You write so vividly. It's beautiful.

Your’re the Best !

This was beautifully written, I love the growth of Olivia how she realizes she need not be perfect to be loved and that she is deserving of having it and keeping it.

This was beautiful! The struggle, the courage, the realisation of drifting apart while fighting to hold it all together. In the new era, Fitz is the one who makes the choice the change. Days gone by it would have been Liv. BEAUTIFUL!

this was such a beautiful and perfect ending. thank you for sharing it.

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You capture their love, fears, and insecurities so well. Hope you continue to share your talent this new year.

Welcome back lady. I loved this one shot! Separating the story by the months was brilliant! Hope you write more this year! I loved all of your stories last year. happy new year.

This was real and sweet. Happily ever after is a fantasy; something you have to work for. Good to see they both got their priorities straight and they chose each other. It would be nice to read some more OLITZ mushiness. But this was good. Happy New Year.

Beautifully done. Really appreciated the struggle and the happy ending.

good stuff!

Purple I have missed your beautiful stories so much! Its glad to have you back!-

Amazing story!

This was a lovely almanac of Olivia and Fitzgerald adjusting to the ordinary happiness and anxiety that is married life. Beautiful, poetic writing from a wonderful author.

Wishing the Purple Pineapple and her family every good thing in 2014!

Clio1972

Wow...this was good...heartbreaking at the beginning and middle...good all over. Thanks for sharing this with me.

I wanted to stop and review not even mid-way through the story. Your writing is lyrical, gifted, magical...I am in awe of your talent. Happy Bew Year, and I look forward to whatever you share with us in 2014. I'm sure it'll be just as lovely. Keep writing, pretty please!