Reviews for Desire
Kenyatta.harmon16 chapter 1 . 3/3
Write a sequel please.
barbequeman chapter 1 . 12/5/2019
pls update
Katsura Miyoshi chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
Are you going to write more? Please say yes. This was too much of a cliffhanger for you to say no.
Bob chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
Please update this. It's really good compared to all the others.
kewllewk chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
tease.
Ghost of Meat chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
You should just write a second chapter and finish this out.
uzuuchi007 chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Nice
Have a Little Feith chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
This is almost exactly like another fic, a Naruto fic with the "pairing" (unofficial form, the one where it's just the characters, and no brackets) is Naruko U. and Kushina U. It happens almost the exact same way, too, with Naruko getting fingered at the dinner table.
EndGame666 chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
While I am glad to see this taken up, it is still bad taste to not give credit to JustMessingWithYou even if he/she just dropped the story.
murdrax chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
wow are you going to continue this so hot!
imawesome101 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Continue
Dault3883 Barron Backslash chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
i hope you do a follow up chapter
Mamberu chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Really? Mommy's precious toy, but with name changes?