I usually wouldn't post what a reviewer has said, but I am starting get very angry with people who cannot follow simple directions and also since I cannot PM this person I'll just do it here in my story. It would appear that this person did not read my disclaimer nor my Important message so here is my response to you Going Critical. I will be using your review to answer you as well.

Going Critical's Review: Hm, it seems that the "Guest" and Kalaharia were right about this story. Might as well have called this story "TwINuyasha" as other than the lone OCs there seem to be a whole lot of duplicates who do little more than steal lines from their canon counterparts. Kanade seems to be Kaede without an eyepatch and seven kids for some reason. Wouldn't it have been easier just to make kaede have seven kids and leave it at that?

Heck, it bothers me to see canon rehashed despite the presence of duplicates, and how characters like Kaede (and apparently now her duplicate) are timeskipped from children to old women. I never seem to find stories of a young adult or older teen Kaede when so many fanfics pander to Kagome and Kikyo. Heck, this is a series where someone like Tsubaki was able to become young again. Granted it was through nefarious means and she did not end up well in the long run, but this is a fandom where a plethora of fanfics have Kagome and/or some OCs become part or full demons through some "mate" ritual and gain power/immortality.

Maybe I'm just tired of seeing formulas that are boring to me being churned out so much all the time while those that more pique my interest are few and far in between. Yet this is a yearning of mine a greed of mine that shall never be satisfied no matter how many scraps I get. Worse so given how I am too busy and lazy to write anything more than random reviews myself.

Enjoy your day.

Hm, it seems that the "Guest" and Kalaharia were right about this story. Might as well have called this story "TwINuyasha" as other than the lone OCs there seem to be a whole lot of duplicates who do little more than steal lines from their canon counterparts. Kanade seems to be Kaede without an eyepatch and seven kids for some reason. Wouldn't it have been easier just to make kaede have seven kids and leave it at that?

No, Kalaharia was not right about my story because it is MY story and not his/hers. My story is how I and I repeat HOW I wanted it or imagine it to be. I shouldn't have to call my story ''TwInuyasha'' since my story is an ALTERNATE UNIVERSE, you do know what an Alternate Universe is right?

So of course my story isn't going to be like the original series or manga because it's FANFICTION and whatever I do with my story is just fine because it's mine and I am techniguely only on episode 14 and or 15 since that is where Kikyo was brought back to life. So my story is still beginning and a bit slow in some areas because I didn't want my story to be fast pace or be quick like other stories I have read on this site and others.

The only counterparts I have used are Kikyo, Kazumi, Kaede and Kanade or Kaori once I go back and edit her name, but of course they're going to use lines from the original characters because I had to make them a part of the story and in case you didn't know Kikyo and Kaede are hundred percent mortal whereas Kazumi and Kaori are not and I have a reason for that too. I haven't revealed a lot about my story and that is my choice and not yours. Once again reading is very fundamental because Kaori/Kanade does in fact have an eyepatch on the opposite eye of Kaede. It was right in the description before my story began and I also mentioned it in the story, so?

Also no one twisted your arm and said ''Here you must read this story from start to finish or I'm going to harm you.''

At anytime you could have stop reading it if you didn't like it and found a story that was more suitable to your standards. I also strongly dislike it when people say mean or hurtful things behind a computer screen or use an anonymous name because they do not have the courage to say it to you straight out or because they don't want you to respond to what they said.

No one told you to leave a flaming comment either and I believe I stated in my disclaimer no malice/hate written reviews. If you were given constructive criticism there is a better way to do it and furthermore your comment just kind seems downright spiteful instead of helpful.

Next, I didn't want Kaede or Kaori with children because that is not where my story is going or how I wanted it to be and it would have defeated the purpose of my story. Also like I said before I have reasons for everything I do in my story, if you don't like it simply don't read it. I have had enough of hateful instead of helpful people.

Also I happened to like my lone OCs isolated at times because that makes it more suspenseful and or mysterious because you never know what I might do with them. I might just kill one of them off or something along those lines to do what no one expect.

Heck, it bothers me to see canon rehashed despite the presence of duplicates, and how characters like Kaede (and apparently now her duplicate) are timeskipped from children to old women. I never seem to find stories of a young adult or older teen Kaede when so many fanfics pander to Kagome and Kikyo. Heck, this is a series where someone like Tsubaki was able to become young again. Granted it was through nefarious means and she did not end up well in the long run, but this is a fandom where a plethora of fanfics have Kagome and/or some OCs become part or full demons through some "mate" ritual and gain power/immortality.

In the series Kaede and Kaori/Kanade time skipped to seniors because in the series in time skipped to Modern day Japan where Kagome and her grandfather are both talking about the Shikon no Tama so I do not understand your point on that one.

In my story description I believe it says Inuyasha, Kagome, Sesshomaru and OC for the characters. If you were truly searching for a story with Kaede then why did you not search for her in the character box and also why would I focus on Kaede or Kaori/Kanade when my story isn't even about them? The original series barely had episodes where Kaede was the star of since she's only a SUPPORTING CHARACTER.

Of course people mainly focus on Kikyo/Kagome or invent their OCs because people tend to like Kikyo and Kagome more so than the others and I knew more about those two so than I do Kaede and OCs you can do what you want with them. It makes the story easier to write when you have knowledge of the characters I guess, but that's just my own opinion.

Also even though you already kind of said this, but Tsubaki became young because she made a pact with a demon for youth because Kikyo sent her curse back at her, causing Tsubaki to have a scar on her beautiful face. After the source that was responsible for her young age was no longer there, she turn into an elderly lady and turn into ashes. So why would I do use the ''Tsubaki method'' for my characters?

Also I believe I did alter Kaori/Kanade's appearance at the end of my earlier chapters. I think it was the one where Sesshomaru was trying to figure out why Kagero had the jewel instead of Kazumi. So I don't think you read my story fully before leaving your remark.

I never said who any of the characters in my story are going to mate or if they're even going to mate or marry because I freelance with my story most of the time, unless I have a certain idea/ideas come into my head and then I start evading some things for real reasons. Also I said multiple character pairings so love interest can and or are subjected to change.

Furthermore if it bothers you so much to see canon rehashes then why not make and post your own story instead of bashing me for my ideas and doing what I want to do with them and or bashing me for not sticking to the script nor doing what you desire of me for my story.

Maybe I'm just tired of seeing formulas that are boring to me being churned out so much all the time while those that more pique my interest are few and far in between. Yet this is a yearning of mine a greed of mine that shall never be satisfied no matter how many scraps I get. Worse so given how I am too busy and lazy to write anything more than random reviews myself.

Enjoy your day.

If you're bored there are other website that have fanfiction that you can read stop limiting yourself and your mind and open up to other possible fanfiction sites and or authors of fanfiction because taking out your boredom or frustration on someone else is not nice or helping them to better themselves at writing which is what I am attempting to do, but people such as yourself make it hard because you bash instead of aiding.

Also some people are not as nice or calm about flamers when it comes to their stories so thank you for your opinion, but my ideas for my story are fine just the way they are.

Furthermore, Guest was actually answering a question that I asked about what to do with the island children at the end of one of my chapters. So how on earth could guest be right about a question that Guest was answering?

As far as Kalaharia and her opinion, which is kind of similar to that of your own. It makes me wonder if you two are the same person because it would be a shame to have to repeat myself again to the exact same person after I already PM them and got no reply from the said person.

Kalaharia's Review: I think this stroy could have been great. But you added a bunch of kids to the group. Then you for the most part focused on the girl that doesn't exist and turned it into a love story. It became a non-existing girl and Sesshomaru romance as the main focus, which would of been fine had the intro not said two gems/girls/boys.

My Summary: How would the story change, if two people were sealed to the sacred tree instead of one? What if Kagome and another person were pulled down the well? What if Inu No Taisho wasn't dead? What if there are two protectors of the jewel? What is this, there are two parallel jewels one of darkness and one of light and twin villains? What's going to happened in this alternate universe?

Wasn't there two people sealed to the god tree? (Sesshomaru and Inuyasha).

Were there not two people pulled down the well (Kagero and Kagome) as well as two protectors of the jewel? (Kazumi and Kikyo).

Were there not two gems at the intro of my story?(the Shikon no Tama and the Imperial Moon Crystal).

Are there not twin villains in my story? (Karaku and Oriku).

The only thing I have yet to confirm is Inu No Taisho's status, but in my story he was mentioned as alive when he went to search for the dark priestess that could break the seals that were placed on his sons.

So everything else I have proven to be true in my story so my summary stands correct. Besides, technically I am only on Season 1 episode 14, if you are matching my story with the episode correctly.

Also I seen numerous stories where there was an OC/Kagome/Kikyo pair Naraku/Inuyasha/Sesshomaru/Inu No Taisho/multiple characters from Inuyasha. I have also seen some crossover with peculiar matchups for Inuyasha.

So it baffles me that reviewers such as you and others on this site have a problem with my non-existing girl when I have seen other authors do it all the time and isn't that the point of an OC?

In a moment I will completely stop posting to this site and stick to writing on other sites because this non-reading, bashing instead of aiding and not being able to follow disclaimers is really starting to irritate me. I am starting to think that some of you reviewers are being spiteful and hateful on purposes.

Sorry if this seems like a waste of time and enjoy the rest of your night.