Hey this is my new story based off the first one I made. I deleted it because it was really bad. This story is going to be a remake of the first story. This one im going to make it the best I can. Please let me know what I can do better. I really want to have your guys opinions on this. Well enjoy the story and I Hope this goes well!

It was cold, rainy night and Kishinuma hated it. He hated the rain because it reminded him heavenly Host... and Ayumi. He really loves Ayumi, but she did not love him back. She only loved Satoshi. She hated him, she even told him that she hated him at... That place. He is really depressed about everything. He can't stand it, its driving him insane. He thought having a walk around the park would help, but it just made him mad. He just wanted Ayumi. He wanted to hug her, to kiss her forehead and say he loved her but he can't. He needs to talk to someone before he does something he will regret. He pulled out his phone and looked at his contact list. He scrolled through the list. Ayumi, No he can't talk to her since she is problem. Satoshi, No he too busy with Naomi and most likely not pick up his phone. He was alone. He is going insane. He wishes Seiko was alive so he could talk to her about Ayumi. She was called the love docter for a reason. He is just going to have to hold in his feeling for Ayumi. He can do it. He did before Heavenly Host he can do it again. He started walking to his apartment. As he walked he thought about Ayumi. How she loved Satoshi and hated him. How he saved her so many time, but still loves Satoshi more then him. He could not get her out of his mind. she was his whole life. She was the reason he even stayed in school and she hated him. He really is a jerk. He could of done better for her. If he only put more effort in helping her maybe she wouldn't hate him right now. Its too late now.

He got to his apartment. He pulled out his keys from his pocket and unlocked to door. Pushed open the slide door and walked in. He threw himself on his couch and turned on his tv. As he watch the show, his eyes got heavier. He closed his eyes and fell into deep sleep. "Hurry up and run." Kishinuma got stabbed the his neck. Blood was all over him . He fell to the floor and watch Ayumi get dragged away by Satoshi. Kishinuma awaken from his sleep to see he was on his couch. It was only a dream. The same dream that mad him angry. He wanted just lay down and sleep but he could not stand that Nightmare. It felt to real to be only a nightmare. Kishinuma look over at his phone to see the time 3:34 AM. He was he has school at 7 so he could get more sleep, but the nightmare would wake him up and make him even more tired. Kishinuma decided to get up and get ready. He got out of his clothes from last night and went to take a shower. After he was done he got into his school outfit. He then went into the kichen and made a bowl of cearal. He ate his cearal and went to the bathroom to brush his teeth a take care of other things. He got out the bathroom and looked at the time again and seen It was 5:22. He still got some time, so he got out his gutar and started playing. He was really good at the gutar and since he was so good at it he got a job at music store. Well he was hired because the store manager found him outside the store and let him work there to get some money. He worked there so he could get an apartment and pay for rent. Thats how he got the apartment he has now. After playing he put it back in its case and was getting ready to leave. He put his phone and keys in his pocket. He checked the time to see when he should leave. It was 6:36, so Kishinuma walked out the door and locked it behind him as he left.

Kishinuma walked through the school gate to the court yard. He seen Satoshi and Naomi talking to each. Satoshi look over and saw Kishinuma. Satoshi and Naomi started walking over to Kishinuma. Kishinuma did not feel like talking with them at the moment. He did last night but not anymore. "Hey Kishinuma. How you doing?" Satoshi said. Kishinuma looked and them and walked into the building. He took his shoes of and put on his shoes for school. He then went to his first class and sat down in his seat. He was happy to be alive, but at some points he wished he didn't survive. He would not have feel this pain he had. Yes he would feel his death for all eternity, but to him it was better then feeling heart broken. If only she understood what he is going through.

Satoshi was worried about Kishinuma. Kishinuma would not do that unless he was upset. "What was that about?" Naomi said. Satoshi looked over at Naomi. "He seems to be depressed. We should talk to him at lunch." Naomi nodded "Yeah we should. I hope hes alright." Satoshi look over and watched Kishinuma walking into the building. "Yeah me too."

I hope you guys enjoyed. If you want more let me know. If you read my first story What Happens Next (the one I deleted) do you think this is better? Let me know. Lets hope Chapter 2 comes out! Bye!