Alright everyone, I have been gone for quite some time and I am now back and hoping to improve this story from the last version. I really don't thing the whole having wings is a good idea anymore. I hardly ever included them and it was just stupid to me. I am going to now give him the chakra chains his mother has and make those crimson instead of wings.

This story will be pretty much the same for the most part but I will tone down the harem by quite a bit. The only reason it was so huge in the first place is because I liked to read harem stories and just suddenly thought I could make my own, but it is definitely not that easy. I seriously give those writers huge props for pulling them off.

So I hope you guys enjoy this new version and hopefully I will have it fixed up and put back together.

"Kyuubi talking"

'Kyuubi Thinking'

"Regular Talking"

'Regular Thinking'

I don't own Naruto

Naruto The Crimson Chain Wielder

The ninja world is a far reaching mysterious place filled with people who have the ability to use an inner energy they called chakra. The people who wield this incredible energy are known as ninja, or shinobi. The world was filled with many clans, some of which had some incredible bloodline abilities that made these clans so famous. The Kaguya had the ability to make their own bones into weapons, the Uchiha had eyes that could read movements and copy jutsus, the Uzumaki had chakra chains and longevity.

The most famous of all, however, was the Senju clan with Hashirama as its head as the only known wielder of the wood release bloodline limit.

Clan wars were common in these legendary ninjas time and there was many deaths. That is until Hashirama and Madara Uchiha came together and formed a cease fire agreement and formed the first ever ninja village, Konohagakure. They settled down together and soon, other clans joined this village making other clans do the same in other villages.

Fire Country, Water Country, Wind country, Rock Country, and Lightning Country were all formed and the Hokage, Mizukage, Kazekage, Tsuchikage, and the Raikage each being the leader of their villages were chosen for their villages, the villages of Leaf, Mist, Sand, Rock, and Cloud respectively, were formed.

This is also the time when nine very powerful demons, all captured by Hashirama Senju himself were spread to the other villages to help to create peace among the world of Shinobi.

The people who contained these massive entities of raw demonic chakra, or youki, were called jinchuriki. The power of human sacrifice. They were seen as weapons for the most part and were hated for what they contained. Many were very fearful of them as they could not be controlled or beaten except by a few clans. The Uzumaki, Uchiha, and Hashirama Senju were the only ones known to be able to subdue them.

Fast forward about 150 years, the leaf village's fourth Hokage, Minato Namikaze and his wife Kushina Uzumaki were expecting their first son. A son they would call Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze. But Kushina was the jinchuriki of the nine tailed fox, Kyuubi no Kitsune, and her seal was getting weaker and weaker due to child birth.

"Your doing really good Kushi-chan." Spoke an average sized man at about 5 feet 10 inches tall with blond spiky hair and cerulean blue eyes.

"Shut up you bastard." Yelled a beautiful crimson haired woman with purple eyes. "You did this to me, you are never going to touch me again. Do you understand me." Right now she is in the process of giving birth to their son and needless to say, she was in pain.

Soon after crying was heard and Naruto was born, both parents couldn't be more happy. But just then the ANBU in the room fell down dead and the wife of the Sandaime Hokage was also killed.

"Step away from the Jinchuriki Yondaime." Spoke a man in an black cloak with an orange mask spoke with holding baby Naruto. "Move towards her and your son will die at the ripe age of 1 minute old."

Yondaime grit his teeth while Kushina teared up at what was happening. the Yondaime then moved away from her while the man then threw Naruto into the air making Minato catch him while throwing off his blanket due to it having been covered in exploding tags.

When he looked back, Kushina and the man were gone.

This event had been witnessed by the entire village, as the Kyuubi was released in the middle of the village causing panic and killing many people. In the end the demon was sealed within Naruto and both the Yondaime, Minato Namikaze and his wife Kushina Uzumaki were both killed.

Naruto was only given the last name Uzumaki to save him from the possible assassins from Iwa, as Minato had killed many of them during the last war. He was then put into the orphanage regardless of the fact that a few clans wanted to adopt him, these being the Hyuuga, the Inuzuka, and even the Uchiha. Each one of the clan heads, being good friends with the parents and were the only ones to know of the boy's true heritage.

This would be the very beginning of the story of Naruto Uzumaki, The Crimson Chain Wielder.

It was a special time for the Hidden Leaf Village as it was the 7th anniversary of the defeat of Kyuubi. A festival is thrown every year that almost everyone attends and spends time with their family and friends while have some drinks at the local bars. This day, also happens to be Naruto's birthday and one of the only things he fears.

Ever since he could remember he was hated and starved in the village. No one would treat him properly and they would hit him and throw things at him. No stores would allow him in and and because of that, he is almost skeleton like having no fat or muscles on his young body. He was also thrown out of the orphanage almost a year about at six years old. He is wearing some very worn and torn old pants on his skinny and weak legs. He isn't really wearing a shirt at all, it looks like an old children's blanket that he had sewn together with some materials he found.

Underneath his improvised shirt, you would see the countless cuts and scars that are all over his torso and arms. There is also a scar on his face that goes from the left side of his forehead down to right side of his cheek, he was lucky it didn't destroy his eyes though. There is another one on the left side of his lip that is straight down from the bottom of his nose to the middle area from the bottom lip to the chin.

He has golden blond hair that is untamed and spiky, that is now filled with dirt, if it were clean it would practically shine. He has beautiful blue eyes deeper than any sea. You can get lost in them if you truly looked into them, feeling his pain and loneliness, but also an unbreakable spirit and will to never give up and never run away. He also has three whisker like birth marks on each cheek.

He always wants to do the right thing and wants peoples' respect. He wants to end his suffering and wants to be strong enough to get their respect and help them. He wants friends and love more than anything and he will do whatever it takes. But for now, he is just focusing on surviving for another night, as he is running from a mob of angry villagers with pitchforks, torches, and various blunt and sharp weapons.

"Get back here demon!" screamed one of the lead villagers.

"We will kill you and avenge the fourth." Roared an angry female.

Why? I've been good and I've never harmed any of you!" Screamed the village's shunned hero.

This is the second ever mob he had to deal with, the first being on his 6th birthday, the day he was also kicked out of the orphanage. He was even abused there too as he didn't get enough food and he could never be allowed to have fun with the other kids. He was forced to sleep in a cellar on the cold and unforgiving ground. No blankets, no pillow... No warmth. He had cried himself to sleep many nights, desperately wanting warmth and someone to hold onto. He wasn't even taught how to read by the matrons, but the Sandaime Hokage had made some time for him and he was taught by him and was given some books to read.

He was actually a very smart kid and he was able to hide very well for his age and he could learn quickly and easily. For the last couple months he had been making traps and cooking animals he catches with herbs that he had read about. His trap making and patience were heightened and he was becoming very skilled.

He knew the village layout as good as he knew the back of his hand, but today was not his day it seems. The path he wanted to take was blocked off and there was no going back to the mob.

Looking back, showing no fear for his chasers he sees some chuunin in the mob and he never breaks eye contact with them. He waits, and is soon attacked.

The chuunin who Naruto had glared at came at him and started off the brutal beating with a chakra powered punch to his head. Naruto was sent into the wall hard and was dazed and in pain, with blood coming down from his mouth and dripping off his chin. the other ninja in the group start to throw kunai knives at him and they stick into his arms, chest, and legs, but not in lethal spots so they can prolong the torture. Naruto had grown used to this.

They then grab him, and hold him to the wall. "Hold him for a second Nanashi, lets stick him to the wall." A the first chuunin says venomously to his friend.

"Good plan, Hoheto." The newly named Nanashi replies. "Lets see how this feels you disgusting demon, I hope you rot in hell for killing my wife and son."

"But I didn't kill anyone, I want to protect you all and be a hero, please believe me... I don't want to hurt anymore." Our hero replies shakily from the pain but he refuses to cry.

"Shut up!" the jounin Hoheto screams as he plunges a kunai deep into both of his shoulders and into the wall effectively keeping him in place. He cries out in pain as he looks to the mob that is shouting some of the most cruel things anyone could think of while they being to beat him. Punches, kicks, bats, knives, hammers, and other weapons that the mob could get their hands on constantly hitting his small and weak body.

With his incredible will power, he is able to last much longer than any grown mad would be able to, but eventually he loses consciousness.

"Foolish humans," a voice growls out angrily, disgusted at the treatment of the boy. "How could they treat the boy like this. its not his fault that I, the Queen of the Bijus was sealed into his stomach."

'I will help you out, young Naruto-kun' the voice thinks to herself.

Naruto starts to stir after his torment and finds himself floating on the surface of a one foot deep sewer. Not knowing how he got there, he begins to look around in this dark and ominous room wondering what happened and where he is. "Where am I? Did the villagers finish torturing me and then they decided to throw me into some type of sewer." He spoke quietly. "I don't know why they treat me so badly and call me a demon, why? I'm a good boy and haven't hurt any of them like they say and I've never wanted to kill them or anything either, so why?" He asks again and thinking that he is all alone he starts to tear up a bit and lets a few tears fall down his whiskered cheeks.

"Don't cry little one." A booming voice speaks out, it sounds rough but there is some kindness in there that Naruto can pick up on. It sounded almost pained and that seemed to calm him down as he sat quietly. "Come over here" The voice suddenly speaks out again without warning and scares Naruto who can't see anything.

"Whose there? Where are you?" He asks slightly scarred as he starts to get into a sloppy defensive position as he would never allow himself to just give up and die.

The fox seeing this starts to frown, not wanting him to be defensive and hide himself from others who might want to be his friend. 'I cant believe the villagers did this to him, he shouldn't be like this he should be a happy little boy with lots of friends and people to love. Its truly a shame. she thinks sadly to herself, but then decides to speak to him. "Don't be scared little one, I promise I wont hurt you. Just follow my voice and you will find me."

Slightly re-assured Naruto starts to go to the last spot the voice was heard from only to see giant metal bars that look like a cage. They look like they go on forever up into the darkness that covers the entire ceiling. On one of the bars in the middle there is what looks to be a piece of paper that has what looks to him, a seal on it. But that is not what gets Naruto's attention. It is what is in the cage that got his undivided attention. Completely in dark with the floor just as flooded as every other spot sits a fox. Normally this would be no big deal, but this fox was different, with crimson fur, it has nine matching tails, matching eyes, teeth so sharp they look like they could easily pierce through steel, and was as tall as the Hokage monument. He instantly paled to a perfect white, not knowing that the fox was never evil at all.

"Wow..." He manages to murmur out in the presence of the great crimson fox. "Who are you" he asks with his heart threatening to explode in his chest, as he has a bit of an idea.

"I am the Kyuubi No Kitsune" the fox replies evenly while making eye contact and she becomes impressed when he returns it.

Naruto's face then scrunches into his own version of a thinking face. "The Kyuubi? Are you the reason my life is so terrible then?" He asks, as he knew more than he let on for his age.

The fox then looks really surprised at that, but quickly looks down with a guilty expression comes across her face. "You are correct kit, and I want to say sorry, I never meant to attack your village of Konohagakure." she explains quickly and calmly, while trying to hide the sadness.

"What do you mean? Are you saying it was some kind of accident that should have never happened? And where are we?" Naruto questions skeptically, with a little anger in his tone.

"It was kind of like that, I was controlled into attacking the village. I never wanted to kill all those innocent people of Konoha. And this is your mind scape, I've been here ever since you were born." She says quickly fighting tears of guilt for ruining the life of someone she has come to respect and admire. She has felt terrible having to watch the boy suffer for his whole life until now. She has seen the determined look in his eye and she knew that he kept his kind spirit no matter what happened to him. She has become very interested in this little human as any other person would have snapped long ago.

She has decided that she wants to help this boy that she has come to respect and she knew of a way that she could help him.

"I see... but can you please explain more so I can fully understand that story." He asks.

"It is a long story so I will give you the easiest version and the shortest version." she says. "I was your mother's prisoner before yours, her name was Kushina Uzumaki. I respected her and we were on good terms withe each other. On the day of your birth the seal on her stomach was the weakest. This means that I could have gotten away easily, even if I never intended to. A man who I believe to be Madara Uchiha, then came and kidnapped your mom and released me. After he did that, I looked into his eyes by mistake and his sharingan took control of me. Madara then forced me to attack that village for his own selfish revenge. After a while your father Minato Namikaze, the Yondaime Hokage showed up and sealed me into you, his own son."

At the mention of his mom and dad he had frozen, he had always thought of his parents and whether or not they had just abandoned him or died for the village. He starts to cry for the one of the first times in his life, finally knowing a small amount of information of his parents. "Is my mom gone then?" he asks through his cries?"

The fox letting a single tear slide down from her crimson eyes replies, "Unfortunately she is Naruto-kun" she truly missed her previous host. Quickly Composing herself she continues, "She would have wanted you to be happy Naruto-kun. She loved you very much and so did your father."

"I want to help you and I have a way that I think you will enjoy." Kyuubi said to the boy who now looked at her like she was Kami. "I believe your bloodline has awakened and in you bodies time of weakness, I have strengthened it by a good amount."

"Bloodline? Are those the things that the weird white eyed people have?" He asks excitedly which made the fox laugh a bit and also made her respect him more that he could even laugh at this time.

"Very good Naruto-kun" She replies, then she suddenly figured out she had added the kun suffix to his name for the first time in her speech and sheblushed a bit in embarrassment, hoping that he wouldn't catch it. She looked and saw that he blushed a bit and she winced a bit as she had never called someone with the kun before but she decided to move on. "Anyway, it is like those people, the Hyuga I believe. Yours is not a dojutsu though, it is more of a body type bloodline called the Chakra Chains.

"Chakra Chains huh, sounds pretty awesome." He replies childishly. "Can you tell me what exactly it does?" He yells doing his best to keep from jumping up and down or blushing at his chosen suffix for the fox.

Blushing from the chan suffix and smiling at his playfulness she explains, "Of course I can Naruto-kun, I am the Queen of the Bijus after all, ok to sta-

"Queen?" Naruto interrupts and begins blushing more the he was called with a kun, "your a girl fox?"

"I am, would you like to see my human form?" she asks playfully. Her grin widens when she sees his nodding. "Ok, just one second" Then she is suddenly covered in a dark red light and begins to shrink. In her spot is now a teenage girl about the age of 17. She has bright red hair, with a beautiful and flawless face. She has crimson eyes matching her fox form and tails and fox ears on the top of her head. She has a killer body, which he can tell by the almost see through tight, crimson kimono. Breasts are around high B cup not too big not too small, she has wide hips with a killer bubble butt. All in all she is breathtaking to look at and Naruto is blushing like crazy trying to stop his already shaking knees from giving out on him. He just walks closer to the cage lost in her beauty "I take it you like what you see" she says teasingly.

"Wha-What are you talking about?" he stutters out trying but failing to hide his increasing blush. Thinking of ways to change the subject he asks "Weren't you saying something about my bloodline?"

"Your no fun Naruto-kuuuunnnn" she purrs and grins seeing his increasingly red face. "But your right, the Chakra Chains bloodline is a very strong one. You will eventually be much stronger if you start to wear weights during runs and workouts. This is a due to your clan, the Uzumaki clan, having very strong and healthy bodies so your body will have a higher tolerance for weights than a normal person. That is not really a part of the bloodline, what is though, is the fact that you will be able to sprout chains from any part of you body. These chains are made of the Uzumaki's very strong chakra that can actually subdue even a bijuu."

"That sounds awesome I can't wait to unlock my chains, but the villagers won't sell me anything and I have nowhere to live and nothing to eat." He says reverting to a more shy and guarded personality now that he was finally feeling comfortable in Kyuubi's presence.

The Kyuubi seeing this frowns, 'We are going to have to break that shy and reserved personality of his and get him some friends' She thinks sadly but is also happy that he accepts her and is comfortable with her. "Go and see your Jiji and ask him for help, you should have done that a long time ago. Don't worry that he is busy, he will always be there for you. Don't tell him we can talk yet and don't ask about your parents either, we can tell him when you are older. Also ask if you could get a trainer or someone to help you who doesn't hate you because of me." she says sounding guilty at the end.

"Don't blame yourself Kyuubi-chan, because its not your fault. If it helps at all I forgive you and would really like to get to know you and be friends." He says soothingly while blushing as he feels some thing different when talking to her.

Hearing this Kyuubi starts to tear up and cry a little, shes so happy that he forgives her and wants to be friends. "Thank you so much Naruto-kun, I would love to be your friend too." She replies as she grabs him into the cage and gives him a massive bear hug, well fox hug.

Holding each other for a short while more they reluctantly let go. "Its time for you to wake up now Naruto-kun, and remember what I said. Just go directly to the Hokage and ask him for some help."

"Ok, Kyuubi-chan and thanks for everything, I really appreciate your help healing me and being my friend. goodbye for now" He replies softly saying his goodbye and fading away.

"Goodbye Naruto-kun." 'You are definitely the most interesting human I have ever met. Maybe...' She says quietly while blushing like crazy.

Naruto starts to wake up and sees the villagers and jonin just leaving the scene of the crime. He slowly starts to get up as the bones in his legs are now almost fully repaired thanks to the Kyuubi. The cuts and deep gashes are almost all healed up leaving scars in their places. His improvised shirt absolutely destroyed with little recognizable pieces scattered around. His worn pants in a similar state, being just barley enough to cover him.

"He's getting up!" Some random civilian yells, alerting the angry mob. Naruto sees more and more heads turn towards him and is getting nervous. His wounds may have healed but he is still very sore. He wills some chains to appear from his back and makes them shield him from the crowd while they finally stop and just stare if surprise and some of the ninja in awe as they only knew of one person who could do that.

Wanting to be better than the mobs he simply stares at them coming towards him and lets his eyes do most of the talking. The frozen people can then finally see what they have done to him by looking in his eyes for what is probably their first time. They can practically feel the pain, loneliness, and strength coming from the poor boy. Some start to feel a little guilty while others are waiting to see if he will become angry and attack, but what they all had in common was nobody could have guessed they would be receiving an apology.

"I have just learned of my burden through this beating, it being one of the worst I've ever had. I can see your frustration in me even being around and I understand now. Its an eye opener, I would want revenge if I had a family and someone killed them too." He says softly and quietly, but some how everyone can hear him clearly. "I, however, am not the Kyuubi reincarnated, we are two separate beings. I only wish to be left alone please." He says as he turns and starts his walk to the Hokage Tower, leaving behind a mob of around 30 people to finally let go of their anger and think on what they have done.

Chapter End

Alright, I am going to continue to use basically the same chapters as my previous story but I am going to modify and change it. It's not much of a rewrite but I don't think I really want to change all that much anyway. I'm not going to list the harem this time either and just choose who I want when I get there.

I hope you enjoy this story and review with positive comments.