Dude... your own stories are a cliche. EVERY one of your stories has everyone hate Naruto for stupid, unknown and illogical reasons with only a select group of people supporting him. I can understand wanting to make Naruto a loner, which isn't impossible in a modern fic with him in Japan, his blonde hair alone would alienate him. While there are Japanese that dye their hair, if it's anything more than streaks (Like TM Revolution has had in his hair on numerous occasions), then that person will be alienated, seen as a delinquent, because those are the people in Japan that regularly dye their hair blonde, gyaru girls and thugs. On top of that Naruto has blue eyes which combined with his blonde hair makes him look like an American, which is enough to alienate him in Japan, contrary to popular beliefs, although Japanese emulate our culture, as a whole, they look down on us, calling us Gaijin or Yankees. There is no reason to go through ALL this BS of having people hate Naruto for no logical reason and it ruins the story, because your characters are behaving in an illogical manner. While this would be common in places like the US (and I'm saying this AS an American), the Japanese youth are far too intelligent to get swept up in some pathetic bandwagon. Don't get me wrong, there are kids in Japan just as stupid as in America, but as a whole, Japanese kids are brought up a lot different than ours.

Secondly, your choices for women is also cliche. I love Saeko as a character, I really do, BUT Saeko is a FAKE, she hides her true nature from everyone else, only eventually revealing it to Takashi, but everyone else still thinks she's the demure daughter of Busujima, completely ignorant of her hidden bloodlust. While I LIKE that side of Saeko, the bottom line is EVERYONE uses the excuse of Naruto saying he 'Hates people who lie to themselves' as a reason to belittle the NaruSaku community, if that's the case, then he would DESPISE Saeko because she is lying to herself, but NOOOOOOO everyone ignores that because Saeko is a fan favorite. I don't mind if people want to pair Saeko with Naruto, but be fair about it, don't say Naruto hates Sakura because she 'lies to herself' and then he's completely cool with Saeko being the same way, it makes their relationship seem fake.

Rei is also another cliche, EVERYONE HATES Rei Miyamoto, for NO OTHER REASON than she 'did Takashi wrong'? How did she do Takashi wrong? The story clearly indicated she TRIED to get Takashi's attention, but HE was too busy playing at being a 'Bad Boy', so she got tired and went to Hisashi. Additionally, when Rei was going through problems, Shido not only holding her back, but driving her father into depression, what did Takashi do? He BELITTLED her, instead of asking 'what happened', he made it out like she screwed up? What kind of boyfriend does that shit?! If my girlfriend was a straight A student and was suddenly held back, I'd be suspicious, and if I found out a teacher was fucking with her, I'd be up in his face telling him to back off before he dealt with me, you know why? Because Takashi could get away with that, he's a minor, he can punk Shido out and Shido can't do anything about it because of the law. Instead Takashi belittled his supposed dream girl after ignoring her advances, so yes, the worm got what he deserved when Rei chose to be with their MUTUAL best-friend instead of the boy whom ignored and belittled her. Also, contrary to popular beliefs, the relationship between Rei and Hisashi was relatively recent in the events of the series. Takashi confronted Rei about failing THAT year, which started probably mere weeks at most before the Outbreak, and she didn't start dating Hisashi until AFTER that confrontation, which shows Takashi probably crushed whatever faith she had in him when he belittled her for something that ULTIMATELY wasn't her fault, how's she supposed to take that?! Really, REI MIYAMOTO and Yuki Miku are my favorite HoTD characters, because they're the most realistic. They ACT like girls their age would act, they're not a super swordsman yandere like Saeko (which is an anime cliche at its best) or a spoiled super genius tsundere like Saya, they are actual high school girls with high school issues and their own unique personalities.

I don't care if you DON'T want Naruto paired with these girls, that's your choice, and there's OTHER ways of making them not paired with Naruto that doesn't come off ridiculously illogical, but don't hate on them just because everyone in the fandom hates them, that makes you nothing more than some dumbass trendy asshole who jumps on the bandwagon, and really, it makes the story suck. You want a GOOD HotD Naruto crossover, look at Shadow Wolf's 'Viral Infection and Deadly Outbreak', while the whole martial arts Naruto in the disciplinary squad is a bit fictitious, the interactions and portrayals of the core characters, like Kyoko, Rei, and Saeko are much more realistic than your story.

I’m surprised no one said “if these accusations are true, why had Naruto never been arrested or tried for these things?” They would form a sea of surprised Pikachu.

Resident Evil 6 zombies? Really? Well props for being inventive.

I find it heavily ironic that in their utter defence of all things Naruto, they've become exactly like Shido's little cult of fangirls. If anything they are just as insane as Shido's groupie. The only difference being that Naruto didn't try to get one. Kind of makes them more sad if you think about it.

Algo que no me quedo claro es lo de los bigotes si ni siquiera es el naruto original por dios siempre hacen esa mierda :v siempre la cagan con eso :v la verdad es que se ve raro si es en un anine diferente por ejemplo hotd ya que todos son humanos normales y como no es el naruto original no tiene sentido que tenga esa mierda siempre hacen esta cagada los escriputos :v

I don't see the point of calling him naruto if it's an alternate universe with an oc/ooc character that uses the kenjutsu style from rurouni kenshin.

Might as well have made him and hinata OCs completely instead of calling it a cross over. The only crossover here is with names and looks, but ability and character are very non naruto verse. They don't even use chakra so it just makes no sense to list this as a cross over.

That said. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Just keep in mind for future works that looks and names don't make cross overs

she's so obsessed with Naruto

That is not how the hymen works, you should probably do some research next time just to be safe. Really great though. )

it's probably the most dispensable Naruto's harem I've ever read!

Takashi x Misuzu? really? while they never had the slightest feeling or relationship in the manga?
Why not Takashi x Rei or Saya?

I have the impression that you have forced the relationship between these two, as if you didn't want to forget Takashi giving ALL the girls to Naruto!

disappointing to see that as soon as there are three pretty girls, the Naruto's fanboys can't help but systematically give a harem to their favorite hero!
I love harems stories, but Naruto is so overused that it gets overdose or rather I should say Narutoverdose lol

the only good point I will put to this story is that unlike other Naruto x Hotd stories, Takashi is present!

Please do Daimao Demon King x Naruto

like XD

Just so you know that dumb feminine fury thing isn't funny, it just makes naruto look like a cuck.

dear writer please make more chapters

Wowsers! This is AWESOME ending and I love IT!

Great story man. I wish you well in any future stories that you do.