Dang . . . Jack is really concerned for Elsa. She doesn't know how to control her powers, much less end the winter slumber that has befallen Arendelle. I bet if Jack Frost wanted to, he could've unfroze Arendelle. I mean, come on! . . .They both have the same powers, so there's no doubt that he could unfreeze everything.

I hope you make more pages out of this story . . . soon.

Oh, man. . . Jack Frost is the one person that Elsa trusts as her friend, and with him gone, there would be no one to protect her, much less teach her how to control her powers.

Whoa . . . Now someone helps Elsa to control her powers. And my gosh, who better in the world to do this than the Spirit of Winter himself, Jack Frost?

Must be more of a privilege, because an actual entity spirit- It's Jack-freaking-Frost!- is helping her master her powers.

Woah . . .

Elsa's got a new friend watching over her. . . And none other than Jack Frost, the Spirit of Winter.

Add more! You need to continue it PLEASE!

The story is good. But some of the geography mentioned is very... inaccurate.

I would make an movie between them too

Please? 'w'

UPDATEBTHIS SOON TT

Please Update Soon!

It's "We'll reverse the storm you've made", "We'll make the sun shine bright", and "we can change this winter weather".

It's 'I am one with the wind and sky".

It's "I'm somewhere in that zone".

It should be "and now we're not".

Seriously one of the best fanfics ever. It kills me that its not finished! D;