* Oh, well.
3. BECAUSE HE CAN AND RHWIAOGO
4. *shurugs*
5. Cause he's awesomesauce and a cat.
warriorcatgirl375 chapter 11 . 12/9/2014
HAZZAH! LILAC HAS RETURNED! *confetti*

It's great to see you back! I was starting to begin to worry about this story. But now that I know your reason, I completely understand. My schedule is starting to get out of wack too. But anyways, I don't mind the short chapter! So we finally got to see three of the Melee rejects return! I'm also starting to get a sick feeling that Ike, Roy, and Mario have telepathy...Anyways, questions!

1.) I actually wasn't expacting anyone to be in the room.
2.) I don't really remember either _'
3.) Well, it seemed like that whenever someone was about to tell a long, random story, it always got interrupted. I gueee it's a trend! XD
4.) Who do I think is cooler? ... ... ... Kirby
5.) Since Mewtwo seems to be one of the very few people there who still has common sense, I think he's just fed up and want's this to be done already. XD

It was short, but I still enjoyed it! I'm wishing you the best of luck, Lilac! Keep it up! _

- Warrior Kitty
Reevee21 chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
Creepy stalker message?
...hide under the sheets (facepalm)
Yes, OF COURSE I thought Pit was an imposter. *cough cough Dark Pit cough*
Guest chapter 3 . 5/28/2014
ik and marth: 5 years. -.-
warriorcatgirl375 chapter 10 . 5/25/2014
...Whoa! That was kinda intense. I'm still trying to piece together what the book is trying to tell the group, but I can't get anything. -.-' But this just got really interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next! Now questions.

1.) I would assume that I'm somewhere outside the fabrics of time and space. Or something like that...
2.) I just ignore it. Sometimes I don't even realize it.
3.) Not really
4.) No one will ever know...
5.) I don't know. I'm also trying to figure that out as well.

This is getting really good! Keep it up!

- Warrior Kitty
Creativetomboy chapter 10 . 5/25/2014
I would probably assume whatever or whoever I was with was magical. Then I'd wonder where I was.
I mentally make a not of it in amusment.
Nope.
Probably around the mansion, destroying the other smashers' lives.
I kind of have the feeling that all the people they met in the hallway can help them, because the random bomb part could have been a reference to Meta Knight, who they found in the hallway with a random bomb.
Love the rhymes! Love the randomness! Love the suspense! Keep up the good work!
Kiwi Loveberry chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
I love it!
penmaster13 chapter 9 . 5/7/2014
Omg CAN'T STOP LAUGHING. This story is extremely random and genius and amazing. Um, answering your questions...
1) um, no idea. Pit jumped into a portal Palutena made? Or found a vent. Or the instruction manual ;)
2) Mewto probably warped out. Teleported. Is he even real? Is anything in the random rooms real? Is life? XD
3) well the book is important if Pit used it
4) crazy hand's a boss
5) idk. Good luck snake :)
penmaster13 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
This is one awesome story! XD can't stop laughing! You're a genius. Love this. You're really creative and a natural at writing.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/5/2014
If Pit came in with red eyes I would've thought it was Dark Pit. I already have a stalker. I think Like and Marth were, hmm, spray painting Olimar's room pink while being forced to wear humiliating clothes by Sonic.
Charlie the Waffle Creator
Destiny Willowleaf chapter 9 . 5/4/2014
1. By the forces of Palutena!
2. To find a more sane place.
3. No.
4. Because he felt like it.
5. However you write it!
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