Notes to the Edited Version
Dear readers,
Thank you for sticking with me during the whole thirteen chapters of this little fanfiction of mine. I decided to edit it because I found some horrible grammar and spelling mistakes that I believed robbed charm to the story. That, and because I'm a blind believer in perfection and would like to give to those reading my stories some quality material so they feel their time was not wasted on me.
This edition, however, has not dramatic changes. I only did some research and polished certain areas, like Eton College for example, to give it a more realistic atmosphere. I also did some research regarding their housing arrangements, touristic destinations and facts.
At the end of it, some of you might want to strangle me given the less-than-happy ending I gave it. And even if I could have changed it, in this edited version, the thought really did not cross my mind. Why? Because not all tales in real life have a happy ending. Another thing that prevented me from doing so was the review of a sensible someone who wrote that My Point of View last chapter had helped her see death in a whole new perspective, understanding it a bit better. And most of all, I thought that if I were to change it, then I would not be true to the story.
I am sure that there must be many mistakes still lurking around. But for now, this will do.
As you could tell, I put a lot of me into Tomoyo's character and in the overall feeling of the story. There are some scenes that really happened in real life; Tomoyo's overnight flu, for example.
I most sincerily hope that you enjoy this polished version of My Point of View.
I would greatly appreciate your comments so please do not hesitate to write a review.
Yours truly,
Dadouji Dana
27/03/2005
