I have to say, these are my favorite types of stories...ones that slip into philosophy, poetry, & metaphor, if that makes any kind of sense. I enjoyed the imagery & attention to detail...as well as the sophistication of word choice. And there are intimate moments being described here, but I like that they aren't necessarily sexual in nature...just evidence of a really deep friendship...and really, it's a hard trick to pull off in writing sometimes. And I'm not ashamed to admit that this story made me cry a few times...but then their first meeting was very emotional-for them & the audience-so, naturally, it would stand to reason that the events following it would be very emotional as well. Anyway, I just wanted to say that this story is amazing...and I hope there's more to come.

Beautiful

this is so perfect3 can you write another one for these two? it would be amazing!

This was absolutely beautiful and made me cry. Excellent story!

I have to say, I rather enjoyed that. I thought the light romantic aspect between Eleven and Clara was sweet and intriguing. And part of me hopes to see that continuation with Twelve, despite the age gap. What I took from this is Clara working it out that his new man is the same man as before, at least in the ways that matter. I'd be quite pleased if the essence of your story carried out on screen. Well done.

This was absolutely beautiful, I loved it so much.