Hey guys I'm back with a new chapter of Wishing You'd Notice Me, and I'm sorry for the long wait like always I'm busy with school a lot now so I won't always update so I'm sorry.
On another note, SPIDER-MAN IS BACK WITH MARVEL (Ha so late for me to say this), this is great news because he can now be part of the Marvel Cinematic Universe, he'll be able to meet Captain America, Iron Man, Thor, etc. this amazing and if you guys want me to I can tell you my idea on how they can introduce Spider-Man to the Marvel Universe.
Second note, to tell you right now if any of you are Naruto fans, I saw the The Last:Naruto The Movie, it was an amazing movie with good action and story as well with the romance which made me happy soooo much it was just amazing I would give it a 10/10 in my opinion anyways let me start answering some reviews:
Aferus: Thanks bro, I appreciate it.
Sport21: Thank you soo much about that and I really wanna give that tension between those two characters since they are fighting over for Peter.
Burke23: 1)Yes, it is a love triangle. 2)Hydro-Man, is a cool villain in my opinion that I wanted to use since he wan't used in the show so I rather want him to appear in this story for his time to shine. 3)Yes, instead of Peter inner dialogue, I'm doing Ava since no ones ever done that. 4)Aww man so many questions for you to ask but so little answers for me to give. 5.)Thank you and here's more of it.
ArtemisBAMF1218: Oh she will realize it soon and that's good comparison of a Disney song with how Ava feelings are, good comparison, hahaha yeah if only, yup I added that because we need Peter's POV as we'll. Of course I need to put some action into this it's gonna have to show both alter egos of their lives and Thanks Hydro-Man is a cool villain and glad I'm the first person to use him. Oh I'll explain that in a flashback before the team ever came to Midtown, and don't worry I will. Also thank you and I will update that soon and I know which moment your talking about but don't worry I'll update that for season 3.
Guest 1, 2, 3 and sliceshadows: Here it is.
Nightwing1: Oh don't worry that will happen.
AngryHenry: Hey it's cool bro I won't hate.
Plasma57: Yes, I did because that show I really loved because it got me involved into Peter's social life and his hero life and it also made me root for Peter and Liz so I wanted to take that and put it in this story plus I feel that nickname would annoy Ava but this is rivalry with these two to see who wins over Peter.
Now, I'm done with the reviews here's the story so enjoy it.
Chapter 5:Rivals
Parker Residence: Saturday Morning, 1:45 pm
The group continues to work on their book report project... Well, just one of them, Peter. He was the only one focusing on the book report since everyone else had a different agenda.
"Um, do any of you mind helping me out?" Peter asked looking at his three group members while Sam, Ava and Liz snap back to reality and look at Peter.
"Oh, right, sorry Peter, where were we at?" Ava replied with a confused tone looking at the computer to see what Peter had typed.
"We're half way done with the book report I just need a few more details for the event that happened..." Peter answered.
"That part of the book was amazing." Liz stated.
"I know! That huge secret war that no body knew about but the only people who knew were the people who came back from the war." Peter agreeing with adding more details to the event.
"Pretty amazing if you ask me." Sam added.
Few minutes later...
"Okay, I'm done with the book report guys." Peter said with a happy tone.
"Awesome!"
"That's great, Petey!"
"Finally, now I can play video games!" Sam replied which he then grabbed his phone and started to play video games.
"That's what you've been doing this whole time!" Ave snapped.
"And I still will!"
Ava then grabs the computer from Peter and deletes Sam's name from the book report. Peter chuckled from Ava's actions as he then got up went to the door. "Well you guys, I'll be heading out so later." Peter then left leaving Ava, and Liz (and Sam but his too busy to pay attention) which both Ava and Liz then looked at each other.
"Back Off..." Liz told Ava
"What?" Ava said with confusion.
"I said back off, I saw him first and I'm planning on asking Peter to the dance." Liz told Ava with anger from this. Ava started to be angered but yet still confused.
"What are you talking about?" Ava angrily asked.
"Don't play dumb, I know you like Peter."
"W-What?! No, I don't?!" Ava replied with both shocked and anger. In background of this little argument, Sam has his headphones in listening to music while playing his games as he sings, "Baby,Baby, Baby, Ooooooo, like baby, baby..."
"Seriously, you got to be kidding me you obviously show it to everyone but I'm just happy that Peter hasn't noticed because I have a chance with him, unlike you, so stay away ,got it?" Liz told Ava which Ava started to get angrier.
"You know what just to annoy you I'm going to ask Peter to the dance so you can't and at the end of the night your going to see me and Peter dancing together," Ava told her which she then changed her tone from anger to a mocking tone, "now how would that make you feel Lizzy." This comment made Liz right eye twitch a little.
*chuckles* I think I gotten Lizzy angry that'll show her.
Liz then gotten up close to Ava face with a lot of anger. "I'm sooo going to make your heart break by kissing Peter right in front of your face."
With anger Ava then slapped Liz and started to fight with her with claws and punches going around which got to a full beaten up Liz as she then grabbed Liz and threw her out the window making her end up in the front yard. Liz getting up and running away crying while Ava just smiles. Which then Peter came through the front door wearing a expensive suit while he held a bouquet of flowers and walking up to Ava.
"Ava, I should have realised a long time ago that your the one for me so won't you please..." Peter then got down on one knee, "Marry Me?"
Liz flicked at Ava on the head, waking her up from reality... "See ya and game on bitch." Liz then left and went home.
Ava sighed, "Dang it, I wish that was real."
I mean just the part when I beat up Liz nothing after that.
"We'll I guess I'll go patrol since I got nothing else to do." Ava then left the house.
New York City...
White Tiger is running through the rooftops of New York, letting the wind go through her as she starts to get calm. After she stopped a few robbers and muggings she stopped and sat down on a rooftop looking at the city while she took out a pen and a piece of paper.
"Now, how should I ask Peter?" Ava asked herself.
"I could go for the smart approach and ask him when no one is around or I can go for the simple approach and go up to him, or maybe I could sing to him, or maybe...no that Idea is stupid but would Peter even want to go out with me to the dance, this could ruin our friendship and would get awkward. This could make him think we're a thing, Oh, I don't know what to do!" Ava sighed.
You guys don't think I'm over thinking right?
Ava then looked down at the city and saw Spider-Man fighting a few street thugs, "I should help him...or I can just watch the show from up here." So Ava just watched the fight but mainly focusing on Peter and nothing else.
"Okay, now I should come in late." Ava said with a smile under her mask which she then jumped down and started to help Spider-Man. Making White Tiger knock out a few of them while Spider-Man tied up the rest.
"Well you came late, I mean really late, don't you know that these guys have a curfew and they try to break it, geez kids these days." Spider-Man joked while White Tiger just chuckled at his joke.
"Well I didn't know, I just began patrolling, I just landed upon you just now." Ava replied
"Well, aren't I lucky?" Spider-Man said as he climbed the wall and grabbed the camera which was in the corner.
"What's with the camera?" Ava asked.
"Oh I have this new job for the Daily Bugle which is taking pictures of Spider-Man."
"Wait, you're taking pictures of yourself?"
"Yup, so overall I'm taking selfies like this..." Peter then grabs Ava by the waist pushing them closer with their face now next to each other, "Say Spidey!" Spider-Man then takes the picture as he then lets go Ava while Ava is just confused on what just happened.
"Um, okay then? but wait why do you have a job at the Daily Bugle where J. Jonah Jameson hates you?" Ava asked.
"I know, I know don't get me started but it's worth it because I'm helping Aunt May pay the bills at the same time earning some cash." Peter responded.
"Wow, that's really nice and sweet of you, Peter." Ava told Peter making them both have a smile underneath their masks.
"We'll anyways I gotta go see ya later, Tiger." Spider-Man waved goodbye, he then swung off into the distance while Ava just looked and went back to patrolling.
You know guys...forget it, I'll say how I truly feel... I'm in love with Peter Parker... I'm in love with Spider-Man.
Anyways, guys I hoped you liked it even if it was a short chapter but I just hoped you liked it but anyways
LatinoHeat is out.