Yay! Merlin got rescued! Great fic, thanks for taking the time to write this!

Yep, I suspected Merlin got caught for snooping. Now I’m really worried about all these randomly captured prisoners. At first I thought maybe they all had magic but they don’t have any special restraints. Now I’m thinking blood sacrifices? Slaves? No idea.

Interesting start to a story. I’m curious to find out how Merlin got nabbed and why. Normally I’d guess snooping. I’m more curious about his fellow prisoners. They seem on odd choice of captives altogether. Can’t wait to read more!

Oh Merlin, Merlin, Merlin. He always gets himself into a predicament.
Excellent starting chapter.

Interesting!

Brilliant.

Good description of his confusion and disorientation.

A couple of things. How come Arthur hasn't asked Gwaine and the other close knights to investigate? A king wouldn't do it by himself. He should have his own network of spies.
Merlin has the power to distract, if not destroy the kidnappers while he helps the other captives escape.
Otherwise, this is very well written.

This is very good. The mystery deepens.

Clever boy, Merlin!
I like how you wrote Arthur's worry.

Merlin's mouthy. Funny.

oh Merlin please don't die.

I really feel that for all your hard work, you deserve at least some sort of suggestion or criticism. Unfortunately, I can't offer you that so I will give you the second best thing. This is a lovely story. I like the plot, I like the characterization, and I like the grammar quality. Thank you.

Very nice, the way Merlin talks to Aron. And I love your disclaimer: DISCLAIMER: I'm not even a legal adult yet, of course I don't own Merlin.

It amazes me that so many young people can write so well. Fan fiction is a great way to hone your skills!

Good story, and good explanation for why Merlin allows himself to remain captive.