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Before I say Anything, I am sorry that this is not a new chapter. I've been working on it and I've hit a rut, and had an epiphany of sorts.

I started writing this story about a year ago, and from then to now I've learned a lot more about story writing than most would think, and looking at this story now, I know a screwed up badly on this in a few places and I did a crappy job at recovering.

I did want to go through reviews because there was one review that stood out quite a bit and i will admit it did bother me. I respect the users review, although it was a negative one, but I wish they had their facts straight.

They claimed that if Jaune does not have the physical strength to wield a certain weapon, then he cannot use it. This is a matter of fact, false in the way I wrote this story. There was literally a part of chapter four that went into that. Jaune's semblance is more in-depth than just being good with weapons. There are positives and negatives (Some I've yet to write about) of his semblance.

Secondly, and this is the part that I accept, they said that Jaune should not have beaten Pyrrha. I agree, but I tried my best to explain that she only lost because she was distraught. That was poor of me looking back on it since even if she did lose, it should've been a much closer fight.

Which brings me to where I am now. I've thought about doing this with Jaune The White Dragon Slayer due to its early chapters which were poorly written, but it doesn't get enough attention to be a good idea, and it really wouldn't be interesting because I would have no idea how to go about it.

What I'm trying to say is… I want to re-write this. I want to go about this story on a different angle. I already have a few ideas on how he can unlock his semblance early on, and I really want to re-write this so it starts on initiation. But I could also just keep going with how it is if that's what people prefer.

So that's where you guys come in. If I get a good amount of reviews encouraging this re-write. I will do so, and remove this story because I won't go back to it, so there's no point in just having it be here when I have a re-write of it going on.

I may not feel entirely confident as an author, but I love this idea, and I won't give it up.