AN: Greeting Sirs and Maams, I bring you the reboot or remake or whatever its called of my story The Black Deathstalkers Appearance. This story will stick more in the realistic scenario rather than the first that was mostly crap and sided with Game Logic. To explain more, the story will be set just after the fourth Tiberium War where the Brotherhood of Nod makes their last stand towards Ascension in Kane's Tower.
My OC will remain the same, Gryle Bane and other such OC's will be now seen earlier than the first. I'll try to make Nod here more Evil and Darker and probably more gloomier in the shadows of the public. Though I don't know how I will approach the World of Remnant, the first thing in my mind would come is a silent war but that's not much of an entertainment and the four kingdoms are pretty much running well on their own. So do review some suggestions and comments how shall I progress the story this time around, hopefully this will better than the other.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my OC and the Black Blades along with its unique assets.
Warning: Be warned that WILL encounter many flaws such as misspellings, grammatical errors and lot of unneeded dialogues and scenes. Please do not expect much detail and explanations in my writings since I pretty much suck in English, but hey I try.
"Talking"
'Thinking'
[Radio]
"Legion"
*SFX*
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Advent Arc
Prologue
"Open fire!" A Zone Enforcer yelled through his helmet and aimed his weapon to a black-cloak figure. The Zone Infantry all tried to hit but to no luck for the figure was fast and it was jumping all over the place, the figure was a long raven-haired girl in Black coat wielding a black colored single edged curve blade. Uh hello…you're carrying a fucking literal anti-tank weapon and you're using it on a fast-paced infantry.
The Zone troopers fell one by one as the figure stick with Hit and Run tactics and used the debris as an advantage to overwhelm the group of GDI Zone Troopers. Every time the GDI soldiers would catch the gaze of this figure, they would feel shivers run in their spine as this figures eyes we're crimson glowing, it was the eyes of a hunter ready to kill its prey.
"Gah!" A Zone Trooper cried as he fell limb to the floor with a hole in his chest.
"Eat this you monster!" A Zone Enforcer cursed the figure and began firing hails of bullets towards the figure as it jump and sprinted from side to side closing in to its prey. Upon reaching the Zone Enforcer, he stared in fear as the figure quickly raised its blade then brought it down, tearing off the Zone Armor and killing the one inside.
"Captain we have to fall ba-" A Zone Trooper began and was cut off as its helmet cracked a hole leaving blood all over its visor. Before the Zone Captain could react he felt radiating steel on his chest, he looked down to see a dark forged blade pierce through the armor.
The squad of Zone soldiers fell at the hands of one Shadow. But this squad however is one of the hundreds that assaulting the Scrin Tower or to the Brotherhood, Kane's tower.
-Gryle's POV-
Such weaklings blind to the truth. Most Zone Soldiers relied on their thick armors and overpowering arsenals, but I merely relied on my speed and one weapon. The GDI we're making their final assault on Kanes tower. I was bid by Kane himself to hold them off from the north until He and Parker can activate the portal and accomplish the promised Ascension of our people.
I am Gryle Bane, a commander and admiral to the Brotherhood of Nod. I am the first Shadow to be employed in the Brotherhood and now a Human/Tiberian Hybrid thanks to Tiberium Infusion before my training. I joined hundreds of theatres of since the end of the Second Tiberium War, I was first a Shadow Operative, then turned Commander after my shows of victory, skills and loyalty.
I command my personal force the Black Blades, a faction within the Brotherhood created for professional espionage, major hard-hitting and front-battle operations, as well as being the spearhead of the Brotherhood's advance in Aerospace technology.
I fought with and commanded them against GDI in the remains of Asian Yellow Zone and Blue Zones regions during the Third Tiberium War and fought in the defense of Kane's Tower during the visitors invasion. Currently now however, the remnants of my remain forces are desperately trying to fight off these Fascists.
"All remaining forces! Defend Kane's tower at all cost! Do not let it fall to GDI hands!" I said through the comms as I looked out to see Black Hands, Confessors and Militants war cried trying to protect our people who are now trying set off to the Scrin Portal. Looking through the wide broken wall, Nod Ground forces as well as LEGION's Cyborgs we're fighting inside their foxholes trying to hold off the advancing GDI.
Kane's Tower…the last fortress and shining Temple of the Brotherhood of Nod, a former ownership of the visitors that came to threaten the lives of the human race, now a symbol of power and control for the Brotherhood of Nod but more importantly, the holiest Temple for Nod and the key to Ascension.
[My daughter] The words of the very man that raised me rang through my ears. What a pleasure to hear those words from the prophet. This was Kane and he is the one, what more could be said for such great man who guided man towards unity and wisdom.
"Your eminence, are you safe?" I asked with a typical loyal, caring and concerning tone.
[Quiet well Gryle, the rest of our forces are going through the portal. Parker will be remembered] The last note made me cringe a bit. Parker contributed much I could ever count to our objectives, now that his dead, all we could do now is go on carrying his pride and dignity.
"I see… but thank goodness your safe, he's sacrifice will not be in vain. Please your eminence, go through now, my fleet will follow afterwards"
[Very well, make those words true my child]
"Of course your eminence" I ran off the building and towards the ranging battlefield.
The fighting continued until the last of our brothers can enter the portal following the steps of the prophet. The longer it took, the more of our cyborgs and armed brothers' fall to the hands of this barbaric GDI. Parker may be dead, but Kane will carry his faith and legacy, so as the Legendary Insurgent who remained loyal to him till the end.
[This is the BNS Zeppelin to Steelhead-actual, all forces ascended, final evacuation ready, do you copy]
"Copy that captain. Attention all forces, this your commander, proceed to extraction point"
[Sending Carryall Transports to your location commander, ETA 2 minutes. See you in orbit commander]
Above Kane's Tower
In the skies, a massive fleet battle took place between the two warring factions. The Brotherhood of Nod we're exchanging fireballs, TCM missiles and Obelisk lasers against the GDI's mini Ion-particle cannons and massive slug-throwing cannons. The Black Fleet had the advantage of conventional firepower, speed and stealth but the minority of their fleet we're falling against their counterparts as GDI took advantage of their advance firepower, strength and numbers. Dogfights we're taking place in the wide space gap between the two fleets as Vertigo's and Firehawks all flew around the vacuum trying to outmaneuver their counterparts.
Soon the Carryall I was currently in manage to sneakily docked to the Vermillion Prime as well as my other forces, it was a ship larger than any GDI has ever built and sent into battle, even the their GST's. The Mobile Command Crawler, the arguably most powerful and largest orbital ship the Brotherhood has ever created. However, the Vermillion Prime was the only one of its kind.
I now made my way towards the Bridge in unsteady pace. Upon reaching the bridge, it was of course filled with crew operators. Beyond the bridge and its interfaces that showed the status of the battle outside was the reminder of my fleet.
My fleet is now reduced to about 20 SG-11 Salamanders which we're now divided into four packs, 5 Leviathan space stations filled with the former last line of defense in the ground, three Support-class crawlers behind my flank with the other classes stored in the Vermillion Prime and lastly, only 4 divisions of Vertigo and Venoms left.
I am completely outnumbered here and our ground forces are no more and my other commanders are already proceeding to the tower already leaving me and my fleet the only standing between Kane and this GDI scums. Wasting no more precious time, I led my forces.
"Legion, I want status check?!" I asked.
"All assets, ships and crews accounted for commander" replied the A.I. with his usual male deep and absorbing voice.
Legion is my AI Assistance, like every other commander in the Brotherhood. But unlike other AI's, Legion is a byproduct or hybrid AI of E.V.A. and LEGION that was made personally by Kane himself for my use. I'll admit, I have grown attach to the AI since we have been fighting together since the Third Tiberium War.
"Then a status of the situation?"
"Fourth Salamander packs are engaging GDI Kodiaks, GDI forces have occupied the Southern region of Kane's Tower." One of the operators in one of the stations reported to his commander.
"Pull the fourth and link with the third then set up a vanguard formation in our fronts, gather all remaining Leviathans and Support-class crawlers to move on our rear flanks. Restart scan airspace and give me a biometric graph of the enemy fleet." I ordered waving then stretching my right arm to my front
"Enemy ships 900 yards front off the BNS Alexander, counting from 10 to 20 Kodiaks with Firehawk escorts." Another officer reported.
"Climb all ships 50 meters above and stabilize, ready our nuke and order all Salamanders to load EMP missiles. Select targets and fire on my command."
"Targets registered. Nuclear missile armed and all Salamanders are loaded commander"
"All Salamanders, Fire at will"
With that order, all of my ships fired their EMP missiles along with fireballs. While CIWS and Firehawks manage to intercept those missiles, that didn't avoid them miss a couple which disabled only a minority of their forces. The objective wasn't to defeat them but to hold them off until the gate opens for the fleet.
Suddenly, the cloudy skies thundered and Kane's tower once again shined in blinding purple. Upon it, was a vortex-looking dark purple portal floating in midair. The giant holographic interface in the bridge then showed a live-video transmission from Kane just in front of the person-sized portal.
[My daughter, the portal towards ascension for your fleet is now open, I will see you in the other side.]
"I will your eminence" With that, the transmission cut off.
"All ships forward towards that gate! Do not hesitate, all flight squadrons as well, I repeat do not hesitate!"
That order made a series of "Yes Commander" before the fleet started abandoning the formation protocols and sped through towards the giant portal while avoiding from crashing with the other escaping ships. On forth towards ascension, towards unity, towards peace.
"Warning, unidentified electrical surge detected."
Just before I could ask Legion what he meant about that, me and my fleet only fell victim to an unknown cause.
Then everything went white after that.
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***NOD INTELLIGENCE DATABASE***
Gryle Bane.
With the emergence of the TCN Conflict and the Fourth Tiberium War, Gryle remained loyal to Kane and his Brotherhood even with the Unholy Alliance with the GDI. Gryle more hated something more than the GDI and it was being a Traitor. Though killing a Brother or Sister in faith can be hard at times, death is the only necessary judgment to such individuals and she did not enjoy it but she did happily sliced General Killian Qatars and Alexa Kovacs throats when they questioned or threatened Kane.
She continues to aid Kane with the help of the Legendary Insurgent, Steven and the Black Blades in achieving their Ascension.
Mobile Command Crawler
In response to the GDIAF GST Ships, The Black Blades and Project Omega conducted a research to build an orbital floating fortress two times the size of the GDIAF's GST's rather than always sticking with Salamanders and Orbital Space Stations. Thus giving birth to the Mobile Command Crawler.
The Mobile Command Crawler is a type of Crawler that holds all other types of Crawlers and all the recorded arsenals of the Brotherhood of Nod during the Third Tiberium War. By the orders of Kane, The Unique Crawler was developed by Dr. Klieg with the help of the researchers of Project Omega and Dr. Robertson's the co-developer of the famous MARV that was later decommissioned after the alliance with Kane. Later the Crawler was commissioned into the theatres of war starting in the TCN Conflict. Only one of these Crawlers we're made.
The Tension between the GDI and the Brotherhood of Nod rose as the power of this unique Crawler was overwhelming and it can be seen every day in the frontlines of Nod, though the GDI was jealous with this new type of Crawler, they maintained to secure order and peace against the Nod Separatist.
Gryle Bane, the daughter figure of Kane or more commonly known as the Blade of Kane took control of the MCC which she then named as the Vermillion Prime and fought battles against the traitors of Nod and the GDI along with the legendary Nod Insurgent who was greatly known for his loyalty to Kane during the Third Tiberium War who took control of every Nod Offense, Defense, Support Crawlers in the War.
Even though the Brotherhood of Nod has exponentially advanced to the next Generation of Avatars and whatsoever, Gryle said it was still necessary to preserve their technology. Thus concluding that the MCC can build the arsenals of the Brotherhood of Nod during the Third Tiberium War.
The Appearance of this Crawler seems to resemble a Flying Scorpion Airship. It is armed with 6 Tier 3 Obelisk of Light placed in every corner, 20 Tier 2 Laser Turrets protecting both flanks, 40 Tier 1 Rocket Pods for Anti-air capabilities, Fireball Cannons and 1 CBMI silo. Once unpacked in the Battlefield, the Crawler turns into bigger and more intimidating version of the Temple of Nod combined with the Support Crawler transforming the four Stabilizer Engines into a Steel-based legged crawler making it a walking base that could also house 1000 Nod personals as it also carries 3 of each type of crawlers.
Black Blade
Former Shadows and Veteran Black Blade Militants that came from the ashes of TW3 and command of the well-known Gryle Bane, the Blacks Blade is a fast Hit and Run unit or Infiltration infantry. Now with installed agility type exoskeletons, stealth suits and increased speed thanks to cybernetic legs. Black Blades are the fastest Infantry that can be seen in the battlefield, armed with two of the famous Liquid Tiberium-Built Katana and a mini-obelisk pistol used by TW3 Commandos. These units are barely seen in battle due to their silent and fast assignations, GDI Commandos are warned.
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AN: That was just a prologue my friends. Again please do suggestion how I should approach this time around. The original is a colossal plot disaster but then again, I said it's going to be weird and confusing. Anyways, thank you so much for reading this far and please leave your comments about this.
Have a good day sirs and maams, love you all.