Hello readers I do not have a witty pet name for, this is the first full chapter of "While They Watched". I want to thank you all for the lovely reviews and messages you have left. It really makes me happy to see that you are all enjoying this so far! :) I am sorry for the delay in quick updates. I've been doing some performance things and I just went with my best friend to celebrate his birthday, so I've been BUSY BUSY! but I am hoping it will calm down very soon. I'm sorry this might be kind of bad and boring, but this is the chapter that introduces the characters, which is a hard thing to do! Lol! Also sorry it's not as long as I had hoped it would be, but anyways... Two more people have submitted an OC, so here is the current and final list of OC's that will be used.
OC's are as followed
Kalel Maldonado ~ (me)
Bonnie Reims ~ beautesansepines
Aiden Anderson ~ (me)
Zoey Richards ~ Kate the Cactus Kitty
Chris Jennings ~ Smarvin
Brandon Gallagher ~ Overrated Fiction
Nolan Jones ~ (me)
Avi Carpenter ~ AviBassCannon
Lori Phillips ~ (me)
Rosland (Ross) Harvey ~ SouthParkWritter197
Dax Sykes ~ (me)
The only OC I don't have a picture for is Ross or (SouthParkWritter197) So if you need help or want me to find a picture for you, just let me know. :)
Please favorite, share, and review! I'm means so much to me! I hope you all enjoy this chapter, because I had a lot of fun writing it! Please let me know if I am portraying your character incorrectly so I can fix it! Thank you all so much for joining this journey with me, and excuse this introduction/authors note for being so long, but without further adieu here is the first official chapter of "While They Watched"
*Also don't mind the other pictures on Photobucket. I'm using a folder to save some Facebook and Instagram pictures*
While They Watched
Chapter 1
"The Cabin in The Woods"
~KirstinTaylorAcappella~
The snow seemed to be falling harder as I stepped out of the pickup, my boots crunching the snow under me. Stan began to pull my luggage out and I followed him as he moved towards the ginormous double doors of the snow covered cabin home. Stan gave me a small reassuring smile before pushing the doors open with his one free hand. I was in awe from the interior of the vacation home.
I knew that Token and Red had a lot of money and could afford something extreme like this, but I didn't know a home could be this big and spacious.
I glanced around at all the unfamiliar faces before stumbling on the couple chatting with another couple, beer bottles in their hands.
"Okay, you have to let me see it!" The black haired girl exclaimed as she grabbed onto Red's left hand to examined the sparkly rock placed on her finger. They squealed in unison as Token and the other male chuckled at them. "Oh my gosh, it's so big and pretty! That must of cost a fortune!" Red laughed and looked at the man across from her. "We're setting you up for a disaster aren't we Dax?"
The man laughed as he wrapped his arm around his girlfriend. "Don't be giving Wendy any ideas right now." I walked towards the small group, letting Red spot me first.
"Kalel, you made it!"
I wrapped my arms around her, giggling at how buzzed she already seemed. Token gently grasped my shoulder as he began to introduce me to their friends. "I see you already met Stan?" Token questioned as Stan placed himself next to me, my luggage still in his hands. "Oh, yeah. we met when I was stranded on the side of the road, it was very romantic."
"Well thank god we decided on a flight here instead, i'm a terrible driver in the snow." Dax stated with a chuckle. "Hey, where's the booze?" a curly haired girl questions as she sneaks up behind Token. Token smiled grabbing a hold of the girl and squeezing her. "Hey!" He faced us with a smile. "Guys, this is my cousin Lori, I'm so glad you made it Lor!"
Token rubbed her hair with his knuckles and she giggled as she tried to free herself from his grip. "Oh you don't wanna go there Token, I'm sure you don't them to see me taking you down like I did when we were kids." Token laughed, releasing his grip. "You got me there."
Bonnie smiled as she frolicked from person to person, trying to greet each and every one there. With each hello, Bonnie would smile. Hoping that the other person would be kind enough as well, which was the case most of the time. She noticed how her friend Bebe had yet to show up, so she searched for more new faces.
The blonde stopped on her toes, as her eyes rested on a tall shaggy blond haired boy laughing with what seemed like a friend of sorts. She took a deep breath, grabbing a beer from the table next to her.
She seemed to tip-toe over to the boy, stopping to rock on her feet before she got too close. The blond turned his head toward the girl staring at him, and smiled. Bonnie quickly bolted awkwardly away from the man, silently cursing herself for her stupidity.
"Good job, doofus. Can't even talk to a boy properly" She mumbles as she makes it into a long hallway, before chugging the beer.
Brandon watched as a petite blonde girl ran past him and into the hallway, almost knocking over an expensive glass vase. He wondered if it was really in his best interest to be here right now. He'd much rather have stayed in his own dorm and dealt with the nearby frat boys. "Wow, creeper much?" A bulky bearded man stood next to him with a ugly smirk across his face."Like watching young girls, huh?"
The brunette shook his head at the stranger, not wanting to have a problem with the man, but also wanting him to go away. "Please, leave me alone." The man laughs, making his stomach jiggle from the motion. "I'm only joking, pull your dick out of your ass bro."
"So how did you end up on the side of the road, Kalel?" Red asked me. "I ran out of gas, and eventually this creep drove by and asked me to suck his dick in exchange for a ride." Red giggled. "Good thing you found Stan then huh?" I smiled at her, turning to observe the full house some more. My smile disappeared when I noticed something strange. My mouth parted in shock and confusion.
"I'll be right back." I stated as I moved away from the group and directly towards two guys, one of which was very familiar to my eyes. "Look bro your not gonna get any pussy if you just sit here all ni-" The man stopped as I approached him.
"Well, Well, Well. If it isn't little miss roadside whore. Come back for a renegotiation?" I pulled my hand up, forcefully hitting his cheek and making him stumble to his side. "What the fuck? You bitch!" I grabbed Stan by his arm and led him up the stairs. "Help me find my room please." Stan laughed as he let me lead him up the steps. "What did you do this time Cartman?!" I heard someone exclaim with a laugh as I walked out of the room.
Kenny was the only one Aiden knew, but he frankly couldn't care less about any of these people or any engagement as long as there would be free booze all week long. Aiden swallowed his drink as he stood with his roommate, having a discussion on how many beers it would take to 'hit it' with other girls in the room.
"Um, what about her?"Aiden nodded to a pretty blonde girl who seemed to have her eyes on Kenny. Kenny turned with a smile observing the girl before she ran off.
"Zero, she's a straight up ten." Aiden chuckled as he drank his beverage. The two guys moved their bodies towards a loud slapping sound and chuckled as they saw a short, blonde haired girl walking away from Cartman as he held his reddened cheek. "How many for her?" Kenny questions. Aiden looks at him, before back at the girl who was walking up the stairs with a boy.
"Give me a sec." Aiden follows behind the two strangers as he makes his way up the steps.
Cartman rubbed his, now bruised cheek, as another guy appeared next to him. "Can you believe that whore?! What gives her the right to just hit a man for no reason?" The boy just shrugged his puffy shoulders at him. "Yeah Cartman, she's a bitch." Cartman grabbed the boy by his shoulder, praising him for his agreement. "You're the only cool person here Ross, besides me of course. All these other fuckers are lame."
Ross was too busy staring at the beautiful black haired girl across the room. He had never really gotten much notice from Wendy, no matter what he did. She seemed to have dated every guy in this room except for him, which he knew was an exaggeration, but he was still beginning to feel agitated at this. He watched as some guy lazily rested his arm around her waist, and he felt jealous and a bit saddened by the sight.
"Don't you agree?" Cartman pulled him from his thought. "Agree about what?"
"That most of these bitches probably have corn flake vagina."
"What the hell is corn flake vagina?"
Cartman sighed as he began to explain. "It's when a girl has a dry crusty vag." Ross sighed quietly to himself, sipping on a red cup with some unknown liquid in it.
Avi stood in one of the corners of the room, observing all the strangers around him. He was happy to be here and accompany Craig, but he felt extremely out of place. He wasn't used to being around new people for an extended period of time. The only environment he knew was the kitchen of his restaurant, where he had initially met Craig. "Man this is gonna be a crazy week." Craig stated to him as he rested against the wall. "We already have some drama."
Avi nodded in response, watching as everyone mingled with each other. "Are you sure I should be here?" Avi asked Craig, scratching his head. "Of course, man! Who else would be my plus one?" They both chuckled lightly. "I'm gonna stay away from that one girl, I don't want to get bitch slapped like Cartman did." Craig pointed out
"I'm sure she's not bad, I thought you said he was an ass."
"He is, but so am I." Avi tilted his away from craig. "Yeah, that's true."
"Hey! You made it!" Wendy exclaimed as her friend Zoey came through the front doors. "Red, Token. This is Zoey! We go to Harvard together." Zoey smiled shyly at the newly engaged couple. "Congratulations on your engagement." Wendy pulled Zoey away from the couple with smile. "Did you get here okay?" Zoey laughed. "Yeah, I just had a long stop over when I was in Ohio." Wendy giggled as she looked around the room.
"What?"
"Oh, nothing. I've just been scanning for any potential mates for you, that's all."
"Wait, what?" Zoey asked, looking around the room. "Don't do that!" Wendy laughed and pulled Zoey by the shoulders. "Why? Look, there are a lot of cute boys here. Maybe you'll get lucky this week." Zoey laughed, pulling away from Wendy. "Oh my gosh, you're awful!"
"What about him?" Wendy pointed to a brown haired boy walking through the front doors. "You guys would be perfect because you both are late as hell." Zoey smiled, showing her white teeth, as she pushed the black haired girl away from her. "Shut up!"
Chris stepped through the front doors, searching through the full room to find a certain red headed girl. He hadn't seen Red in over a month but they had kept in contact after she left Michigan from visiting family. He was shocked, and a bit saddened when she called him to say she had gotten engaged to her high school sweetheart, but accepted the invited non-the-less.
"Oh my God! Chris!" Red wrapped her arms around the skinny boy, jumping with joy when she hugged him. "it's been too long!" Chris gave her a laugh. "Yes it has, congratulations by the way!" He exclaimed, but inside he felt numb.
"Chris this is my fiance Token." She lead the brunette toward a tall, dark, and handsome man. Chris shook the large mans hand, putting on a facade. "Nice to meet you man!" Token smiled, showing his bright teeth. "You too man! You got here a bit late though, you missed some of the early drama." Token responded, handing him a cold beer. Chris shrugged, and grabbed the beer from Tokens hand. "I'm sure there will be plenty more."
Stan and I entered an empty and large bedroom. "Well, it looks like it's gonna have to be two people to a room." Stan stated as he set my luggage down next to a bed. "Who the hell am I supposed to be rooming with?" Stan shrugged. "Maybe you can room with Cartman, I'm sure that would be fun."
"Ha ha, that's so funny." I mumbled as I laid my body on the bed. "At least the beds are comfortable."
"It might be more comfortable with another person." I sat up from the bed, noticing a tall dirty blonde man, leaning against the door frame. "I'm sorry, where are my manners? I'm Aiden." I stared at the man, feeling a bit annoyed with the people already. "And i'm already annoyed by you." Stan chuckled to himself as he past Aiden to head back downstairs.
"Hey, I'm just trying to make conversation."
"I'm sorry," I apologize as I push myself off the bed. "Rough day." Aiden nods, watching me as I start to unpack my things. "Do you mind any company?" I shrugged, sticking my clothes into a drawer. "I guess not."
Kyle grabbed Nolan's arm when he saw Stan descending the stairs. "Okay, I want you to meet my best friend since birth." He caught up with the black haired boy, showing pure Joy when they hugged. "Good to see you man!" Stan smiled into the hug, happy to see his best friend again. "Hey, Stan. This is my roommate Nolan." The blond shuddered a bit when he grasped Stan's hand in a firm handshake.
"Oh yeah, Kyle talks about you a lot. I heard you own your own recording studio?"
"Yeah, I've been running it since my senior year of high school." Nolan explained with a smile. He absolutely loved his job and with all of the hours and hard work he put into it, he definitely didn't mind gloating about it for a bit. "That's amazing man, you must be living the dream." Nolan laughed. "Most days." Nolan couldn't help but stare at the other blue eyed man.
"Hey man, I just wanted to say sorry that you have to live with this loser." He pointed towards Kyle, who was chatting with Bebe, who had just entered the home. "Hey, I heard that!" Kyle exclaimed. Stan laughed a bit before walking with Nolan to the miniature bar filled with alcoholic beverages. "You're gonna have to tell me more about your job. I'm already extremely jealous."
"Sure man, what do you wanna know?"
"everything."
The group of twenty or so, began to get comfortable with the environment they would be staying at for a week. They were ready for the fun week of alcohol and endless partying to began.
Outside, the weather packed the ground with a white winter wonderland, which set the mood for these young adults. This week would be about letting any worries and troubles go, and besides, with the gorgeous scenery and fully stocked bar, What did they have to worry about?
