This is one of my favourite fics, it's perfect. You are an amazing writer. I come back to it again and again.

While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain on this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as WattPad or AdultFanfiction.

what a beautiful writing style ! i love that !
sorry for the errors i am french
i like you

That...was the BEST EFFING LEMON I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE.
*BANGS HEAD ON THE WALL - UGHHHHHH* I DON'T HAVE WORDS, BUT NO, IT'S THE BEST. THE BEST FREAKING SEX I'VE EVER READ. THAT WAS INCREDIBLE. AMAZING. WHY THIS DOESN'T HAVE ABOUT 1000 FAVORITES AND PEOPLE BEGGING YOU TO WRITE MORE, I DON'T KNOW BUT IT'S A MASTERPIECE.
You're a spectacular writing. Damn it, thank you for the wonderful writing and all the hard work. *bows* I'm sorry for the outburst. It truly was amazing though - I wish I had more I could say.

If that isn't a perfect lemon then i'm a monkey's uncle. Amazing cudos to you :)

ME ENCANTA! :D

One of the best stories i ever read. Great job!

100% absolutely positively adored it. You have immense talent to the point that I am envious yet awed. Don't change anything. It was perfect.