Hey, so this is my first fanfic for Miraculous Ladybug and the first fic I have written in years for that matter. So, please have mercy when giving criticism (though I would still love to know how to improve). Anyways, the first chapter of this fic is all dialogue and this is for a few reasons:
1. I love reading and writing all dialogue stories.
2. I don't have nearly enough confidence in my abilities to write a proper first chapter.
3. I think I best at writing dialogue than anything else.
So without further ado, here is the story~
"Hey Nath, what're you drawing?"
"Hi Alix, oh this? It's nothing just a dumb little sketch, just to pass the time, you know?"
"...You were drawing Marinette again, weren't you?"
"...No..."
"For the love of God, this is just getting desperate. You need to put the pencil down and actually talk to her."
"Oh yeah, and say what exactly? 'Hey Marinette, I'm that guy that sits behind you in nearly all of your classes but you never have talked to before. You know, the same one who drew those pictures of you in his arms and embarrassed you in front of the whole class by dropping them on the ground for everyone to see. Anyways, I think you're really cute and I would love if you could look past all of that along with my inability to talk to you without stuttering like an idiot, and maybe hang out sometime?'"
"That would be better than drawing pictures of her, that you don't have enough guts to ever show her."
"I would show them to her...I just don't think she'd have much interest in them though..."
"Hmm, well how about we find out?"
"What do you mean by-"
"Hey Marinette! Nath has something he wants to show you!"
"WHAT? Alix! You can't just- Oh God what have you...Oh, crap she's coming over!"
"Good luck Nath!"
"No! Alix don't leave-"
"Hey Nathanael!"
"Uh, H-hey Marinette, how are you?..."
"I'm good thanks, and you?"
"I-I'm good thank you."
"That's good."
"Yeah..."
"..."
"..."
"...Um, Nathanael?
"Yeah?"
"Alix said... you had something to show me?"
"O-oh yeah, um, she was just messing around, you know typical Alix, always messing around ha ha..."
"Oh right, yeah... funny..."
"Yeah...she's a joker..."
"Yup..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"...So... what's that you were drawing?"
"What? I-um, I don't knwo what you're talking about, wha-what is it you are referring to exactly?"
"Well I saw you drawing something earlier in class... you have it there under your arms,"
"Oh, you mean this? It's nothing really, just a small sketch I was doing during class,"
"Can I please see it?"
"Oh well it's not very good..."
"If it's yours then I'm sure it's great."
"...Okay, here.."
"..."
"..."
"...Nathanael?"
"Yeah?"
"Is this me?"
"Oh uh... well...do you like it?"
"I love it!"
"Then yes! Yes, it is you."
"Wow! Nathanael this is amazing, I knew you were talented but this is just... wow..."
"Thank you! I'm glad you like it."
"I do! You made me look so beautiful."
"Well that wasn't hard to do..."
"What?"
"What?"
"Did you just-?"
"Nope."
"Nathanael, what did you just say?"
"Nothing! I said nothing at all!"
"Nath-"
RIIIING
"Whoops, there goes the bell for next class, see ya Marinette!"
"Nathanael!"
"Bye!"
Fin
I had way too much fun writing this piece of shit. I don't know why but I love putting cinnamon rolls, like Nathanael, into extremely awkward situations.
But anyways, please review.
