And there you have it the new and improved Prologue of my OC Jah Flame in RWBY.

Bold= Importance, and emphasis

italics= memory,flashback and to show importance

Our fate is determined by how far we are prepared to push ourselves to stay alive - the decisions we make to must do whatever it takes to endure and make it through alive.

~Bear Grylls~

~Prologue~

The ancient power of dragons that rested inside me was always within my aura, the worse things happen to your family or yourself is painful really believe me when I say it.I was just so tired and weak from the previous events that have transpired this last week.

I sighed losing the tournament to pyrrha Nikos was a real disappointment even though she was so lucky my sword broke then I couldn't really defend myself.I sighed in regret at how that trophy was ripped from my hands unfairly now, all I wanted to do is sleep peacefully hear nothing but the wind just brush past, but your whole sleep can't just be a void of darkness until you wake up the next morning.

The dream was unclear to the extent I didn't know what else to do but stand idly, and even if I wanted to move, my body felt like it couldn't I was frozen in place trapped as a spectator of this tragedy.

The girl was battered, and beaten she had many wounds especially a gash that occupied her chest which she pressured to prevent blood loss from killing her.A quick look in the girls eyes said she was going in, and out of focus I knew eventually she would come to pass.

"I'm sorry you had to do this."She apologized turning her head toward a man who was before trying his best to call for help.

I couldn't comprehend the answer for...why show me this?

Is there a message intended for me?

He turned his voice trembling"No don't apologize p..please don't everything i-is going to be alright."Reassuring only himself obviously he knew that wasn't the case by the way tears started to glide down his cheeks.

"Please...don't cry."She smiled at him, and he smiled back wiping the tears from his eyes with his arm sleeve.

Why?

Her smile faltered"Promise me that you won't suffer the same fate as me."I could hear that her breathing was becoming more rasp by the second, like she was only holding on by a thread.

The girl slowly raised her hand, and the golden reflection of a ring made itself known to me as she cupped his cheek, as the man quickly placed his hand over her's and now it was no doubt they were married by the golden rings on both of their hands.

Is this a...Warning?

"I promise."The man shivered as if about to burst into tears.

This time the women closed her eyes making a shaking inhale, she then started to sob "I...I... Love you."and with a smile the black haired girl exhaled.

The man still held onto her hand, he screamed a name but, to my ears it was unintelligible because I was immediately hit with the feeling of being pulled from the dream everything around me became muffled.A loud white noise that sounded if something like a grenade exploded right next to me, and would almost have cause me to be death until...

I woke up

Jah eyes burst open as he pushed to sit up clutching his rapidly throbbing head, The constant nightmares he's already got use to, but the migraines is something else entirely and add that with echo of the white ringing noise that still remained in his ears.

He sighed as the throbbing pain in his head started to slow, the pain becoming more bearable."What's with that dream why was her face so...familiar?"He questioned himself finding it most peculiar.

He looked up to see the sun, and the sky filled with clouds watching some reason he felt that the sky would give him an answer to his question, so he closed his eyes and fell into deep focus in which was disturbed as the ground beneath him vibrated in response to his scroll opening his scroll to reveal that it was his sister messaging him.

Sister:Where r u brother were waiting for you.

Jah:I'm coming a couple of min ok sis?

Sister:I hope your not messing with a girl he he ;-)

Jah:Shutup!

Sister:whatever just hrry up :-)

Closing his scroll Jah stuffed it into his pocket moving off the ground to stand, but as Jah turned around to leave from the field he saw that he wasn't the only one here now.A young woman was looking out into the pond and Jah couldn't help but stare she was just so, beautiful...yeah that's the girl hair covered one of her eyes, and the one eye that was exposed had the color of amber in it.

She wore a red skirt that was fixated with a green top that had straps tied around the waist to keep it from looking too loose, as if it didn't fit, and the sleeves shoulders were cut out to show the bare skin underneath. Out of curiosity Flame watched as the girl knelt down and put her hand out to smoothly rub a baby goose head. The mother disapproved of what was going on and quaked at her baby the girl stopped as the little goose zipped away to rushed in line with the rest of it's siblings.

She stood up, and turned to Flame that's when Jah realized he had gotten so close about 5 feet away from her.

"Jah Flame it's quite nice to see you again."The girl smiled

"...wait how do you know me?"

"You don't remember?I wouldn't blame you it has been a really long while."Jah looked at her face trying his best to identity the Women in front of him.

She sighed "The little girl crying in red."That instantly triggered the memory which was stored in the back of his head for a long time.

"...Cinder?"He didn't really understand at first but her name just came to him then, in that same moment he closed his eyes seeing that moment replay like, a tape being rewind in a V.C.R. Jah remembered how when Cinder was helplessly crying in the corner he helped her and got into a fight with her bullies.

Flashback

Jah punched the last boy in the stomach even for his age karate was his best, I mean being a black belt, and having a few bruises was irrelevant to how much pain he bestowed onto those delinquents who would hurt a helpless girl. Jah sighed as he calmed himself and bowed to his opponents giving them gratitude to their match as they scrambled away in pain.

Cinder blushed as he cupped his hand on her cheek where those delinquents left a nasty punch mark he smiled as a soothing warmth overtook the aching injury, and then he moved his hands up to wipe small tears off her eyes.

"T-thank you."Cinder words stumbled as Jah just smiled awkwardly and waved his hand in a dismissing matter.

Flame winked"ah it was nothing special just be more careful alright we don't want that pretty face getting hurt now shall we?"Even though he was six Flame was a player and a teaser.

"My name's Jah Flame; what's yours?"Cinder was startled twirling her fingers around in a shy way nobody never asked for her name before.

"C-Cinder Fall."Flames cat faunus ears perked up."Cinder...I think that's a pretty name!"

Cinder blushed while Jah just smiled brightly, as the girl lips curled into a big smile as she giggled happily.

"Your really cute when you smile!"Cinder exclaimed

"Well childhood memories aside, I actually came here on business."Cinder started to walk around him looking him up and down.

"What kind business?"Flame asked Cinder as she finished walking a full circle around him.

She stopped in front of him"Business of recruiting handsome guys like you."She glided her finger down his chest Cinder looked at him with a hint of deviousness in her smile.

Flame blushed"Well the White Fang...I need your help."

"The White Fang you're crazy I may be a faunas but...I don't hate humans, I mean I'm human too."

"Yes you will be fighting with the White Fang, but you'll be fighting for me."She responded Jah was confused something in his stomach arched him to say yes, a gut feeling? yeah, just what was he was getting himself involved with? Jah opened his mouth once more to ask what was he helping with exactly.

But Cinder interrupted him"Oh flame your questions will be answered soon enough."Cinder gave him a little smile as she put a finger to his lips silencing him, both looked into each others eyes and strangely he felt the feeling to agree without even thinking.

"So answer me yes or...no?"Cinder asked the number one question where she waited silently and patiently for an answer to be given. Jah tensed he didn't understand the feeling in his heart all these questions clouded his mind as he thought Yes or no.

Jah opened his mouth reluctantly and slowly he answered...

END

Dun Dun Dun cliffhanger!

So what did you think? I hope I did relatively better anyway the other chapters are going to be changed to fit the plot I have for this story please stay tuned and fav if you like.

~Sonic123456a~