This is my first ever fanfiction so PLEASE feel free to give me some feedback. It is a short first chapter, but I'm testing the waters before adding a second.

Anything in italics means it is spoken in Dothraki.

The khalasaar had stopped for the night just as the sun was melting below the horizon. Dany was grateful to finally have a chance to rest. Her body had been failing her lately. Ever since her belly had grown visible, riding had grown more uncomfortable. Drogo, who had been handing his red over to a bloodrider, glanced back and saw his Khaleesi shift in discomfort. He quickly went to her and lifted her from the silver, allowing his hands to cup her face ever so briefly. Doreah and Irri rushed to her side and led her to their tent. He watched her waddle in clear pain. It hurt him to see Daenerys like this and Drogo knew she wouldn't be able to continue much longer.

Once inside, Dany thanked the gods to see the steaming copper tub awaiting her. Irri helped her to remove her too tight clothing and she sighed in relief. Doreah had added lavender and mint to the bath, Dany's favorite. She was hurriedly helped in and seated. As one of her girls washed her shoulders, Dany stared at her burgeoning stomach. She had sever weeks left to go before Rhaego arrived and she wasn't sure how much longer she could go on this way. The pain and discomfort was beginning to get to her. How could small body handle any more growing? For a moment, she silently cursed the child inside of her. Dany immediately took it back, she loved Rhaego already, she just wanted him out. As she stretched to relieve the ache in her ribs, she saw the blood in the water.

Drogo was sitting by a fire feasting and laughing with his men when he heard the deep, screaming groan. He saw Doreah running towards the midwives' tent wearing a fearful look. That was enough for him to drop his horn and race to his Khaleesi. As he entered, Daenerys let out another cry. He saw the terrified look in the eyes that met his. Sweat poured down her face and she heaved for air. He rushed to her side and knelt by the tub.

Drogo took her head into his hands "Yer jalan atthirari anni, what is happening?" he managed to get out. Her hand lifted to grasp one of his and he felt the force behind it. "It's too soon! Not yet, it's too soon," Dany cried out in the Common Tongue. Seeing the look in her Khal's eyes, she tried to explain between gasps, "Rhaego is coming. It's too soon. He can't come yet. He won't make it." Dany let out another groan through gritted teeth as Drogo noticed more blood in the bath water.