So here it is the first chapter of the rewritten version of my story.

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or Percy Jackson or the few lines of the song I used in this chapter.

The Undetermined Demigod

Part I: The Champion of the Huntress

Chapter 1: The Day it All Began Part 1

Naruto was still in a doze when he was wakened by a noise, like something had just been broken. He could feel the cold night breeze coming from his window, as he hear three voices in his room talking to each other.

"Aww crap." A man's voice complained. "Sorry, I'll be more carefully from now on."

The other two voices seemed to ignore him as they kept talking to each other.

"I told you not to come!" The voice of a woman hissed at the other person. Naruto could barely make out the outlines of the three. From what he could tell there were two women and a man. "And what do you do? You still came. Have you forgotten what would happen if he finds out about Naruto?"

Find out about him? Naruto was still confused what these people were doing in his room at this late hour, which made him wonder if he was even awake or not. But why would they talk about him?

"I'm aware of this mother!" The other woman hissed back. "Do you really think I would put him in danger if I wouldn't know for sure that it would be safe for him when I come to visit him?"

"No, I know that you're the last of us five to put him in danger, but what you're doing is just reckless." Said the first woman again, still whispering before she turned to the third member of their little group. With equal anger she said: "And what were you thinking? Letting her see him just like that?"

"I…I thought there would be no harm in letting her see him for just a few minutes." The man of the group said as if it was an half made up excuse to cover his mistake. "Besides, the most of our bodies are far away from the boy, so no one should even notice that we're here."

Naruto could feel how his body was slowly waking up and he could make out more of the people around him. Both the man and the woman, who were arguing at the moment were standing far away from him as if to make sure not to wake him. The woman had long black hair with silver tips, while the man was around a head taller than her and had short black hair. Watching the two talking to each other made Naruto want to sit up and ask them what they were doing in his room, but he didn't came to it. The second woman, who he had forgotten was in the room, had walked over to him and sat on his bed. He could feel her hand on his head as she started to stroke his blond hair, making him feel safe and wanting to fall asleep again. Out of the corner of his half open eyes he could make out her long red hair.

"He is right mother. No one should be able to notice our absence." The woman next to him said.

"But I'm sure your brother will and he won't be pleased about this. You know how he is lately." Naruto could tell she was losing her patience with her daughter. "The whole reason of hiding Naruto is to make sure that no one beside us will find out about him and his powers."

"I have to agree with your mother on that one." The man said, apparently already changing sides in this argument. "He might find out that we're here now."

Naruto felt the woman stop stroking his head as she turned to the man and said: "Of course you would be on her side. We all know why you're doing this. You just want to-"

"Silence girl!" The man interrupted her, the anger was clearly to be heard. "If I were you I would watch what I'm saying. I hope you haven't forgotten who makes sure the boy is safe from any harm, hidden in this village."

"No I haven't." The woman next to Naruto said through her teeth, not liking to admit this to the man.

"Good." He said pleased. "Now say your good-bye to the boy. We have to go."

Naruto could hear the woman sigh next to him. The bed sheet shifted by her movement and not soon after he felt how the woman kissed his forehead.

"Until the next time we see each other again, my little Naruto." She whispered in a soft and caring voice to him.

Feeling the comfort, the woman was giving him leave made Naruto sad and uncomfortable. He didn't know why he did it, but like in a dream he had the feeling that if he would let her go she would disappear from his life forever and he didn't wanted that to happen. So he grabbed her hand just as she was about to pull it away from him. It wasn't a strong grip, but strong enough to get her attention.

With a weak voice he said: "Don't leave…m-mommy." His eyes still half closed.

"Great now he's awake." Grumbled the other woman from the other side of the room. "You two go I'll make sure he goes back to sleep and hopefully he won't remember that we were here in the first place."

But Naruto ignored her he only tried to look up to the woman he had just called mommy. He was only able to get a glimpse of her smile before the other woman took her place and the other two disappeared. The black haired woman put him under his blanked again to keep him warm. Naruto felt his eyes getting heavier again, but he tried to stay awake. He wanted to ask this woman who they are and why they try to hide him and most important of all if this woman, he had just called mommy, was his mother or if he had just acted in a wishful manner, pretending that his mother had come to see him. But he knew better. His parents were dead. They have died the day he was born, on the night the Kyuubi had attacked the village. Then… was this all a dream?

He wanted to ask the woman, who was still in his room, but he didn't came to it. The last he would remember from this night's event would be when this woman has started to sing a lullaby in the most beautiful voice Naruto had ever heard. He even ignored the fact that the woman was singing in a complete other language than before. Yet he could understand every single word as if he had heard it so many times before in his short life.

May your dreams bring you peace in the darkness,

May you always rise over the rain.

May the light from above always lead you to love,…

The sun was shining through Naruto's window on his face, disturbing his sleep. Slowly he woke up. He grumbled in discomfort before he pulled his bed sheet over his head to protect himself from the sunlight. For a few seconds he remained in this position when he suddenly remembered what had happened last night. In one movement he threw the bed sheet away and sat up, he looked around to see if the woman that had sung the lullaby for him was still there, but she wasn't. He should have known better. It was already morning, there was no way she would have stayed that long.

But then another thought made his way to his head. What if it was really just a dream? It wouldn't be the first time he had dreamed about at least one of his parents. Unless… Naruto remembered that when he had woken for the first time, he had heard something break. There was no way they could have covered something like this up. There must have been at least some shards in his room or some of his belongings missing.

Naruto looked around the room. In his room wasn't much to begin with, so he had fast checked everything. On the other side of his bed was only a little dresser with a vase on it and a little night table next to his bed. On the walls were a few pictures, but he couldn't find something that was missing or that something had been broken. Thinking he might have overlooked something he did it a few times more, but only to end up with the same result – nothing had changed.

With a now depressed mood Naruto made his way to the kitchen for some breakfast. It was Saturday so he had all the time he needed to start the day. Moving past the fridge he went to the cupboard. With a creak it opened, showing him the empty cupboard.

"Great, no ramen left." Said Naruto to himself, in a depressed voice. He continued to look at the empty cupboard for a couple more seconds before he finally said: "Well, Ichiraku's it is."

Not wanting to waste more time than he already had, he put on a shirt that was lying in his room – He had worn it at least three times before, without washing it once – and some pants before he made his way out of his apartment and walked in the direction of the market.

Even thought it was still early the market was already filled with the voices of the many people who wanted to buy or sell goods. But as soon as the people around Naruto noticed him the voices changed and they became hushed whispers. For Naruto this wasn't strange. To tell the truth it was pretty normal. He had gotten used to it already and he managed to ignore what they would say about him behind his back.

"Look it's him." One person would whisper to another person and start it all. Naruto could feel the stairs they would give him, like he was some kind of contagious disease. Which was almost every time followed with the other person saying in an equal whisper. "What's he doing here? I can't believe they let him walk so freely around. I mean what if he loses co-" Yeah, that was also nothing new to Naruto at some point of the conversations one of the others around would suddenly just change the subject or someone interrupted the other person as if they were something hiding or just to afraid to say it out loud.

Over the time Naruto had found a good way to take his mind of this matter. He would simply look up at the Hokage Monument where the heads of the four Hokages were carved in. The Fourth Hokage was Naruto's personal hero, he had defeated the Kyuubi protecting the village in doing so. So Naruto made it his goal to become the next Hokage and then everyone in the village would have to respect him and they wouldn't be able to ignore him any longer.

But unfortunately Naruto wasn't the strongest and he had a massive problem to control his Chakra, which made him the bottom last in his class. Sure he had still four years before he would graduate, but Naruto didn't want to take any chances. He trained every day after school to at least get a little bit better witch each time, so he would one day be the strongest and gain the title of Hokage.

Naruto was so hung up in his thoughts that he didn't notice the two bodies lying in front of him on the ground. They were covered in dark cloth that were covering almost every part of their bodies, so it was understandable why Naruto didn't saw them in the first place. He took one step and his foot was on one of the persons head. Feeling the sudden high difference from the ground Naruto paused and looked down to find out what he had stepped on. Getting curios Naruto crouched and started to poke the person he had stepped on.

"Hey mister are you alright?" Naruto asked, but when he didn't got an answer he just continued to poke him. "I'm sorry that I stepped on you, but I don't think it's such a good idea to lie here on the ground." But just like before, Naruto once more didn't get an answer.

Naruto couldn't think of any good reason why they were lying on the ground at such an early hour. If it had been late at night he would have thought that those two were just some drunks, but this didn't seemed to be the case. Maybe they have just fallen asleep. Yeah that must it be, after all he would often fall asleep in class when the teacher would talk about some boring history stuff.

But first he had to make sure of it. With one hand he slowly moved to the piece of cloth that was covering the persons head to remove it, but what happened next was not something Naruto hadn't expected.

The person in front of him suddenly gripped his wrist stopping Naruto from pulling the piece of cloth away. The person slowly lifted his head and Naruto was facing a man whose face looked really thin – he could have been easily mistaken for a skeleton – and with a weak voice the man said: "Fooood… -aru."

Naruto was so frighten by the man that he started to screamed.

"Kyaaaa!"

It was around half an hour later when Naruto had finally arrived at Ichiraku's ramen restaurant. He had found out that the two men he had walked on were two traveller who had passed out, because of starvation. He offered them to bring them to the best restaurant in the whole village and they gratefully accepted his offer.

And that's how Naruto ended up in this kind of situation, sitting with two strangers in Ichiraku and eating ramen.

Naruto gave a side glance at the two men who were sitting right next to him, eagerly eating their ramen. Both men had eaten two bowls of ramen already, while Naruto was at his fourth. He watched as the man next to him put down his bowl and giving out a sign of relief to finally being able to eat something. Eagerly the man accepted the next bowl from Ayame, the daughter of the owner of the little restaurant. The man had short blond hair with a few strands of red in it. His face was rather handsome thanks to his ruby red eyes and his tanned skin, which made him look more like an exotic prince than a traveller.

"Whuua, that was great!" The man said. "Thanks again kid. I doubt we would have made it when it wasn't for you."

"Yeah thanks shrimp I thought we were goners –aru." The second man, two seats away from Naruto said. He had curled brown hair, a small goatee on his chin and unlike his companion he had a lighter skin colour.

Naruto thought the way he was eating was a bit strange. While he was using his left hand to eat the ramen he hold an orange book in his other. He seemed to be more focused on the book than on the ramen. Once in a while letting out a perverted giggle.

"No problem." Naruto said. "So who are you anyway and why didn't you had any food by you in the first place."

"Well to answer you your first question. I'm the awesome and most handsome man alive who all the ladies love." He winked at Ayame who had to flush at the man's action. Her father, Teuchi, however wasn't as found of the man as his daughter. He gave him a stern look that was saying 'I'm watching you and one more of your stunts and you're dead.'

"My name is H- Uhaaa!" He was saying when he was stopped by the man beside him who had spilled the still hot and half full ramen bowl on his lap. Teuchi smiled seeming to be happy about it.

The second man pulled him closer and whispered something into his ear that Naruto couldn't understand, but as they had finished the man beside him seemed to have forgotten the burning pain on his lap and gave Naruto a bright smile as nothing had ever happened.

"Sorry about that. My name is Haru. And this is my friend Shin." Haru said pointing first at himself and then to Shin.

"Nice to meet you –aru." Shin waved at Naruto still looking at the book in his right hand.

Naruto sweat dropped at Shins behaviour. He was… well strange.

"Does he do that a lot?" Naruto asked Haru.

"What? Oh you mean the reading thing! I tried to stop him from reading porn in public, but even I cannot do such a miracle."

"No, not that." Naruto said annoyed. These two were so strange. "I mean that whole –aru talking at the end of each sentence!"

"What are you talking about?"

"Yeah, what are you talking about shrimp. I have no porn addiction –aru!"

"Holly shit! Since when did you start talking like that?"

"Aru?"

"Forget that I even asked." Naruto said, while face palming. "Any way… why exactly didn't you two had any food?"

Haru seemed to be embarrassed as he pointed at Shin. "This idiot thought it would be a good idea to not take any food with us because he needed the space for his stupide porn books."

"Hey! Those are master pieces!" Shin said, pointing at his orange book. For the first time in the whole conversation he was facing them. "Written by the great Jiraiya – sensei –aru!"

"I still don't get what should be so good about reading this kind of stuff." Haru said. "I would never vast the space of my backpack for this junk."

"Yeah, right. And what about those panties you have stolen from those women from the last village we have stayed at –aru?"

To say that Naruto was shocked of how big of perverts these two were might have been an underestimation. He could only stare at the two, not being able to say anything to this matter.

"What would you know? At least I'm more focused on the real deal. If you had any pride in being a pervert then you would have improved your skills and would take good use of them. Unlike you I got a nice souvenir from Ayame-chan." With pride he hold up a baby-blue bra showing it for the world to see.

All the people around him had mixt reaction to it. Naruto just looked at him and the bra in pure disbelieve while asking himself how Haru did it without getting caught by Ayame. Ayame was completely embarrassed that her bra was stolen and every one was looking at it. So she covered herself up and screamed. Teuchi had turned completely red, a pot with hot water already in it in his hand. Shin on the other hand had an indifferent expression on his face and seemed to applaud to Haru's achievement mockingly.

"That's it!" Theuchi screamed. "I don't care if you're friends of Naruto's or not, what's enough is enough!"

Haru and Shin's eyes widen in horror. And before Naruto could say anything to calm Teuchi down, he was grabbed by the collar of his shirt and dragged away from the ramen restaurant by Haru. From the corner of his eyes Naruto could see Shin running beside them still reading his book.

"Come back you perverts!" Teuchi screamed after them.

"Like hell we will!" Haru screamed back.

"This is all your fault –aru!"

"Let me go I didn't do anything wrong!"

"I don't know what you're talking about." Haru screamed out in delight. "Now we don't have to pay for the food, haha!"

The three of them disappeared in the crowed of Konohas streets to escape a really angry Teuchi.

After ten minuet of running they had stopped and Haru had finally released Naruto from his grip. Naruto had to take deep breath from getting strangled the whole time and not being able to breathe right. He could only look at the two men in disbelief not only had it turned out that both of them were perverts, but now they had also dragged him along. He sure didn't want to have anything to do with does two.

As Naruto looked over to them he saw that both of them had turned their back to him and had an argument while sharing a laughter or two once in a while. This was it, the perfect opportunity for him to make his leave and never ever to be associated with those two idiots again. He already had his own bad reputation and he definitely doesn't want to have it even worse by being called a pervert by the age of eight years.

Naruto slowly turned around and slowly walked on his tiptoes to make less sound, for the two men to hear him leave. He made it a few feet's away from them when he was grabbed by his collar again.

"Where are you going shrimp –aru?" Shin asked, a smile on his face.

"We have a lot of things to do and you will show us around!" Haru exclaimed in equal delight than Shin. "And maybe we'll take you along on one of our famous panty raids." He whispered the last part into Naruto's ear.

By now Naruto's eye was twitching furiously.

"Don't want to." Naruto said plainly.

"Oh come on it'll be fun. Tell him Shin."

"If you'll show us around Konoha I might consider to give you one of my favourite books." Shin said almost in pain to convince Naruto to come with him and not wanting to part from one of his book, while making it sounds like it was the perfect deal without losing anything. "It's even a signed limited edition –aru."

"I don't want any of your stupid porn!" Naruto exclaimed in anger. "I just want to go home and be left alone by you two big perverts!"

"Well then it's settled we'll go on a panty raid!" Haru threw his fist into the air in victory. "I told you he likes us. He even complemented us."

Naruto eye only twitched more as he was dragged away by Shin. His arms were folded in front of his chest as he had given up to even try to get away from those perverts. But he still hoped that no one he knew would see him like this.

To Naruto's surprise it was more fun than he had thought at first it would be. At first they had started with a normal conversation, as it had turned out there were more to those two perverts than he had thought. The reason that they were even traveling, was because Haru was trying to cheer up Shin whose fiancé had died recently. And apparently the only way to get his mind off of her was to give him some porn books written by a certain Jiraiya- sensei. So Naruto came to the conclusion that Haru was the main pervert of the two who was able to turn others into perverts.

This was followed, to Naruto's delight, with some pranks on the villagers. Those included some classic pranks and some more advanced pranks. To make it short: Naruto felt happier than he had ever before, and before he knew it he changed his mind about those two. He couldn't see them as the perverts he had seen them at first, but more like his first real friends who didn't judged him for what the villagers were talking about him.

At some point however Haru had started to steal the lingerie from women again. Naruto wasn't sure if he should be impressed by the fact that Haru was able to steal them from women while they were wearing them, without them noticing, or not. Unknown to Naruto Haru had put the stolen lingerie on his pants so that it had looked like Naruto was the one who had stolen them and not Haru. Naruto got aware of this after he heard one after another of the women scream after they had realised that their lingerie was gone. And like Haru had planned Naruto was chased by an angry mob of women who wanted their lingerie back again. Meanwhile Shin and Haru were laughing their asses off. But thankfully Naruto was saved by the two of them.

While Haru had fun torturing Naruto, Shin was a good listener and gave Naruto a pep talk that he shouldn't give up on his dream. Naruto really felt like he could tell Shin everything. However sometimes he couldn't take Shin serious as for when they were talking and he had his nose in one of his books again.

In the end it was probably the best day Naruto had so far in his short live. But like all good things have to end so did this day. The sun had started to set and Naruto and his new friends were standing near the entrance of the village.

"And you really can't stay just for the night and leave tomorrow?" Naruto asked in disappointment.

"We told you that we have to leave by dusk." Haru said. "Our schedule is strict and we can't spent all our time with you even if we want to."

"It's ok. I understand." Naruto tried to hide his disappointment, but he knew that they could still hear it in his voice.

Naruto looked down on the ground not being able to look them both in the eyes at the moment. He soon felt a pair of hands resting on his shoulders and looking up he saw that they belonged to Haru who had a sad look on his face.

"Naruto, there is something you have to know before we leave. I want you to know that I'm really sorry for what I have done and I hope that you can forgive me one day."

"Sure… no problem I forgive you." Naruto wasn't sure why Haru was acting like this all of a sudden, after all it was just a prank he had pulled on him.

He continued to look puzzled at Haru who had still a sad smile on his face. Naruto kept doing so as Haru pulled his hands away from him and Shin started to talk to Naruto.

"We make sure to visit you once we have finished our journey –aru."

"Promise?" Naruto asked hopefully as he looked up to Shin.

"Promise." They both said. Shin added his usually –aru at the end, but none the less promised Naruto.

"Well that means good by for now." Said Haru who looked with sad eyes down at Naruto once more. "Come on Shin we better go."

Shin didn't answered his friend. He first looked down at Naruto and then back up to Haru.

"Can you go ahead? I just need a second –aru."

Haru looked questionable at Shin, but only shrugged before saying he give him five minutes before he would leave him alone and made his way out of the village. Naruto looked after him to see the blond man waiting at the giant doors for Shin to come.

"Naruto," Shin said getting Naruto's attention back. "I want to give you something. I think it's better if you have it." Naruto looked with a bit of excitement what Shin would give him. He saw how Shin was pulling something from under his shirt that was around his neck. With awe Naruto looked at the necklace that had an emerald like crystal on it, which Shin was holding in front of him. "It was a gift from my fiancé, before she died. She said it had magical powers and would protect me if I were ever in trouble. Beside I have this feeling you'll need it more than I do –aru."

"And I should believe that it is magical, why?" Naruto said flatly ruining the moment.

Shin's eye started to twitch at Naruto's words, but for the sake of the two of them he tried to stay calm and explain it better to Naruto. "Not like magical magic, but more like if you're in a situation you can't find a way out, just think of the person you hold dear and the necklace will do its work, at least that's what my fiancé had told me as she gave it to me –aru."

The person you hold dear, eh? The only person Naruto could think of right now was the red haired woman he had dreamed of last night. A soft smile appeared on his face as he remembered the feeling of her hand on his head as she stroke it.

Naruto didn't knew what he should say. He never got any presents from any one. With trembling hands he took the necklace and held it in front of him to get a better look at it.

"T-thank you." Naruto said in a weak voice. He still couldn't believe that Shin had given him a present. "But why would you give it to me, don't you want to keep it? I mean it's something that your fiancé gave you. I'm sure it means a lot to you."

"It's alright." Shin said holding a hand in front of him to insure that it was ok for Naruto to have it. "You know after spending the whole day with you mad me wonder, if she was still alive, would we have had a son like you." He scratched his cheek as he tried to avoid Naruto's gaze. "I just can't get rid of the thought of you being like the son I'll never have so I'm sure she would agree that I should give it to you -aru."

Naruto was taken back. No one had ever said something like this to him. He wasn't sure what he should do so he did what came up in his mind. He hugged Shins legs and started to cry, but they weren't tears of sadness but those of happiness.

"Thank you." Naruto whispered, but loud enough so that Shin could hear him. He could feel how two arms wrapped around him and returned the hug.

"I better go now. Haru is waiting for me –aru."

They both released the hug and Naruto looked after his new friends waving his farewell as they made their way to their next destination.

After his departure with his new friends, Naruto made his way to the playground. He didn't wanted to go to his apartment right away. There was no one waiting for him and after his talk with Shin he had the confident that he could make new friends now. So he made his way to the playground to see if there would be still some kids around his age he could play with.

As Naruto was walking along the street he notice a white flower on the sidewalk. He had never seen such a flower in the village before, and because of his little hobby of gardening Naruto knew what kind of plants were growing in the village, so he was a bit exited to find a new kind of flower. Maybe he could take it with him. But on a second glace he noticed that the flower had started to wither, some of its petals were already on the ground. He started to think of a way to save the flower, but he could only think of giving it some water from the nearby river.

Wasting no time to save the flower Naruto ran down the hill to get to the river and get some water for the flower. As soon as he had filled his hands with some of it he made his way back. He tried to be carefully to not spill any of the water, while still being fast to get back to the flower.

He gave it the water it needed and stared at it as if expecting to see how it would turn back to its former self, but nothing happened. Naruto stayed still for what felt like five minutes, but still nothing had happened.

Naruto tried to imagine what the flower had looked like before it had started to wither. He lifted the flower a bit to see it from a different angle and hold on to her. In his head emerged an image of the flower as it had been. He could feel a soft tingle in his hand that was on the flower, but as fast as it came it was gone.

A few seconds had past and Naruto was sure nothing would happen. With a sad look he continued his way to the playground.

Unknown to Naruto a man in a coat and a hood over his head appeared just as he had walked away. The man looked after Naruto for a while until the blond had turned around the next corner. The man slowly turned his attention to the withered flower on the ground, but to the man's surprise he could watch as the petals, that were lying on the ground, flew back up to the flower and attached themselves. The flower shifted a bit before it was standing in its full glory once again. It was like nothing had happened in the first place.

The man narrowed his eyes under the hood as he kneeled down and pick up the flower. He turned it around in his hand for a while before he once more looked in the direction, Naruto had went to. With one swift move of his other hand he enveloped the flower in a golden sphere of energy, keeping it safe from any harm. With one last glance at the direction Naruto had went to the man disappear in a bright light.

Things didn't went well for Naruto. As soon as he had arrived at the playground the parents had called their children to them so that they would stay away from Naruto. His attempted to make new friends failed and he was forced to play by himself. Naruto sat on the swing as he watched the other children leave with their parents. He thought it must be nice to have a family waiting for one at home with a warm meal made by their mother.

The sun was almost gone and Naruto was all alone on the playground when he decided that it would be time to go home as well. With lowered head he made his way back home.

But to Naruto's surprise he wasn't alone anymore. In front of him stood a man in a coat and a hood over his head, hiding his face from Naruto. Naruto could feel the tension in the air as the man slowly walked closer to him. It was like the man in front of Naruto was radiation some kind of evil aura from him. For some reason Naruto thought his legs would give up any second now. It was really frightened what kind of effect this man had on him just by being nearby.

At first Naruto thought he would go past him to take his own child with him, but there were no other children on the playground – he was the only one left. Naruto tried to move but he found himself failing in doing so. His legs felt like jelly, not being able to move an inch. And then the man stopped, right in front of him. Naruto slowly looked up to see the man in the eyes, but he couldn't see them the hood was covering half his face only his black beard was visible for Naruto.

"Leaving already?" the man asked in a deep and calm voice.

"W-who are you?" Naruto managed to ask. He was scared, but he tried to hide it as good as he could. The man was giving him the chills and he didn't knew for how much longer he could keep up this façade.

"It matters little who I am, boy." The man said, seemingly getting annoyed. "All you have to know is that I have been looking for you for over eight years now. And finally your guardian made a mistake, making it possible for me to find your little hideout."

Naruto looked nervous around to see if he could find an opening to run from this crazy man, but there was none. Did he even had a chance to run from this man in the first place?

"You know," the man said again with a hint of anger and annoyance in his voice. "At first I thought you would be much taller and more muscular, you know… more dangerous. After all he told me you would be the bane of my existence. Now imagine how I felt to see that this person is nothing more than a child, a mortal child!"

Naruto could hear thunder above him, as the night sky was slowly filled with dark thunder clouds. It was like they reacted to how the man was feeling.

"I did all this preparations the whole day long to find a mortal child I could have easily killed, but then something happed I didn't expected to see."

Naruto watched as the man pulled something from under his coat and to his surprise he was holding the flower Naruto had seen early on his way to the playground. But unlike before the flower seemed to be alright and not withered anymore. Naruto knew for sure that there was no way this man was showing him a replacement. So what happened to the flower? And why was it like this?

"I would have never imagine that you would have those kind of powers, but well I think it was to be expected considering your lineage." The man said with a mischief smile on his face. "But what surprised me the most was your control over your powers, truly outstanding for a young mortal. I'm sure if you had the time to truly learn to handle them probably that you could become a true obstacles to my plans. Now I'm glad that I made preparation, and to think that you're one of them, ha! After all, now I can make sure that you won't roam this world any longer. Not that you were supposed to exist in the first place."

Naruto couldn't believe this. He did this to the flower? There was no way he could have done it. He is the bottom last in his class he had no power whatsoever. And yet here there was this man saying he was too powerful and a threat to him.

"L-look if it bothered you so much that I might… k-kill you then I'll just promise I won't and you just let me go, alright?"

Once more thunder was heard in the sky. The man laugh as if that what Naruto had just said was a joke.

"Nice try boy, but your words mean nothing. Your fate has been sealed the day you were born. Now vanish from this world!"

What happened next was too fast for Naruto to realise what was happening. Whit one leap forward the man slammed his hand against Naruto's stomach. Naruto could feel that the man was doing something to him. It was like he was forcing something in Naruto while Naruto felt weakened by it, as if something was gone. This was followed by enormous pain. He had to hold his stomach for pain right after the man had taken his hand off of his stomach. Naruto had tried to cry out in pain, but felt it was difficult to do so. He slowly looked up to the man to ask him what he did to him, but he couldn't manage to make any sound at this point. Holding one hand out he tried to hold on to the man's leg, but before he could do so the man was slowly fading his mad laugh heard over the thunder in the sky.

It didn't took long for the man to disappear. At this point Naruto had given up to fight the pain in his stomach and the feeling of getting weaker. The last he heard was the sound of hundreds of chains moving against iron bars, before darkness embraced him and he fell unconscious.

Well that's the first new chapter. I hope you liked it.

Like I said in the AN, the next chapter will be out in two days, so until then.