this is my first fanfiction, i'm so nervous even tought i know it sucks. but i want to know your opinion so i can decide if i'll continue it or not ^^ i'm waiting for your opinions and reviews
This story consists of characters half wolf, basically humans with wolf ears and tail. They live in a society like humans. But they have a social order as wolves. Determined from birth, being alphas the highest and omegas the lowers.
Alphas and omegas.
It was a normal morning like any other in the small neighborhood of peach- creck, Kevin slowly walked his way to school taking time to admire the beauty of the environment around him. Birds sang beautiful melodies and the morning wind blew gently against the branches of the trees causing a soothing sound that accompanied the path of the young redhead.
The boy sighed, seeing that he was already at the door of his destination. He adjusted the straps of his backpack and pushed the door to enter the property. As always the place looked deserted, the young green-eyed was always one of the first to make his way into the place, since apparently almost no student was attracted to the idea of studying and learning. He went to his locker to take the books he needed for his classes before he would be heading to the classroom. He took his small notebook to see what was the first class that day immediately raising a smile, waving his tail with obvious enthusiasm.
Without wasting time returned to make his way, abruptly hitting someone. He stepped back and looked down surprised" s-sorry ..." the little omega apologized quickly.
" You do not have to apologize pumpkin " said a voice that young knew very... Very well. A shiver ran through his spine while his eyes whent up to look at the person of his nightmares. There before him stood an alpha. 'The' alpha to be exact.
Eddward Vincent was an alpha, but not any alpha. He was the top of the alphas, the 'leader' of the school. Champion in sports and swim team captain. Nicknamed ' the shark ' by all who knew him.
"E – Edd!" exclaimed the smallest scared.
To his ears came the unmistakable laugh of the raven "oh no issues pumpkin. Today I did not come to beat you up. "Said the older teen as he waved his black tail softly. Leaving Kevin confused but before the child could utter a word the other continued" actually I came to ask you a... favor..."he said hesitantly "Today there is a swim meet at the gym. I'll See you there pumpkin. "After this the other simply walked away leaving Kevin even more confused. He had to admit that the other had a very ... peculiar way to ask a 'favor' as he so called, like if he implanted his authority over all ... God he was an alpha after all. Leader of birth. An top dog how some people would call him. Kevin sighed, once again he would have to do his role of omega and go to that competition.
Being an omega was the worst. Being in the lowest category meant that everyone passed over you, especially alphas. The little redhead was used to been growled at, pushed, and to the pull of tail and ears he received from others... It was always the same. No matter the day someone always showed him his place in the 'herd'.