So to let everybody be notified, yes I am making the revision of Farewell Marshall... only it won't be under that name. See, one of the reasons why I stopped making Farewell Marshall over two chapters was that it just felt like a story already done before. A person comes over, reunites with the one he lost, and wants to take him home while he is torn between leaving the home he's known for so long or going back to the home he once knew.

It's been done is what I'm saying, I could have done more with it. One thing I hate doing is stories that have already been done so many times or at least with just little differences. After some thought I did come up with a few new ideas based on the Farewell Marshall concept, but some of them didn't work out

-The first one had the idea of Marshall being from a rich family who had a life such as parents, rich but carrying owners who used their wealth for good, friends who also rich dogs but close to Marshall (whose real name would be revealed to me Marcus) and one of them even had a crush on him. Marcus would have been lost during a storm on a boat and lost his memory, arriving on the shore where Ryder and Chase found him and took him in. Problem with that one was that I felt that there was no resolution towards it when I thought about it. The ending seemed to be actually boring, and I wasn't going to make a story with a terrible ending.

-Second idea was a lot more fantasy based and very off the charts. In that idea, it would have revealed that Marshall was a prince from a dog nation in Europe and he left it to pursue his own path in life. The reason why he has to go back now? He has to marry a rival nation's princess for peace to be between them while dealing with politics, his own friends torn between losing their best friend (and some of them angry at the lie such as Chase) and the fact that he loves Everest more then this other girl. Also her brother killed his best friend and got away with it. That one I didn't go with because I pretty much realizes during planning I was copying an episode of Lloyd in Space with more drama and such.

However, there were both aspects that I actually liked of the two. I liked the idea of Marshall having more of a bigger life in his past, as well as the amnesia aspect. It would create an interesting dynamic for Travis and Marshall, the former who remembers his best friend and pal and wants him back while the latter finds somebody who knew him before he lost his memory and met Ryder. A past that he has always wanted to know about, but is unsure of what will happen when he does learn of it.

I like the idea of Marshall having to take a bigger responsibility then that of Paw Patrol. It's my personal theory that Adventure Bay is on a large island, kinda like one of the Hawaiian islands but maybe closer to actual country of America (or an island near Canada since the show is made there and episodes are published in Canada sooner then here in America) which I would be okay doing... only I've ever been in Montreal aka French Canada for six months on a college study program. And Quebec is a very different province from the rest of Canada I hear.

So yeah, no Canada. Sorry Great White North, you just aren't for me.

So yeah, combining the two seemed to be the plan and I did come up with something... that has the emotion aspect of Farewell Marshall in there no doubt... but it also has occult elements in it. Needless to say fans of the first story are going to get something different then what they got in the first two chapters. I promise to make it as emotionally engaging and interested as I did before, but you should also expect action and fight scenes in this one as well.

If that gives you interest, then I hope you will like the new story and revamp of Farewell Marshall:

"Partners In Fire"