Well here is the completely re-written chapter 1 of "Unlock My Heart, My Queen" Hope you guys like it.

This took a while because of the major revising and editing.

This is my take on continuing "Unlucky My Heart, My Queen" By Dreamer831/Rima-Chi

For those who read my orginal continuation, sorry but I decided to rewrite my continuation.

Note: Sorry the feeling of the story is not the same as the original.

By now, I think Dreamer831 is dead (In FanFiction), but Dreamer831 if you're reading this, I want you to know I want your story to continue and I hope you'll love this.

Disclaimer: Shugo Chara does not belong to me, the plot of this story does not belong, and Yuki does not belong to me, she belongs to Dreamer831


Unlock My Heart, My Queen

Chapter One

New Egg!

A fight was heard from the living room, obvious from the yelling of two parents. Tempers have flared between the two, resulting in one of them to throw the nearest object near them, the item missed its target resulting a loud thud noise that scared a young girl, who is lucky to be in her own room. The young girl shivered in fear under her blanket.

A clown-Chara float over to the young girl with worry, "Are you okay Rima-chan?" Kusukusu asked softly.

Rima peak out from the blanket while her eyes teary, she gave her Chara a sad face with tears running her cheek.

Rima heard more arguments and more items being thrown which scared Rima deeply, emotionally scaring her. She has always been in pain ever since that dreadful incident which succeeded in ruining her life even if the kidnapping was unsuccessful.

From the day, her parents have became over protective, resulting in them enforcing her to stay home at all. The only time of freedom she has is when she is at school. Although, she can not go to school by herself which resulted in more arguments, her parents will always argue on who is going to drop her off and pick her up and who is not because of the trusts that has disappeared since that dreadful day.

Her parents even became more supportive for her in their jobs, but it did more bad than good; taking in so much hours of their jobs to earn more money resulted in their fatigue becoming fuel to their fights.

Rima got out of her bed, walking up to her balcony as she press her hand on the sliding door of her balcony. As she rest her hand on the glass door, she felt the coldness of the chilly night and oddly enough, it felt so welcoming despite feeling the cold night at the tip of her fingertips. She really wanted to go out, but her parents have forbidden her from being outside, even from standing outside on her own balcony. She looks up at the stars with painful eyes.

Kusukusu sigh in sadness before floating back into her egg to sleep knowing Rima wanted to be alone. Being a clown-chara, she is the embodiment of a being whose soul duty is to bring laughter and happiness into the world, she feels so useless right now.

Rima sigh softly before seeing a shooting star. She gasps softly before she quickly closes her eyes, getting down to her knees, and prayed.

'I wish that I can be free from everything. The pain, the sadness, the loneliness, I want to be free from it all.' Rima made her wish and slowly opens her eyes.

She looks around and see no changes in her life. It did not even stop the fighting from the living room.

She sighs as she stood up and walk back to her bed, "It's only a wish that won't come true." Rima thought out loudly. She had trouble sleeping, so she tried her best as she could to ignore her parents' fight. Sadly enough, she cried herself to sleep.


The Next Morning

Rima slowly revealed her golden eyes before quickly closing them again due to the harsh, morning sunlight that was shining through the sliding door glass. After she rubbed her eyes to get rid of the sleep sand in her eyes, she gave a yawn before she sat up to stretch, but suddenly she stop when she felt something under her blanket.

Blinking in confusion, she grabbed the blanket and pull it up. Her eyes widened in shock when she saw another egg on her bed. She gasped loudly which woke Kusukusu from her egg.

The little clown Chara was still half asleep when she floated towards Rima.

"What is it Rima-Cha-?" Kusukusu's eyes bugled out when she saw the egg on Rima's bed. She rubbed her eyes to make sure if she was imagining things, but she wasn't.

This morning surprise really woke her up.

"You...have another egg..." She was in complete awe when she finally snapped in realization with a wide smile. "That means I'm going to have a little sister! Yahoo!"

Kusukusu could not hold all of her excitement in so she let it out by flying all around the room wildly while Rima was still in shock.

"No way...I thought...I..." Rima shakes her head before looking at her new egg in disbelief. She could not believe her eyes, but there it is, plain as day right in front of her.

The egg is mostly silver with a golden cat face on the middle and pale, but slightly dark gray mini-paws all over in a random pattern. To Rima's eyes, it is one of the most beautiful Chara egg she has ever seen.

She gently and carefully reaches for her egg and tenderly touches it.

"It's warm..." Rima commented as cups her hands around her egg carefully so she can examine it more closely. "I still can't believe it...I have another egg..."

Her shock slowly turned to happiness, she smiled and Kusukusu joined her with a wide grin. Kusukusu floated close to her new unborn sister egg.

"I wonder what she will be like!" Kusukusu giggle.

"We just have to wait and see." Rima said with a smile. She then looks at her first Chara, "Can you please keep this a secret between us?"

Kusukusu blinked in confusion, but nodded her head. "Hai, Rima-Chan!"

Rima nod her head, "Good." Rima look back at her new egg, "I want to keep her secret...wait until it hatch...and surprise my friends." Rima smiles while staring lovely at her new egg.

Kusukusu smile at her owner, 'She's smiling...but I wonder what kind of little sister will I have though...' Kusukusu looks at the egg in curiously, 'Rima wants to make people laugh which is the reason I was born. Now what kind of 'would-be-self' does Rima wanted to be?'

Rima jumped off of her bed to get ready for her day, "Kusukusu, can you please watch the egg for me?" Rima asked.

Kusukusu gave a salute. "Of course Rima-Chan!"

Rima smiled at Kusukusu before starting to gather her clothes for the day since today is Saturday, which means no school.


Rima giggled hysterically while watching two boys doing her favorite comedy gag, Bala-Balance, in the television with Kusukusu laughing beside her. Her new egg with the feline pattern is safely sitting on a blanket covered basket, which is on the table in front of the sofa.

The channel suddenly switched to news as Kusukusu look at the television in horror and disappointment while Rima gasp lightly, barely making an audible sound.

She heard her mother sat down on the chair behind the couch, "I'm tired again today." Rima's mom sigh in fatigue.

The news started talking about children running away from home and being found loitering at night which is pointed out to be occurring very increasingly lately. Rima's mom glances at the television as she gave her comment on the talk of the day.

"Terrible. It's because they weren't raised properly."

Rima frown sadly and lean her chin on her knees, deep in thought of sadness. She was pulled from her thoughts when she heard her owm name from her mother. Rima stood up and walk to her mother.

"What is it, mama?" Rima asked in confusion.

Her mother took out an envelope and handed it to her daughter, "Take this with you tomorrow."

Rima took the envelope and read the kanji written on it. She was definitely not happy with the writing.

"It's a letter of withdrawal." Rima slightly stuttered.

Her mother look down with her eyes closes, "You're going to quit that 'Guardian' club tomorrow."

Kusukusu gasp in shock before flying towards to Rima's mother.

"Huh?! Why, why, why?" Kusukusu asked over and over again, but she knew it was a feeble to even ask someone like her even if she was visible to normal people.

Rima was quiet, but she quickly gathered some courage without notice.

"But mom..." Rima was about to say it, but her mother cut her off.

"I keep having to pick you up at different times; it's a real problem." Rima shut her mouth, having lost all of her courage. "You understand that my job keeps me very busy, don't you?" Her mother added.

Rima never felt so much in pain in her life since her almost kidnapping. Kusukusu gave her a sympathetic look.

'Tomorrow...' Rima thought sadly. She wants to be free, but she continues to experience more pain.

Without noticing anything, her new egg is shaking on the warm blanket covered basket, but stops before being noticed by anyone.

"Not yet...it's not the right time...just wait for me, Rima-Nya." A soft voice said from the unborn egg.


Rima sighs softly while she walk across the school gate. When Rima heard her mother's car drove off from hearing range, Rima stops and glance over her shoulder and her surroundings.

She notices that no one is paying attention to her, so much so that she can easily slip off in plain sight. Rima bit her bottom lip with Kusukusu floating up next to her master.

"Rima-chan?"

Rima tighten gripped her bag before she glancing at her clown-Chara.

"Kusukusu...what do you say that...we ditch school just for a day?" Rima suggested.

Kusukusu was sure her eyes were about to pop out. She never thought her owner would suggest such a strange thing and it was so unlike her. Rima blinked at her suggestion, she never actually thought she was going to say that out loud.

Rima was brought out of her thoughts when she felt movement in her bag, which she opens and took a peak.

"I think..." Rima and Kusukusu glanced at the unborn egg, "I think my egg is hatching soon." Rima mumbles.

Kusukusu nods her head in understanding before grinning.

"I like that idea, Rima-chan! Let's do it!" Kusukusu said with excitement. Rima also put on a smile.

"Okay, let's do it." Rima walk to the garden area, "But... how do we start?" Rima thought out loud as she and Kusukusu heard a familiar voice.

"Did you say ditch-Nya?" Rima and her clown Chara look up and saw another Chara, who they rarely see everyday, Yoru.

"You're..." Rima tilted her head in confusion, having some problem remembering the Chara in front of her, "Yoru... that cat Chara who belongs to...Tsukiyomi Ikuto." Rima said his name which left a strange sensation on her tongue. She kind of likes it.

Yoru let his cat grin appear, "Hai, I am. And you're actually planning to ditch-Nya?" Rima nodded his question and Yoru grinned wider, "Well then, how about I help you how-Nya!"

Rima and Kusukusu blink at the dumbest offer.

"Why?" They both said in unison

Yoru frown in exasperation. "I'm an alley cat-Nya! I know how to do this kind of stuff-Nya! I can teach you how to-Nya!" After his little speech, Yoru nod at himself smugly.

Rima raise her right eyebrow at him. Kusukusu suddenly chuckled while covering her mouth, thinking how funny Yoru is with his smug look, much to his dismay when he noticed the clown Chara was laughing at him.

"Well I did say I'd ditch today. And he seems to know how." Rima contemplated then finally she nod her head. "Alright, teach me then."

Yoru grinned widely, "Perfect-Nya! Now follow me-Nya!" Yoru floated away as Rima quickly followed him along with Kusukusu floating behind her while giggle.

"This is going to be fun~!" Kusukusu thought out loud while giggly.

For an hour, Rima has been following Yoru on foot when finally Yoru turned around. Rima took the time to catch her breathe, she has never been the athletic type.

"Okay..." Rima look around, "Where are we?"

Yoru grinned, "From now on, you're going to follow me and not on the ground."

Rima just frowns at the declaration while Yoru fly to a brick wall and all the way up before turning back to her.

"Well, what are you standing there for? Come on-Nya!" Yoru shouted as Rima look up at the brick wall, feeling intimidated by its height.

She glances at Kusukusu. Her only response from her was a sheepish shrug before Kusukusu flies up to where Yoru is.

Rima sighs softly in defeat. "Okay."

Needing both hands for this, she hide her bag behind the bushes, planning to get it later the day. Rima then began to climb the brick wall with extreme caution.

Kusukusu look at Rima in concerned, "Be careful Rima-Chan!"

"Just don't look down-Nya!" Yoru advised.

Rima nod her head before continuing to climb up the brick wall and reaching the top.

The car Chara gave her a smile. "Good! Now follow me-Nya!"

Yoru fly along the brick wall with Rima following him on the large wall that is thick enough for her small feet. She had trouble keeping her balance at first, but she soon got the hang of it.

Rima never thought she would say this. "For once, I'm grateful that I'm petite." Rima thought out loud. Kusukusu giggled at her when she admitted that, but Rima was too busy focusing her balance to care.

She was so focus keeping her balance that her movement was so graceful and precise that she impressed Yoru and then some. If she brought her bag with her, Rima would notice her egg shaking.

When Rima got to the end of the fence, Yoru instructed her to jump down.

She gave him a questioned look, "Why are you even having me do this?"

"This is the way cats sneak around-Nya." Yoru explained. "To cats-Nya, being in high ground is important-Nya, but at the same time-Nya you must not get too up high-Nya. We never always land on our feet."

Rima got the message and got down, landing gracefully on her own two feet. Although she did stumble a little, it was still enough to impress Yoru.

"Nice work-Nya." Yoru praised her with a thumbs up.

Rima gave a big yawn before replying, "Thanks." After she did, she looked around and noticed she was in a park. No one was around, except for the birds that finds this park to be their home. It was quiet, so calm and serene, and the added birds chirping almost made Rima forgot all her worries. She smiled.

Yoru frowned when he noticed something, "You okay-Nya?" She definitely does not look right, especially those slightly dark circles under her eyes.

"Huh?" Rima did not even noticed that she was yawning and it has been happening for quite some time. "Hai, I'm fine."

Yoru gave a hidden small frown when he noticed the clown Chara is frowning at the petite blonde. That told him that her sleep deprivation was serious.

Not wanting to show sympathy, he snickered instead, catching the attentions of the two comedy lovers. Rima glared when she noticed the cat Chara was laughing at her.

"What's funny?" She glared. No joke was made, so this irks her incredibly.

"No wonder you're so small-Nya." Rima intensified her glare when he mentioned her small stature. "You need to sleep more-Nya."

He then started to float towards back to where they were, motioning to her to follow.

"Come on-Nya! I know a good place to sleep-Nya."

She followed and gave a questioned look when they reached Yoru's destination.

"A tree?" Rima said with a hint skepticism in her voice, "Won't it be uncomfortable?"

"I'm sure you can make yourself all cozy with all that hair of yours." Yoru joked.

Rima glared at him, but glared even more intensely at her Chara, who found the feline chara's retort to be hilarious. Yoru joined the laughter and laughed loudly at Rima; while he did so, he unconsciously floated towards Rima. Said blonde was about to flick at him, but soon all that sleep deprivation she has accumulated, along with the climbing around, has made her not care; all she wants right now is to get some sleep. Going back home is definitely not the best idea right now and no way is she sleeping on the ground, so she went with Yoru's idea.

Her face crunch a little in pain when her delicate hands clung tightly against the trunk of the tree, but she did not let that bother so she proceeded to climb up the tree. Once she reached a big enough branch, she made herself comfortable on it. Since the tree she is on is in the middle of many others at the park, she is practically invisible among the large branches and leaves, so there are no worries to being spotted.

Unfortunately, for Rima anyway, Yoru was actually correct, (even though he was just joking) her enormous mass of hair actually made her feel cozy.

"Night-nighty." Kusukusu said as she made herself comfortable in her owner's hair which is the equivalent of sleeping on a soft pillow.

The cat Chara snickered as he also made himself comfortable, "Don't mind if I do."

Rima has a half of mind to get him out of her hair, but she slipped into dreamland before she could.


Hours Later

"Hey! Wake up-nya!"

Rima, without opening her eyes, swatted where that annoying voice is coming from. "Go away."

"Rima-chan!" Kusukusu yelled. "School is almost over. Your mommy will be at your school soon!"

That woke up Rima right away. She nearly lost her balance on the tree branch, but quickly regained it. The young blonde looks down; suddenly her vision started to get blurry. According to her current situation, the height of that brick wall is nothing compared to the tree that she's on.

"Why did you have to pick this tree?" Rima said, blaming Yoru.

The feline Chara gave her an annoyed look before noticing that the tree branches are arranged in an almost clear path to the brick wall, this gave him an idea. If Rima is too scared to get down from the tree, then she should just jump from branch to branch until she reaches the brick wall which is at a lower height above the ground, she was brave enough to get down from there the first time.

"Jump-nya!" He then lead the way.

Kusukusu follow him easily but Rima look down nervously. It is a very long way down for someone small like her, but she really had to hurry. Rima gulped nervously before jumping.

Unfortunately, she was so in a hurry that she made a too long of a jump and missed the branch. Her eyes shrunk when she suddenly felt herself falling.

"Rima-Chan!"

Rima closed her eyes tightly in fear as tears started leaking out. Time seem to have slowed down as her life started to flash in her mind. She remembered growing up in a once happy family before that horrible man appeared out of nowhere in her life and ruined it all.

Sad memories, sad and painful memories soon appeared, all consisting of her parents fighting all night with her all alone in her room.

She then heard the laughs and giggles of the day Kusukusu was born, bringing light into her life. She can remember the little performance Kusukusu gave her immediately after her birth. Bala-Balance. Heh~

Then Amu appeared along with the other Guardians in the Royal Garden, welcoming her with warm greetings.

No. She does not want to leave this world just yet.

"Please help!"

Suddenly a golden light shines around Rima. Before she could react to the glow or question it, an instinct took over her mind. She did a mid air flip and she landed safely.

Kusukusu and Yoru's eyes widen when they saw Rima land gracefully on her own two feet, they thought she was a goner.

Yoru's eyes widen even more as he gasp at what he is seeing. This is not his doing, he is not even sure if he could even do it with someone else. Even so, how does she have...?

Rima slowly opens her eyes before looking around in confusion and surprise. She felt something move from her back, which made her to turn her head and she saw a white tail... that is currently attached her.

Going on a hunch, Rima slowly reach up to the top of her head with one had. She reeled back her hand when she felt her new pairs of cat ears twitch due to her own touch. She blushed when she felt how sensitive her cat ears were.

"Rima-Nya!" An unknown voice.

Rima turned her head to the voice and gasp at the sight of her own school bag floating in front of her. At first she was scared, but she instantly realized what is happening with her bag.

She grabbed her bag and opens it up. When she did so, her new egg instantly flew out like a bat out of hell.

Yoru gasped as he saw a Chara egg he was never seen before. He was even more surprised at the pattern.

"No way-Nya!"

The new egg flew around for a while before flying back in front of Rima. It took a moment to crack open before giving birth to Rima's second Chara.

To what Yoru expected, Rima's new Chara is much like him. A cat-Chara and, in opposite to him other than the apparent gender, her colors portrays light.

Like her owner and 'sister', the cat-Chara has long blonde hair that is wavy. Sticking out of her hair are a pair of bright white cat ears. Decorating her face are a pair of large lavender eyes and a small cat-like nose.

She is wearing a silver crop top that reveals her bellybutton, a white skirt that is sparking due to the golden glitter, a pair of golden flat shoes, and white ribbons that were tied around her ankles. To top it all off, she has a choker with a golden bell.

Adding to her feline appearance, her pupils are narrowed and white paws instead of hands.

The cat-Chara smiles at her owner, "Hello Rima, it's great to finally meet you-Nya. My name is Yuki and I represent your hidden personality-Nya."

Rima stares at her cat Charas in awe.

"Hidden... personality?" She repeated as Yuki nods her head. "What's that?"

"Yes. Your hidden personality is different from who you want to be-Nya." She explained.

"Wait...I don't understand." Rima frowns in confusion, but Yuki just smile mysteriously at her.

"I'll explain everything to you Rima-Nya. Right now, it is best for you to go back to school because your mother is going to pick you-Nya." Yuki reasoned.

That reminded Rima that she will be in big trouble if she does not go back to the front gate in time. She panicked a little before realizing that she is still in Character Change with Yuki. Wasting no time, she uses her increased agility to jump all the way up to the top of the brick wall.

Rima was amazed on how easy she was able to make that big jump. She wondered if she was really alive right now because she feels so light on her feet.

Kusukusu was just amazed.

"That was amazing, Rima-Chan!" Kusukusu exclaimed as she float next to her master. "You could just jump all the way home if you do something amazing like that!"

Seeing that she effortlessly made that jump, she actually could in no time at all, but that will be a bad idea at the moment.

Yuki flew towards to her master and hold onto Rima's shoulder, "You might want to hold on, sis or else you'll be left behind." She advised with a smile.

Seeing what her younger sister means, Kusukusu hold onto Rima's other shoulder.

Now that her Chara won't fall behind, Rima did another jump towards to the direction of her school by jumping on top of roofs. Kusukusu laughed loudly at how fast how fast Rima is going. Yuki just smiled proudly at Rima.

Unknown to the females, they have completely forgotten another Charas who has already left.


(Somewhere Else)

Tsukiyomi Ikuto is currently resting on a small grassy hill. Like always, he was lazing around while enjoying the fresh air of the outside. He was also enjoying the view of the setting sun when he heard a familiar voice calling his name.

"Ikuto-Nya!" It was from his own cat-Chara. Sounds like Yoru ran marathon from the sound of his tried voice.

The blue haired young man sat up before staring at his cat Chara with lazy eyes.

"What is it Yoru?"

Yoru panted to catch his breathe before saying, "I saw a new egg-Nya, but it hatched-Nya!"

Ikuto tilted his head to show that he is a little interested and a little confused.

"Who's egg, Yoru?"

The dark cat put a paw under his chin to remember her name. He and Rima never did properly introduced each other.

"Iie, it was that short girl-Nya. Rima, that's it-Nya! The Queen of the Guardians-Nya." Ikuto looks at him to give him more hints. "Big hair, blonde, and chibi-Nya?"

Ikuto blinks now that remembered Rima's face. He was there hiding on the day when Rima and Kairi were first introduced as the new Queen and Jack's chair at the Royal Garden.

"The new girl who replaced the previous Queen.' Ikuto has never really paid attention to her since his eyes were on a certain strawberry haired girl.

The tall teen lied back down, clearly not interested. "So she has new a Chara. So what?"

"Her new Chara is a cat-Nya! Just like me-Nya!"

Ikuto quickly sat back up, "What?" Ikuto quickly asked with widened eyes. Yoru could only nod vigorously at his question, not knowing what else to say other than yes. "A Cat Chara?" Ikuto repeated.

The tall slowly went back to lie down on grass.

His eyes trail up to the sky where stars are slightly becoming visible as night slowly dominates the sky.

'A cat-Chara can only mean it's a Hitogara Chara which is rare.' Ikuto thought in his head. 'For someone to have that kind of Chara... they must wish to be free from pain. The question is, what kind of pain does that new Queen want to be free from?"

Before he knew it, all he could think of now is Rima. When his mind drifted to Amu, her face was replaced by Rima's.

He sighed internally, "Seems to me I'll be giving the Queen a visit soon."