We had to rewrite this chapter. So this is the reuploaded one.
THE LAST CHAPTER EVERYONE!
Thank you for sticking with us the last 29 chapters, there were some gags we didn't use as they required Cometblaze to return at an earlier date. (Cometblaze and Lunarmoon becoming capable of turning into twolegs. A scene where Cometblaze is in a lack bathing and singing 'Rubber Ducky, your my one, you make bathtime lots of fun', oh and Stonekit and Ebonykit (Wait, they're apprentices now) showing off their 'awesome' powers.) But hey, we ended it here.
I think you guys will be satisfied with this chapter, for those who are reading Cometblazes story too; it has Lionclaw.
But thank you to everyone who's read, everyone who's reviewed and thank you everyone for all the support in this story. For dealing with the stupidity that is Lunarmoon and so on.
Your reviews were awesome and they made our day because of just how awesome and funny they were each time. So thank you.
It was two days after the strange fire had attacked the clans. Now, while Nightclan was rebuilding it's clan, Lunarmoon was going to the Shiny Stone to get her nine lives and officially become Lunarstar even though she already was Lunarstar.
It was about time that someone as awesome as her became leader.
She also probably didn't have to worry about dealing with those loesrs and meanies Blueflame, Echopaw and Grimheart even though she killed Grimheart. No one would attack a cat on her way to get her nine lives and become the awesome savior of the clans.
Lunarmoon was happy to be able to go to the Shiny Stone with just her and her shiny teeth, her perfect glossy dark purple almost black pelt and her perfectly manicured hot pink claws.
"This is the best day of my life!" she said with joy as she jumped and moved.
All around her, animals were bowing down to show respect to the new Nightclan leader and they should because she was the new Nightclan leader.
She began whistling as she walked, "What makes me happy~ Fills me up with glee~ Those bones in my jaw, don't have a flaw, my shiny teeth and me~" she said as she pranced along the shore of the lake on her way to the Shiny Stones.
"My shiny teeth and me!" she laughed as she moved, "My teeth are just perfect!"
Soon, she reached the shiny stone; it was a very shiny stone on the ground where she could talk to Starclan and get those nine lives finally.
She stepped over to the shiny shiny stone and pressed her nose against the stone and closed her eyes.
Suddenly she was in StarClan!
"Greetings, Lunarstar," Kitsunestar said smiling as he walked over to the new leader, "It's great to know you have finally managed to become a leader."
"It's a bout time too," Lunarmoon said proudly as a group of cats appeared around her and were about to start giving her their lives when suddenly...
A blur of red rammed into her, knocking her away from the cats giving her lives!
"What?" Lunarmoon demanded and looked up letting out a shriek of surprise.
"COMETBLAZE?!" She screeched, "You're suppoed to be in the Dark Forest!" He was supposed to be in the Place of No Stars! What was he doing in StarClan? He wasn't a good cat, he shouldn't have been in there!
Behind him was a large, broadshouldered tabby golden brown tom and several large battle ready cats.
"Lionclaw is here to fufill his destiny and kill you," the tabby say.
Kitsunestar stepped forward in shock, "Lionclaw!" She cried out in betrayal, "What is my loyal deputy doing here?!"
"STOPPING LUNARMOON BITCH!" Lionclaw roared tacking Kitsunestar, the cats behind him began attacking the cats with Kitsune star while Cometblaze stood in front of Lunarmoon.
"Cometblaze, you're supposed to be dead!" Lunarmoon shouted in shock.
The red tom rolled his eyes, "I know, I mean just the other day I was playing cards with a couple of two legs; one with horns, red skin and a tail, and another with a large wild mesh of white fur on his chin. I was just about to win like a few hundred dollars!" he then gave a wide smirk, "But then I was told I have to finish you off before I can relax in any grave. So what am I going to do? Im going to kill you!"
He charged at her in a blur of red, faster than anyone should have been capable of moving. He rammed into Lunarmoon and she felt the air go out of her chest.
"Like it? That Naverok guy said I should live up to my name. So now I'm able to move like a comet!" he boasted as he rammed into her again.
After the third hit, Lunarmoon woke up with a start.
Her eyes were wide and wild with anger and spotted her red furred and red eyed brother looking at her with a sly smirk on his face, letting out a loud battle cry, she opened her mouth to unleash the attack that killed him the first time;
"FUS RO DAH ASSHOLE!" She shrieked as the blast knocked her brother into a stone wall, she watched as he gasp and spat out blood, crumpling to the ground in a limp dead body.
Lunarmoon smirked, that was too easy! "You really should have stayed dead brother, I Don't want to have to hurt you again. But you're already dead now," she said shaking her head with a sad smile on her face. Oh well, she defeated him twice now, she can go get her nine lives now.
"SHUT UP!" He shouted and suddenly a hot flame shot out of his mouth, Lunarmoon barely got out of the way in time!
Looking wide eyed at her pelt, she let out a screech of pure fury.
HE HAD BURNT HER FUR!
"YOU WILL PAY FOR THAT COMETBLAZE!" Lunarmoon shouted charging towards her brother, shooting a blast of golden light at him.
Cometblaze used his comet speed to get out of the way and pin down, "Oh, did I burn your fur? I'm sorry, I should get the other side too!" He sneered before doing just that sending his sister into an even greater rage.
"STOP BURNING MY FUR!" She shouted as she used her powers to make Cometmoon float and smash into the ground leaving a crater below him. But he retaliated by sending a twister of fire at Lunarmoon. She easily deflected it using awesome powers of fire destroyer to take out the flames and tackled her brother.
He got out of her grip and let out an angry roar, suddenly he was growing! He was soon larger than the lion they had fought! The fur down his back up to his shoulders and chest down to his shoulders were shaggyier then the rest, his canines had grown long and sharp. He had a bit of fur on his chin that looked like a beard! The whites of his eyes had turned black and his red eye became redder! His claws unsheathed to show large black claws.
He towered over Lunarmoon letting out a savage laughter, he was no longer a cat but a demon cat!
"Two can play this game!" Lunarmoon shouted biting her paw, a flash of white and soon she was twice as big as Cometblaze! Her body still had a perfect figure, her fur was bright purple and her teeth were hsarper. Her eyes were glowing green and she still looked more beautiful and even had a diamond studded collar around her neck. She was now a Titan!
The two let out roars as Cometblaze rushed forward, jumping onto her back but Lunarmoon rolled onto her back.
After hours of fighting in their monster forms, the two reverted back to their cat forms and stood across from each other before suddenly...they began glowing with raw and raw power! Their glows were different colors!
Cometblaze began to glow a bright red, his red eyes glowing with the evil and darkness that he was looking like blood mist. His glow even showed he was evil, only evil people glow red!
But Lunarmoon was glowing a bright and pure blue, the symbol of good! Her green eyes turned pure white as she began to levitate.
Suddenly a large explosion was at the Shiny stone from the two powers colliding!
The clans approached them, and let out mournful cries at the sight before them! Lunarmoon lied on the ground, her body broken and bloodied from the destruction but she had succeeded! Cometblaze laid on the stone his body limp, he was dead.
But so was Lunarmoon.
She had fulfilled her destiny, but died in the process.
Alright. this is the last chapter. Cometblazes' spinoff might go a little farther than this. Hell, in his spinoff it'll probably go; Cometblaze had finally killed Lunarmoon, but it was at the cost of his own life.
But yeah, Lunarmoon became a titan cat in the end (SNK) and Cometblaze was a demon cat.
Hey lets do a sin counter but using the rules from the Warrior Code that are broken;.
1. Loyalty must remain to your clan, may make friendships with cats of different clans but nothing more (Lunarstars two mates; Snakefang and Phoenixblaze)
2. Do not Trespass onto Another Clans Territory.
3. Elders, Queens, Kits must be fed before Apprentices and Warriors.
4. A Kit must be at least 6 moons old to be an apprentice (Exception is Tornadokit, Floodkit and Bearkit who are over sixmoons old and still kits. Are they ever going to become apprentices?)
5. Newly appointed warriors will keep a silent vigil for one night after receiving their warrior name.
6. A cat cannot be made deputy unless they have mentored at least one apprentice.
7. After the death or retirement of the deputy (Or rather the previous one become Clan Leader) a new deputy must be picked before moonhigh (Nightclan currently has no deputy and no leader.)
8. Boundries must be checked and marked daily, challenge any trespassing cat (The other clans didn't care much whenever Lunarmoon crossed the boarder)
9. No warrior can neglect a kit even if from a different clan. (Remember how Grimheart died as a kit?)
10. A honorable warrior does not need to kill another cat to win their battle. (Cometblazes death being knocked off a cliff, Lunarmoons attempted kill of doing the same to Grimheart.)
Now that's 10 of the 15 rules broken.
Now, she was the queen of hypocrisy, not only a liar and she didn't even seem to realize she was lying. Lunarmoon was just that dumb.