Hello everyone! So I got an idea from Willowxox for a fanfiction, and I really liked it. So this is a new fanfiction, and for those of you who don't know me, I'm the writer of "a Single rose", "Nothing is what it seems", and I took down "the Erudite prodigy". So please give me your opinion, I'm going to TRY to handle criticism better because I have been on here long enough to know that your opinions will help. Also again I DO NOT OWN THE DIVERGENT TRIOLOGY AND THIS IS THE ONLY DISCLAIMER I WILL DO. Shout out to Willowxox.
Tris POV
Hi, my name is Tris Prior and I'm 20 years old. I live in Los Angeles, California. Everyone says I'm "drop dead gorgeous." But I don't think that's true. I mean I'm totally not ugly, but I wouldn't go as far as saying I'm gorgeous. I have golden blonde hair that stops just above my butt, these plain blue-grey eyes, and I'm only about 5.4 in height, and I only have a small tan. Thanks to living in California for the past year to shoot a movie, I actually have a slight tan and am not ghostly pale.
For those of you who don't know me, my full name is Beatrice Prior. I starred in the film "The Fault in our Stars" as Hazel Grace Lancaster. I got a lot of publicity off of that movie, which I hate. The only real friends I actually have are my co-star Ansel Elgort, who played Gus, and my best friend and manager Christina, and my aunt Tori who has been my legal guardian since my parents kicked me out. Everyone else just wants to be friends with me because of my publicity. Ansel and I are considered Hollywood's next "star couple" But I don't think I could ever date him, he's basically like my brother, and he treats me like his sister.
"Tris! Hello! Hurry up or we're going to miss our flight." Says my best friend, Christina. I grab my bags and load them into my baby blue Jeep Wrangler that has my name professionally done in black on the side.
We have to pick up Ansel. I can't wait to see him. I haven't seen my best friend in at least two weeks. So once we're both done loading up all of our stuff we start our drive to Ansel's house. He actually only lives an hour away from me. So to waste time, I turn on my radio to listen to one of my favorite songs. Love me like you do.
You're the light, you're the night You're the fear, I don't care So love me like you do, love me like you do
You're the color of my blood
You're the cure, you're the pain
You're the only thing I wanna touch
Never knew that it could mean so much, so much
Cause I've never been so high
Follow me to the dark
Let me take you past our satellites
You can see the world you brought to life, to life
Love me like you do, love me like you do
Touch me like you do, touch me like you do
What are you waiting for?
On the edge of paradise Love me like you do, love me like you do Yeah, I'll let you set the pace Love me like you do, love me like you do
Every inch of your skin is a holy grail I've got to find
Only you can set my heart on fire, on fire
Yeah, I'll let you set the pace
Cause I'm not thinking straight
My head spinning around I can't see clear no more
What are you waiting for?
Love me like you do, love me like you do
Touch me like you do, touch me like you do
What are you waiting for?
Cause I'm not thinking straight
My head spinning around I can't see clear no more
What are you waiting for?
Love me like you do, love me like you do
Touch me like you do, touch me like you do
By the end of the song Chris and I were both yelling. Getting weird looks from people. Once it ends we both just start laughing. I enjoy feeling this way, free and young. I never got that when I was younger. I didn't have the best childhood, I was bullied. But now I'm the one who's laughing.
One of them was named Molly. She was one of my worst bullies in high school. But a few weeks ago she saw me and asked for an autograph. I laughed and signed it, it ended with her figuring out that I was the one she bullied.
We arrive at Ansel's house, and I run up to his door. I don't bother knocking, so I just walk in. "I'M HERE!" I yell, and hear footsteps coming down the stairs. Instead of seeing Ansel, I see Lauren, Ansel's wife. She knows that I have no interest in dating Ansel, so she doesn't mind me, In fact I'm pretty sure she treats me like her little sister. "TRIS?!" She yells, and runs up to hug me.
"Lauren. I need… to breath." I say, and she lets go of me. Then Christina walks in. They both squeal and run up and hug each other. "Is Ansel almost ready?" I ask, and she nods.
"ANSEL! TRIS IS HERE!" I hear a gasp, and thundering down the stairs. I see Ansel and squeal. I run up and hug him. "You ready to go?" I ask, and he nods.
"Help me get my bags?" He asks, and I nod. I race him up his stairs, and into his room. He ends up winning and dancing around. I throw his pillow at him, and he falls to the ground dramatically. "Tris, how could you. Guess I won't be going on vacation with you." He says, making me screech and shake my head. He laughs and grabs his bags, while I grab his one suitcase.
We finish loading all of his stuff and say bye to Lauren. She is modeling at a fashion show, so she couldn't come along. We start our drive to the airport, catching up on everything that we missed.
We board the plane, in first class. I've only flown first class three times before and it was amazing. The flight attendant gives us some food, and we start to go.
SKIPPING THE WHOLE PLANE FLIGHT!
We arrive at Chicago and get our rental car. It's a black Toyota hybrid, with tinted windows. So we enter our beach house address into the GPS and get going.
We get to our beach house an hour later, and start unpacking all of our stuff. There's two rooms, so Christina and I are sharing a room. Luckily we got the biggest room, which had two full beds, and a bathroom connected to it. Ansel's room has one full bed, and two bunk bed, but also has a bathroom connected to it.
We put all of our bags in the walk in closet, and get changed into swim wear. My bikini top is a pink and orange twist top from Victoria's Secret, with pink string bottoms. I brush out my hair, and put on flip flops.
Eventually Christina comes out, and so does Ansel. We grab a volleyball and run out. I end trying to jump on Ansel's back for a piggy back ride, but I miss and fall in the sand. He starts laughing, but stops when I pull him down with me. A group of people stand watching us.
It's not my turn to laugh, but I stop when he picks me up and runs towards the shore. "ANSEL NO! STOP!" I yell, but before I can say anything else he throws me in the water. The water is warm, but not to warm. I come back above the water, pouting. I cross my arms and sit in the water. He laughs and comes to pick me up out of the water. "LET'S PLAY VOLLYBALL!" I shout in his ear, making him scream.
I laugh and run to the shore to get my volleyball. "Hey, are you Tris Prior?" Asks a little girl with strawberry blond hair, and brown eyes asks. I nod and she smiles. "I love your acting. So sad when… wait! Is that Ansel Elgort?" She asks and I nod. "Ella!" Calls the girls' mother or sister or whatever she is. She waves and runs off.
A group of people starts walking towards me. "ANSEL, CHRISTINA!" I yell, not wanting to face people on my own. They come by my side, as the group of people stand about ten feet away from me. "Hi! You must be Tris, Christina, and Ansel!" Says a guy with very tan skin, and brown chocolate eyes. I nod and wave.
"Well I'm Uriah, this is my brother Zeke, and his best friend Four…" I laugh at the name
"Is there a problem?" The guy 'Four' asks. I smirk and shrug "I don't know, is there?" I ask, causing Ansel and Christina both to snicker. He smiles "Nope, not at all." He says, and I smile "As I was saying, this is Four, Shauna my girlfriend, Marlene, Will, Uriah's girlfriend, and Lynn." He says, we casually say hi to each of them.
"Do you all wanna play volleyball?" I ask, and they nod.
"WAIT! Before we start are you two dating?" I think Marlene asks. I look at Ansel and crack up, and so does he. "What? What are you two laughing at?" Zeke asks, and I just keep laughing "Me and him? DATING? Wow you really got me there, he's just my best friend almost brother type." I say, controlling my laughter
"Oh yeah? In that movie you seemed more than best friends." Four says, making me stop laughing and Ansel stops too. "We were acting smart one." I say, and he shuts up.
After a while of awkward silence we break off into teams. I have Christina, Ansel, Uriah, and Four on our team. Zeke has Shauna, Lynn, Marlene, and Will. I notice Christina keeps looking at Will. I smirk and serve the ball. The ball comes back over the net, and Christina spikes it.
We cheer as they miss the ball. "ONE TO ZERO." I yell, and serve the ball again. This goes on for a while until we end up making it to ten points first. I cheer and dance around. I dance with Christina, while the other team sits there pouting at us. Ansel throws me over his shoulder, and runs all over the beach.
I laugh as the others chase after us. We run towards the water, smiling along the way. I get thrown back in the water, but this time I take him down with me. Everyone gets into a splashing fight. I run out of the water, with everyone following me. I slip and Four falls on top of me. He mumbles a sorry and gets up.
I blush and go back to Christina who is still staring at Will. "CHRISTINA!" I yell, making her scream and blush. "You like him." I whisper, and she blushes even more. I laugh and we walk towards our possible friends.
We sit down and talk until the sun starts going down. I sit down next to Four and Christina on Ansel's lap. I smile and watch the sun set. This is the life I've longed for, actual friends. We make our own choices, and I believe that someday I'll make somebody else smile when they see me.
Hey, first chapter of my new story. Review, favorite, follow. I'll listen to your opinions this time ;)