REWRITE!

Wind rustle through the leaves, fall down in the chilly November wind. Cats screeched and crunching of leaves, stepped on by people passing through the red, orange, and yellow colored park. Danny hold his arm and covered his face with his hair, trying to hide the bruises and scars by the on passers.

He sighed a breath of annoyance, feeling down even though it was a month away from his favorite season, Winter. He was wearing simple cloths, plain white baggy shirt with his signature red oval with a storm grey jacket over it with a pair of jeans and black sneakers. Also a dark green scarf with his DP logo on it that Sam gave him on Christmas. You won't believe how many of his DP fan girls attacked him for it! His friends just watched too!

He settled next to the willow tree by the lake, surrounded by trees and bushes. He grabbing his scarf and wrapped it around his injured arm, making a cloth cast. He looked up with a grimace. He took a beating from Dash and just had to encounter Ember right after, not even getting a chance to change, so he took a blow to the wall. She even took off when he crashed into the wall too! 'The ghosts are just getting ruder..' He thought absentmindedly frowning. He should be use to this already.

He took a deep breath before stretching his back from the rubble of the wall. Danny gathered his things with his good arm and made his way home.

'I wonder wheres Sam and Tucker, and yes, Sam is his girlfriend. They started dating two years after he got his powers. He sighed dreamily thinking about Sam ,and happy thinking about Tucker his best friend ever. He'll just have to go home and put up with his parents talking about ripping his ego half molecules by molecules. He grimace even more thanking the lords for having him to even survive this long...

The streets were silent like if some ominous music was going on. He passed by all the ally ways and checked them just in case, but only seeing cats along the railings of some houses growling at him. He raised his eyes skeptical about how everything feels and look like.

He only shooked his head and continued down the street to his Best friends houses to "Hang" more like talk about Danny's falling grade in social studies and Math, He doesn't even try! Ghost business always makes him fall asleep in classes, but he was good in science thanks to his parents.

He looked around, seeing no one, he made a not melt-able Ice crystal for his sister's, Jazz, birthday. The crystal shimmed in the sunset light, the size of his hand. He decided that his friends wouldn't be home and at his place instead suffering through his mom trying to bake a cake... He just shivered at the thought.

Danny took a shot cut home, singing one of his favorite song by Green Day:

I walk a lonely road,

The only one that I have ever know

Don't know where it goes

But its home to me, And I walk alone

I walk this empty street

on the Boulevard of Broken Dreams

Where the city sleeps

And I'm the only one and I walk alone

I walk alone

I walk alone

I walk alone

I walk a-lone...

Danny trailed off the lyrics as he walked in front of his house. From his view it seems like the whole building will fall over with UFO first, then the FENTON sign, then the building. His foot steps creaked on the wooden stairs to the door. He tried to open the lock, but it was lock. He left his keys at school, so he looked around for the spare. He flipped the Fenton HouseHold sign on the door, revealing the bronze, spare key.

The door slowly creaked open as if he was expecting a surprise. It was very dark with his shadow stretching over the wooden floors. Danny flipped on the switch, first hing he sees is burn marks. His eyes widen in alert. 'Shiaaww' he thought almost swearing, thinking one of the ghost got in his home again and sighed, then Danny saw bullet holes... His parents don't own REAL guns... Only ghost ones

'Robbery?!' He thought, especially in this time of day. He was worried form his family as his eyes turned creased down with worry, looking around the dimly lighted room. he slowly closed the door, but at soon as he closed it he regretted it. Cuffs were immediately trapped on him, his capture jerked him around making him drop his gift. Eyes blurred with tears, widening at the sight before him with his mind screaming in terror, telling him its not true.

Blood was splattered on the walls, 5 motionless bodies half laid on the table, legs and bottom in chairs. Crimson ooze through their cloths, soaking everything red. Those five people were his family and best friends. He finally notice the bullets holes through them. His eyes looked just above them,"Happy Birthday", it said. It seemed like they were shot unexpectedly in the middle of a celebration. That snapped him, his legs gave out, wildly struggling against the bonds. He was jerked around to his capture and family murderer kicking the broken ice in the process.

His eyes filled with hatred as he saw Agent O. Agent O was grinning before saying "Well you do have some humanity left, but that will be more fun..." Chuckling quietly, but tried changing, but couldn't. Danny's murderous eyes turned terrified, before he was stabbed in the back by Agent K and blacking out from traumatize and pain in his body and mind.

He was dragged unconsciously to his new hell... Where It will begin...

So! How was this one? Bad? good? TELL ME WHAT I DID WRONG! Is This story better? How was it better and why! Please tell in the reviews!

Also sorry this took long! We(My family and I) took an unexpected trip to Vietnam!(Ah my country) No electronics... just Nature! Ee, I enjoyed it and hated it. Bored out of my mind and amazed... Wow.. Oh well!

Also! If you are condused why Danny's ice broke so easily, well it was NORMAL ice, not his indestructible, un meltable ice. (Yes he has that power)

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