Author's Note
Unfortunately I might discontinue this fanfic, or end up giving it to someone
else.
Before you make assumptions, I have to say I dislike many things from the story.
But I really like the plot.
The beginning is horribly written and cringy.
I threw in random OC without thinking about doing with them as the story progressed.
I wanted to rewrite the story, however all of my ideas always came down to the same thing.
TOO MANY GOSH DARN CHARACTERS.
I wouldn't have to write from their perspective all the time, but having so many OC's would change the flow of the story dramatically.
I hate getting lost and having so much information when I'm reading stories that I just stop reading them all together.
Getting lost in the dialogue is annoying enough, then having to describe the actions of 10+ people is ridiculous.
Of course just writing about two or three shouldn't be a problem.
Despite this, when I went back to read my story I noticed I just put people in for the sake of just having them there.
Which actually made me stop writing about 8 chapters because I just couldn't figure out which OC was more important.
I put so much information in the story that wasn't needed, and that Aphrodite fight made me literally slap my forehead at how bad it was.
I named and described some weapons Percy had, but he never used them after like 4 chapters.
Plus the present tense and past tense I can never seem to get right.
i was working on the mix story but, I told myself; "If you can't even write one Percy fanfic right, why in the world would you start on another Percy fanfic?"
I know I'm making excuses, but I didn't want to keep writing a story that I thought wasn't well written from the beginning.
But because I'm weird, I want to know what you guys think. I want honest thoughts, not some "great story".