Hey Everyone,

I realise I have only just created the first chapter. However, it is not how I wanted it. Having read the reviews, I noticed a few things. 'I got lost on the road of the story.'

When I first started to write this, it was not going to take as many turns as what it seemed to do. I just shut myself down and let my mind wander with the story. Having re-read my own story after some reviews, I noticed the same things that many had a problem with.

The problem with that is, I have the same fucking problem with it. It is baffling to me, how I was able to fuck up on the things I myself wish were not in the story. I look at the same things in stories and criticize them as well. I am a FUCKING HYPOCRITE.

Therefore, to address the problems I will rewrite the story, more to my liking. In addition, chapters will be about half the length, with more frequent updates. I found myself having to look back over things the further I went in to the chapter.

The story line will not change much; however, it will be different to what I have posted. I hope that those who already liked the first version enjoy the second version more. Moreover, I hope that those who, like myself, think better of the second coming of this story.

I appreciate the feedback everyone. It helps to make people better.

My last thing to say, better this happened now instead of 10 chapters in.

The Councilman