So, cards on the table guys. The Unholy Trinity as it is is being heavily reworked. I'm gonna open up the revised version a new Fic with the same title. There's gonna be a substantial amount of changes in this new version, so I'll list off the big ones here.
The addition of a premonition (Think Modern-Fire Emblem style) and a prologue. I feel like the first chapter I did was good in its own right, but it's not really a proper introduction in my eyes.
The reworking of the order in which events are presented. I wanted to try out some interesting narrative tricks with how I present the story this time. It won't be anything that majorly rewrites the plot, but it will drastically alter how newcomers come to understand it.
Akira Kurusu is now Ren Amamiya. I just like keeping with canon.
MC's will now have romances right off the bat. It will be Yu/Rise, and Ren/Makoto. Any other romances will develop over time. It just kind of feels more natural that way.
Smaller tweaks to grammar and prose. For obvious reasons.
The P5 characters are now plucked out of time during their detour to bring Ren home, rather than during Ren's stint at juvie.
And perhaps the most important change in my eyes, there will be major changes to Ren and the others' personalities in light of new information from P5, as well as changes to their game's lore details. I started this fic VERY soon after P5's Japanese release, which led to me making a few lapses in how I presented its mechanics and characters. Those will be fixed. Ren will not be a bitchy assole this time around. I'm honestly kind of embarrassed I wrote him that way in hindsight. Likewise, Goro will have his relationship with the group at large reworked a bit.
Alright, that's all. The new Fic will be up within the day. Thank you all so much for your support with this fic. I hope to see anyone following it move over to its new and (hopefully) improved version. Thank you so much for your reviews over the year I've been writing this, and see you in a few.
Oh, and before I go, let's also say that I have a new idea brewing in my head for when famous Haru artist ScruffyTurtles finishes drawing their recently developed AU out. But we'll cross that bridge when we come to it.
Adios!
