Discontinuation and Revival

(Please read to the end)

First, an explanation. I first started this story when I was a freshman in college. It's hard to believe, because now I am out of school and have a job. I started writing it because I felt like I had a really good idea for a fanfiction and because things were moving slowly at my university as far as the workload went. At first I would shell out at least one chapter a week and I thought that I could keep it up forever. But pretty soon the workloads got bigger, I took on more responsibilities, and I had less and less time to work on this story much to the disappointment of all of you reading at home.

After re-reading the chapters that I have already posted, I came to realize that it was not very good. Mostly due in part that I tried to integrate a subplot where the main character, James, was trying to locate the man responsible for killing his father while at the same time building his relationship with Carrie. I was going through a conspiracy phase at the time and thought it would be a cool idea, but it just did not turn out how I thought it would.

On top of all this I set up the story in a way that I now feel made the story progress to slowly. It was almost a day by day description of the life of James and everyone that was close to him.

With all of this in mind I have decided to discontinue this story and start a new one under a different title. It will still be a Carrie Fanfiction that follows a similar premise to John Doe 2; only without the John Doe 2 subplot, and it will be a little more-fast paced.

In fact, for those of you that have come to enjoy this story, you might be getting a chapter or two by the end of today. So stay tuned.