Naruto's Evil Twin

Yes, this is a sequel to that little fic I made called...Naruto Gone Wild...anyways...guess what? It turns out Naruto has an evil twin brother! Oh no! And he wants to make poor Naruto suffer...

Can Naruto stop him and thwart his crazy plans? And what could he possibly be planning? You'll find out in due time...

Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

It had been one month since Konohamaru had decided to play with a ray gun that brainwashed genin into doing rather absurd and utterly hilarious things. Since then, Konohagakure was now back to normal, though some of the genin had changed in personality as a result of the events that occurred because of the mischief Konohamaru caused.

For example, Konohamaru himself had become much more mature, due to the fact that Tsunade had made him do community service as punishment for his horrible crimes against humanity. Well, OK, maybe that was an exaggeration...but anyways, he was now volunteering to do many more D-Rank missions...and he was doing surprisingly well.

"Is it just me, or has your nephew really grown since he started zapping people with that ray gun?" inquired Kurenai.

"I know...it feels so weird. Ah well, it's time for him to clean my house." answered Asuma.

"He's cleaning your house?" inquired the kunoichi.

"Yes, surprisingly enough, he is. See, right now he's wiping the windows." said the jonin.

"That's sweet of him." answered Kurenai.

Hinata had also changed for the better as well. Thanks to the fact that Konohamaru had made her run around wearing a swimsuit, she was now a lot more popular among the other genin in Konoha. As a result, she was now much less shy, and spent much more of her time training than before. In fact, she had become the strongest member of her ninja team...excluding Kurenai herself, of course.

"That ray gun worked surprisingly well for me..." thought Hinata.

Ino had also changed as well, though it had to do with Choji being hit by the ray gun instead of her. She found out that she had a surprisingly large appetite...and for whatever reason, no matter how much she eat, it had no effect on her figure. She was a lucky girl.

And to make matters better, due to the fact that the Yakiniku Q manager had savagely attacked them on the one occasion they had forgotten to pay the bill, Tsunade had sentenced him to give them free food every time they paid the restaurant a visit.

Suffice to say, she had a perfect opportunity to have an eating contest with Choji...which she was currently having.

Interestingly enough, three genin had also participated in the eating contest with her...and unfortunately, they had all passed out from food poisoning. Ino and Choji both felt a little guilty.

Nonetheless, they decided to finish what they started...it was a rather close contest, but in the end...

Choji went to the bathroom and puked.

"I guess I win...huh, never knew I had it in me." thought Ino.

"It's not like you could ever beat me at shogi..." retorted Shikamaru.

"You wanna bet?" inquired the psychic kunoichi.

"Nah, I'm going to have a nap." answered the boy.

"Suit yourself. I just hope Choji's going to be OK..." said Ino.

"He'll be fine." answered Shikamaru as he went to get some sleep.

Naruto himself hadn't been affected considerably as a result of the ray gun, though he did wonder why Hinata had tried flirting with him after Konohamaru had struck her with it.

Eventually he decided to give her a visit. As it turns out, she was busy helping Kurenai teach students at the ninja academy.

"Hi, Hinata!" greeted Naruto.

"Hi, Naruto!" greeted back Hinata.

"So, what are you up to?" inquired the genin.

"Oh, I'm helping Kurenai teach students the importance of teamwork by doing a play...in fact, Shino and Kiba are helping her too." said Hinata.

"That's nice...good luck with that." supported Naruto.

"Thank you! You can watch the play too if you want." cheered Hinata.

"Isn't it for kids who want to become genin?" inquired the genin.

"Well, technically yes, but Kurenai said that since you're never too old to learn how essential teamwork is...everyone in Konoha is invited." answered the kunoichi.

"Oh...well count me in then!" exclaimed Naruto as he went to find an open seat.

As he sat down, he noticed that Konohamaru was also watching the play. Apparently he wanted to learn the importance of teamwork too. He just hoped that he hadn't built a ray gun and wouldn't be using it to sabotage the play. Fortunately, he had not.

Shortly afterwards, the play began to start. As it turns out, Asuma Saratobi was the narrator, as he promptly walked on stage.

"Greetings kids. Today we're going to teach you the importance of teamwork when it comes to going on missions and serving the community. Now, don't get me wrong...I'm sure that a lot of you would enjoy working together...nonetheless, we want to show you what happens when you don't cooperate with each other, just so you know how badly a mission can go wrong when you don't. Mind you, it's going to be depressing. Just wanted to let you know." said Asuma Sarutobi.

"Anyways, where was I? Ah yes...let me explain the story. You see, Konohagakure received a mission from Kirigakure regarding forcing their governor out of office." explained the jonin.

Sure enough, Might Guy came on stage to represent the said governor. Curiously enough, he was wearing a devil's costume. Apparently this was to make it obvious to the ninjas in the making that he was a bad guy.

"This particular governor is a bad man. He's been extracting huge amounts of taxes from Kirigakure...and he's almost impoverished it. And has he been spending it to make it a better place? No! He's been using it for personal gain. Not nice! Anyways, Kirigakure has had enough of his embezzlement...so we've sent Team 8 to take care of things."

Sure enough, Team 8 arrived on stage, and all four of them entered fighting poses.

"Unfortunately, the mission's not going to be easy. Not only is said governor a fairly powerful ninja, he's also hired a bunch of thugs to keep him safe. Apprehending him isn't going to be an easy task...nonetheless, Team 8 has a pretty good chance of succeeding if they all work together to bring him to justice. But unfortunately they're not going to work together...and well, it's going to end badly. Now sit back and watch." explained Asuma as he and Might Guy left the stage.

Sure enough, a chunin arrived on stage to represent one of the evil embezzler's thugs.

"Uh-oh! It looks like one of the governor's thugs has spotted Team 8 entering the building! Fortunately Kurenai reacts quickly and traps the henchman in a genjutsu."

Kurenai promptly put on some hypno-goggles and pretended to mesmerize the chunin...and sure enough, he pretended to fall asleep.

"Her students take advantage of the situation and promptly dogpile the sleeping ninja...it works wonders, and suffice to say he won't be causing them trouble anymore. Very good. Unfortunately, things start to go downhill from here."

Suddenly, another chunin walked on stage.

"What's this? Oh no! It looks like another of the governor's thugs has heard the commotion and has come to investigate. It looks like Team 8 is going to battle him too."

As before, Kurenai pulled out some hypno-goggles and pretended to hypnotize the minion with her genjutsu. However, this time Shino pulled out a foghorn...and as soon as the chunin had been hypnotized, he promptly began to use it to make lots of noise.

"Kurenai has once again trapped her opponent in a genjutsu...but what's this? Oh no! It looks like Shino is making lots of noise. This isn't a good idea if your ally's using genjutsu on your foes, kids. You run the risk of making your enemy come to their senses."

Sure enough, the chunin woke up and gave Shino a light tap on the head with a baseball bat. He promptly pretended to be woozy, but shortly afterwards he shook his head.

"Oh no! Not only has the genjutsu become undone, the enemy ninja has managed to strike Shino...fortunately, he is OK. Unfortunately, this is only a sign for what's going to come."

"Thankfully, Kurenai and the rest of Team 8 managed to subdue the ninja...they they continued to search for the offending governor."

The chunin promptly collapsed on the ground, and a couple of jonin promptly lowered the curtains and changed the background before raising it once more.

The students must have been paying attention, because all of a sudden they began to worry about what was going to happen to Team 8. Asuma Sarutobi had told them beforehand that the story wasn't going to end well.

Interestingly enough, Naruto was sucked into it. Apparently he thought the story was awesome even though it was meant for children rather than teens. Of course, then again, so was his apprentice Konohamaru.

"We now continue our story as Kurenai and Team 8 resume their mission to save Kirigakure. This time there are two of the governor's thugs waiting for them. This is going to be a bit more tricky."

Sure enough, there were two chunin standing on stage. As before, Kurenai and Team 8 got into fighting poses. Well, most of them did this time.

"Hmm, that's weird...one of them doesn't seem to be fighting...what's this? Oh no! One of them is sleeping on the job!"

Sure enough, Hinata was lying on the ground snoring.

"This is a bad idea, kids. You should always help your teammates as much as you can whenever you're on a mission. You never know what you might find...and it could endanger them too!"

Kurenai promptly shook Hinata awake.

"Thankfully, Kurenai managed to wake Hinata...but guess what? Kiba and Shino both ended up being injured trying to fight the thugs. Oh dear! Maybe if Hinata had helped them fight then this wouldn't have happened."

Sure enough, Kiba and Shino had managed to take out the two thugs, but they both put band-aids on their faces. Kurenai shook Hinata awake.

"After that fiasco, Team 8 resumed their search for the governor. Sure enough, they managed to find where he was hiding."

Naruto at this point was eating some delicious ramen to go with the play since he loved it so much. Konohamaru was having some too.

As before, there was a background change...and this time Team 8 were right in front of the entrance of the governor's office. It was unsurprisingly full of riches...riches that the governor had obviously spent using the ryo his citizens had given him. Three chunin were standing in front of the door.

"It looks like their mission is coming to a close...they've reached the governor's office and will be able to fight him soon enough. All that's left before then is to take out the goons standing in front of his office and then the big man himself. Unfortunately, this is where things start to go very, very wrong."

Naruto promptly gulped.

This time, only Kurenai entered a fighting pose. Her students unfortunately did not get ready. In fact, they all started doing their own thing.

"Oh no! It looks like Kurenai's going to have to fight the governor's henchmen by herself...not good!"

Sure enough, Kurenai started sparring with the chunin with herself. She promptly pretended to become exhausted.

"Oh dear...it appears that she's having a hard time taking on all those thugs by her lonesome. If only her teammates would give her a hand. Sadly, they are not."

One of the chunin promptly attached a sticker to Hinata's cheek.

"Oh no! It appears that one of the thugs has attached a paper bomb to Hinata! And she hasn't even noticed! Again, this is why you need to pay attention."

A cloud of smoke appeared to represent the paper bomb going off.

"Oh no! The paper bomb exploded right on Hinata's cute little face! Sadly, that was too much for her to handle, and the poor girl pushes up daisies."

Hinata promptly grasped her hands around her throat and she collapsed to the ground feigning death.

Naruto looked at Konohamaru, and noticed a tear leaving his eye.

"What a disaster! Poor Hinata's now six feet under...and it looks like Kurenai's going to have to call off the mission and tell her clan the bad news. But in order to do that, she'll have to make a getaway first."

Suddenly, Might Guy came out of his office...unsurprisingly, he was still wearing the devil's suit.

"Oh no! It looks like the governor has heard the commotion and has decided to assist his comrades in battle! This is the worst-case scenario kids! If only the genin had assisted Kurenai when they had the chance...maybe that way they could have finished the mission without a single one of them getting killed...but sadly, they did not."

Kurenai promptly put on the hypno-goggles once more and mesmerized the three henchmen along with the governor himself. Unfortunately, Shino once again pulls out a foghorn and undoes the jitsu.

"In a desperation move, Kurenai uses the strongest genjutsu she's got in order to trap the three thugs so that she can escape and head back to Konohagakure...but guess what? Shino pulled out a foghorn again and made all four of them come back to their senses! What a tragedy...and to think it could have been so easily avoided, too!"

"And guess what else! Kiba hasn't been paying attention this whole time! He's been busy looking at all the valuable objects the governor has outside of his office and hasn't even noticed that one of his teammates has gotten killed...what was he thinking? I'm afraid this is going to be their last mission, kids!"

Konohamaru promptly pulled out a handkerchief.

"The three thugs immediately kunai at Shino, and all three of them hit him in the chest. He sadly gives up the ghost."

The three chunin threw a few rotten tomatoes at Shino, and he promptly collapsed to the floor.

"As for the governor himself, he uses a powerful water jitsu on both Kurenai and Kiba...and well, they both kick the bucket."

Might Guy reached his hands forward, and a jonin poured a bucket of water on the remaining duo... and Kurenai and Kiba both collapsed on the floor as two jonin lowered the curtains.

"And Team 8 were sadly wiped out thanks to their incompetence." narrated Asuma as he came back on stage.

Several of the students started crying. Why did they all have to die?

"So what did we learn kids? Lots of things...but two things primarily...first things first...don't deactivate your friend's genjutsu! A genjutsu is not only a great form of defense...it can be used to provide an opportunity to attack! Sadly Shino was not interested in that and thought that it would be fun to undo the genjutsu techniques Kurenai used. This sadly led to him being killed in action."

Konohamaru promptly blew on his tissue.

"More importantly, work as a team! If Team 8 had all worked together and listened to Kurenai...well, they would have succeeded in their mission and saved Kirigakure from the financial disaster that the governor had brought upon them. But sadly, he's still out there leeching off his own city."

"So kids, I hope that you work together in the future...and that you don't make the same mistakes Team 8 and Kurenai did...that's it for today kids. See you tommorrow." said Asuma as he left the stage.

A few minutes later...

"Way to go Hinata...that was an awesome play! Are you going to be participating in another play in the future?" questioned Naruto.

"Thanks Naruto...er, about that...Asuma said that he was going to get Team 10 to perform another play, actually..." answered Hinata.

"Funny...I never really thought that you would participate in a play..." said the genin.

"Yeah..me neither...that ray gun Konohamaru built worked surprisingly well for me though. Nowadays every genin showers me with praise every time I show up...it feels kind of weird...and well, I just started to feel more comfortable in public." answered the kunoichi.

"Yeah...I heard that nowadays he's doing a ton of favors to the community...I guess he feels guilty about what he's done and has decided to make up for it, huh?" inquired Naruto.

"Mm-hmm...I'm just glad he didn't zap you...you might have become a bloodthirsty psychopath or something." noted Hinata.

"Yeah...that wouldn't be fun. Anyways, I'm heading home to enjoy a delicious bowl of ramen. See you later!" said Naruto as he headed back to his apartment.

"I wish I could share a bowl of ramen with him..." thought Hinata.

Sure enough, Naruto went home so that he could enjoy some ramen...but on the way there...he got the strange feeling that someone was watching him.

"Huh? Is someone there?" thought the genin.

Immediately, he began to feel a bit nervous as he headed back to his apartment. Thankfully, things were otherwise uneventful...until he arrived in his room and noticed that there was a letter waiting for him.

"A letter? Who left this here? I thought I had a mailbox..." noted the boy.

Curious, he decided to see what it said, and he promptly gasped in shock.

Dear Naruto,

Hey there bro! Today's the day you're going to lose everything! I'm going to devour your ramen and run off with your sweetheart! Do not try to resist, for it is futile! Mwahahaha!

P. S: Believe it!

Sincerely,

Your Evil Twin, Oturan

"What?! My evil twin's going to steal my food?! And he's going to kiss Sakura?! I'm going to lose everything?! Oh man this is bad! I've got to warn Tsunade immediately!" bellowed Naruto.

And so he ran off to tell the Fifth Hokage the bad news.

Just when things have finally settled in Konohagakure, it looks like there's another threat that's come up...for some strange reason, it turns out Naruto has an evil twin that wants to make his life miserable. Poor guy.

Anyways, you'll find out more in due time...and yes, for some strange reason, Oturan's name is Naruto's name spelled backwards. I guess his deceased parents got a bit lazy. Ah well.

See ya later!