Reviews for A jump through time
Roxhall1 chapter 6 . 7/31
the baby should have stayed ... she got a bad death, she didn't deserve that.. if Charlie went with her he could have helped sort Mikeal out, maybe even finding his soulmate there in Niklaus's father's pack.. just wondering... poor baby though, wish she had stayed and not of went with Bella. she could of been in hiding with someone maybe even the grandmother and existing in a parallel time line or something instead of dying like she did.
katraj0908 chapter 17 . 5/23
Who kills a child off!? What!?
Roxhall1 chapter 23 . 5/13
Please make more Bella time traveling stories like the ones you write(like this one with Bellaother characters). Really love reading them!
andrewpine chapter 18 . 12/12/2019
She is the most mature person in the story.
Hard to see the reason for her death.
andrewpine chapter 17 . 12/12/2019
Why?
andrewpine chapter 15 . 12/12/2019
Ansel.
When will daddy rear his ugly head and try to cause trouble for Bella and the family?
Will he be the one to die when he shows up again?
I guess he can't get into the village otherwise I believe he would have tried to get to Bella already.
Esther needs to give the people the potion soon.
andrewpine chapter 11 . 12/12/2019
From what I have read about Vikings they weren't assholes like Mikael when it came to their wives or women overall. he is just a prick.
andrewpine chapter 10 . 12/11/2019
Shooting...
Maybe Bella can make it that Mikael dies in this past.
andrewpine chapter 5 . 12/11/2019
Ponder...
Thick...
Why would she take the baby with her if she plans on being him back?
If she is going back in time she should not have to go back very far to save him just a couple days before the party then they would know what was going to happen and be prepared for the attack.
jaspersmate81 chapter 15 . 8/14/2019
Amazing story! I love it. So creative! To answer your question about Klaus's birth father's name. In the show his name is Ansel. He was the pack alpha. Keep up with the excellent work!
Guest chapter 23 . 6/23/2019
I LOVVVVVE IT
crazyKate92 chapter 23 . 3/20/2019
I wish there were more good Bella/Klaus stories. I love the pairing.
crazyKate92 chapter 23 . 3/20/2019
Great story! I loved reading it!
crazyKate92 chapter 17 . 3/20/2019
Thats really sad.
The Doctor Rose chapter 23 . 2/13/2019
BRAVO!
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