Is this story dead.

I doubt I'm the first to ask, but after a year and a half I must know. Should we consider the story dead or do you intended to write more?

Do a Harold x Leshawna lemon next plz

Good series! Update coming soon or nah?

I think this chapter could be better
Maybe if Noah still saying No to Courtney she could give him all (you know maybe he could see her naked and all that she don't want to do)
The valedictorian is something important and loose it just for sex is...stupid
He could make her do MORE for that prize if she REALLY wanted it not just that
Noah should use manipulation sometime if you write another story or chapter about these two

Just finished reading through this entire fic and I highly admire everything that's taken place within the inter-connected episodes/chapters.

A few things to point out...
"realeza" is actually the Spanish word for "royalty", "princesa" is "princess", and yet "Realeza" still works as a fitting last name for Courtney though for some reason I prefer thinking of her being named Courtney Ramirez (or "Ramirez").
The Galeria Mall, so you're tieing TD to its sister spin-off show 6-Teen, everything worked believably well in meshing the two franchises.
When the little kid's mom asked Caitlyn, "are you the girl who hit my son?", I feel that the readers or Caitlyn could have said "that depends, is your son the kid who hit the lemonade stand employee first?"
Kind of surprised Heather didn't run into Gwen since the goth also works at the Maple Cinema movie theater.
Actually, the first thing I noticed about Chapter 11 is the fact you've brought in Redonculous Race characters into this overarching fic before any Pawketew Island characters. I'm okay with you developing Mike's alternate personas into family relatives instead. Is Veto's girlfriend Maria, Anne Maria? That would make it so the B/Beverly and Lightning are the only Revenge characters missing unless you also count Molly, Dawn's original concept as a separate character.

Really interested to see how this overall fic continues whenever the next chapter's posted.

This! this is what i'm talking about.

Granted a chunk of it still feels like filler. But i think its because there's just so much of it.

You know looking through this, i think i'm starting to see a pattern here... Dont' take this the wrong way, but i think you got a thing regarding how you portray girls in this story. As every chapter, or at least a good chunk of it as A-holes.

Take this chapter for example. Every girl in here is kind of a bitch. Granted thats kinda the corner stone of heather's personality, but even bridgette kinda went overboard. Hell, there's even Sierra. Though, like heather, thats a pretty big part of who she is and it was a shell shocked flashback from cody of all people.

So yeah, doing a double take maybe this is all just my imagination. Just be careful though. I don't want this site to black list ya over some misguided PC BS.

Great lemon though.

Gotta say man, not to be a buzz kill, but this one? yeah, just above last chapter.

No matter how you spin this one, the girls just come off as A-holes, and not in a fun way.

Granted the lemons were Amazing- thats a 6-7 on the 'sexcellent' scale... or i got it backward and amazing is an 8 and 'sexcellent' is the 6-7? I don't know i'm pretty hammered right now.

Either way, i can tell you're improving, but still a work in progress. Kinda like a kid riding a scooter. You know he's working his way up to a 10 speed, and bless his heart, he still looks like a dick.

this one? total filler. to me it felt like you tried so hard to establish that this story isn't just a bunch of separate short stories but connected that you fudged it on the actual quality of the chapter.

You Batman Vs Superman'd this chapter buddy. Sorry dude, you just did.

... and yes, i am kinda PO'd that there's no lemon.

Now this is more like it, the fourth chapter and you can already tell the difference in experience. The story flows much easier, the lemon much smoother and HOTTER. Excellent world building too.

Woop! sorry, i meant sexellent. Yuup, i'm using that word to describe this story's lemons.

on a scale of 1- 10, a 'Sexelent' would be a solid 8. A 'i need some new boxers' would be a 10. 'Meh' is a 4-5, and a 'Boo' would be maybe a 1.

So yeah, solid 8 on this one.

Okay, we kinda backtracked. This one was long again, it also felt like a good chunk of it was filler like chapter 1. It also felt like someone else took up the pen with this one.

Hey, it was still a solid lemon and lime in my opinion. nice work none the less.

DAAAAWWWWMMM, that was hot.

Who knew deva dakota had the miley syrus in her do do that shit huh? Sam's a lucky SOB. Keep it up.

okay, i'm gonna be straight with ya... this was long.

Don't get me wrong, it was still great. But it just seemed like a good chunk of it was just filler. First time writing this kinda thing? It show's but still, 'sex'ulent start.

GET IT!

Well, I don't mind the idea of Mike being without his split personalities. It's something different while keeping his default personality in character. I doubt you're the first to try and tackle the idea of a normal Mike. Lol. How you presented him here was pretty good. Lol at the Jersey Shore jokes. I assume one of the new couples to the story will be Mike/Zoey.

Lindsay being Lindsay is always good comedy here. XD Wonder if she'll end up with anybody in this story (without her being tricked into sex, of course).

Well written as always. Looking forward to more of the boat house party, especially the... ahem... "after-party". Heh. Rock on, dude!

Great chapter, as always. You know, i theorise that as soon as Dakota enters with Zoey, the other group of friends will go to her, and a lot of drama will ensue.

As for Mike, i must say that it's a risky move, but i take it over the way his MPD was portrayed in the show. It was too cartoony and tasteless.

So, Tyler and Lindsay broke up because he had to go to college, huh? I know you're tired of hearing this, but please, write a chapter in which Tyler meets Scarlett at college and she becomes his private tutor. From that, you can do the opposite of this story and make the nerdy GIRLS hook up with the hunks.