I am back with the rewrite and things are going to go way different. Now I will tell you this Luffy will still have his harem but Makino will not be in it.

On an island in the grandline a looming darkness awaits. A giant tower lives a man with no good intentions of the world. Sitting down on his thrown like the true king he was. Jackell Horas the leader and founder of Grips island.

Watching over his kingdom nothing got on this island without him knowing. Which is exactly how he knew one of his follwers just came in. He lightened up the get a better look at his king. Horas was wearing glasses and a white collared shirt, and black pants. He hair is hazelnut colored.

"Tell me what do you want " asked Horas.

The man looked at his king before speaking. He had calmed himself down before speaking. He also made sure not to show any type of fear. "My king we did it, me and the rest of the expedition team have found away for you to become a warlord. It was simple but not easy but-"

Horas put his hand in front of him to signal the man to stop speaking. "Tell me does anyone else have this imformation besides you"

"Well of course the entire expedition team knows" the man answered.

"That's good" said Horas. The entire area went heavy. The expeditioniat found himself on the floor without the ability to get up. Horas his king walked up to him placing his hand on his head.

"No my king please" cried the man.

"Sorry I wish I didn't have to but you forgot one thing. You looked at me when you spoke. You showed no fear, you even managed to calm yourself down but you forgot one thing. Always bow down to me when you speak" Stated Horas.

"I'm sorry"

But it was too late and he soon found his entire mind eradicated. Horas looked over to one of the guards "You are now leader of the expedition team. Go get me my imformation"

"Yes sir" The former gaurd ran out the room. While Horas went back to his thrown.

"It is so hard to find good help these days"

In the east bue, on an island called Goa kingdom is a place called Windmill village. A young boy no more than seventeen is leaving on his adventure to become a pirate. He was in his dingy with a green haired woman. She seemed puzzled while the boy had a monkey grin on his face. It seemed like a great day to be outside or even become a pirate.

"Luffy what am I doing in this thing" asked Makino

"Because Makino I want you to join me. I know you have been very lonly since Shanks left." answered Luffy

"That's not true Luffy I had you and Ace to keep me company" said Makino

"Yeah but when I leave you will be lonly, so that's why I want you to come with me. We can both meet Shanks again together."

Makino smiled. She new some time Shanks would come back here on his own but she did not want to tell Luffy that. Then she thought about the promise she made to his mother. Don't worry I will protect him thought Makino. "Okay Luffy I will join you" said Makino.

"Allright!" cheered Luffy.

They both then sailed there way to a new world of adventures. They sailed in there very small excuse for a boat all day. Luffy talked about how he wanted at least nine crew members before entering the grandline. When night fall reached hell broke loose ahead of them was a giant whirlpool. Makino panicked not knowing what to do. Luffy seemed okay and came up with an idea.

"Makino get in the barrel" said Luffy already in the barrel.

Makino didn't seem to argue and hopped in next to Luffy. They closed the lid hoping for the best. Makino hugged Luffy inside to give him comfort. (even if she was the one that needed it)

The next day on an island nearby there barrel landed. both of them where asleep so they couldn't notice. A pink haired boy came over and noticed the barrel. He tried to pick it up but found it was to heavy he asumed it was a barrel of liqur. He took it in to a nearby house without being noticed, that's what he thought anyway. Three pirates came by and comfronted Koby.

"So Koby slacking off again" asked one of the pirates.

"No I just thought you guys would enjoy a nice barrel of wine" answered Koby.

The pirates then drooled over the thought of some nice wine. Every time they got some there captain Alvida would drink all of it, never leaving them a drop. They took the barrel and tried to open it. Instead two of the pirates that tried to open it had a fist met to there face.

"That was a good nap" shouted Luffy coming out the barrel.

Makino came out after him not looking happy. "Luffy you shouldn't do that who know's who you could have hurt doing that" she scoulded him. She looked down at the two knocked out pirates. "See what did I tell you"

"Sorry Makino I never met to hurt anyone" said Luffy

"As long as your sorry" Makino then looked at Koby who she noticed was very frightened. She walked over to try and comfort him. "Are you okay, why are you crying" she asked

"i'm not crying" said Koby

Makino still knew he was scared she noticed he could be around Luffy's age. So she called him over "Luffy come talk to this boy"

"Hey i'm Monkey D. Luffy the future pirate king" Luffy introducted himself.

Koby's mind changed from scared to amazed. He had never heard anyone not even Alvida say that. But Alvida is a woman but you could easily mistake her for a man. "My name is Koby and did you say you want to be pirate king"

"Yep that is my dream and if I die fighting for it thats fine with me" said Luffy

"Hey Luffy do you think I can be a marine"

"I don't know thats up to you"

Makino decided to jump in the Koby was now feeling comfortable around them. "So Koby why do you want to be a marine" she asked.

Koby smiled at her even showing a little blush. "I want to be a marine because of Alvida. She makes me sick to my very stomack, so I have to catch pirates like her"

"Who's Alvida" asked Luffy

Speak of the devil, the roof of the house was knocked down by an iron club. A giant fat lady appeared to be the culprit she was Alvida.

"Holy shit its the moon" shouted Luffy only to earn a smack in the back in the head by Makino.

"Who did you say you were going to capture Koby" asked Alvida in anger. Alvida motion then turned to Makino "Who the hell is she"

Koby looked more scared than before. He didn't know what to say, he then looked at Luffy and thought about being brave. Alvida opened her big mouth again.

"Koby I can forgive you if you tell me who the most beautiful woman in the sea is" she said.

"Not you. You fat old cow in fact Makino is more beautiful than what you will ever be" shouted Koby.

Alvida's eyes filled with rage and she brought her club down ready to crush Koby. If I die fighting for my dream then that's okay Koby thought before the club came down on him. Still waiting wondering when she was going to do it Koby opened his eyes and surprised to see Luffy holding back the club.

"Well spoken Koby" said Luffy. Luffy then streched out his arm and reeled it back in sending Alvida flying in the air. Luffy turned back around and noticed Koby passesd out with Makino tending to him.

"I think his day was too exciting" said Makino

So here is the first redone chapter, do you like it so far? Also next chapter they meet a Amazon. Not telling who and how.