So guys this isn't an original, you can call it a fanfic of a fanfic. The original is titled The one that got away.

I was totally in love with the original version of the story. it is my best NaLu fanfic yet.

I just had to re write it, i changed some things and the story won't unfold same as the original, i minimized the angst and Lucy's submissiveness. I am not taking any credits for this story cause the original theme wasn't my idea so i give a shout out to *AnimeLover4Ever58, even if i don't know them personally.

I corrected as many spelling and tenses error as i could from the original, to enable a more enjoyable read. The change in plot comes mostly towards the chapter 10/11 of the original since the writer didn't complete the story yet, i'm changing it to something i can give a quick, mild, suitable and understanding climax.

I'm sorry fans of this fanfic, if my change to the plot doesn't suit your taste. i had to do this because of the sheer love i have for the theme of this story.

thanks for your understanding.

DISCLAIMER: I do not own fairy tail nor the the theme of this fanfic. please be unbiased as you read.

Lucy Heartfilia the daughter of the richest business man in Fiore and a 17 year old girl, currently rounding up her time in high school and thinking about going to college to study business management due to her father's will.

Lucy's mother is late and her father doesn't care for her, she also does what she can to avoid the man, anytime she's with him she gets so angry and sad, luckily for her she gets the support she needs from her friends and boyfriend, Natsu Dragneel, whom attended the same high school as Lucy.

Lucy's having a birthday party at her house since her father was out of town she was able to have the party at her house. She invited her closest friends and her Natsu's closet friends (levy, Erza, Mira, Cana, Juvia, Lisanna, Gajeel, Jellal, Laxus and Grey)

The house was filled with music, drinks and dancing. If Lucy's father was here right now, he'd kill Natsu…yes Natsu because he absolutely hated Natsu and their relationship, he'd say he influenced his daughter to be a rebel.

***********Later that night in Lucy's room**********

After the party Natsu remained with Lucy and he took a little tipsy Lucy up to her room

Natsu pressed his lips against his blonde haired girlfriend's soft lips. Natsu Dragneel just enjoyed the spectacular moment he was able to swap spit and have his lips locked more than a minute of the first time with Lucy Heartfilia. Lucy's strict father, Jude Heartfilia never allowed Luce any freedom and even less when they were in high school. Natsu rarely gets the chance to have his lips touch his girlfriend's lips nor its skin. But finally, this moment he knew he could do anything what he wanted with her already. Now that Lucy's father has been on a business trip for a week already. And Lucy a little bit drunk after drinking so much with their friends.

Natsu could feel his girlfriend's arms snaking around his waist, and squeezing his shirt a little. The more he could feel that his girlfriend likes what they're doing, the more he was being carried away from being lip locked with her soft lips. Their kiss was just tender and arousing. Natsu couldn't stand being just stuck in the first phase.

As he got more aroused, he had made his decision in taking it to the next level. He slowly laid her on the bed and positioned himself on top of her without breaking the kiss.

"Natsu," Lucy moaned softly.

This time, an aroused Natsu started unzipping his jacket, and made it slip downwards to his muscled arms. After removing his jacket, he slowly stripped off his shirt up to his head, exposing his muscled torso.

Lucy seeing her boyfriend topless suddenly came in her the desire to beg for him. She could feel droplets of sweat streaming down to her neck and her stomach feeling uneasy.

All of the sudden she became speechless that she could just gaze at him and give him the access to freely kiss her, which they haven't done before.

Natsu lifted her body upwards, making her sit in the bed. He cupped her soft cheek. "You're so beautiful." He whispered, causing the blonde to blush as a tomato.

Lucy out of fear of her father and her personal belief had also denied herself sexual pleasure all the years in high school.

Natsu's hand went for her hair bands. He pulled them away from her hair to remove her pigtail, letting her hair down instead.

For him, she looked more beautiful and mature without pigtails. She still had a bit of baby blood in her. This time, his hands went on her back, aiming for the ribbon that holds her dress.

He untied the ribbon of her lilac dress. Slowly, he pulled her dress down to her belly, exposing her strapless bra and large breasts. For him, he thinks he was lucky to have a girlfriend like Lucy who was gifted to have such perfectly carved body.

Natsu laid her back in the bed. But this time, he completely pulled her dress down to her ankles and tossed it somewhere on the floor.

Who wouldn't feel the desire to touch Lucy Heartfilia in underwear only? Natsu didn't waste his time. He started stripping of his jeans as well as his boxer shorts, pulling it down to the carpeted floor of his bedroom.

Lucy was worse than a melting ice the moment she saw her boyfriend without any clothes on to cover up his naked body. Natsu went back on top of her, tackling her neck. But this time, as he snaked his hands on her back to remove her strapless bra, his kisses slowly went down to the valley of breasts.

"Oh, Natsu..." Lucy let out a soft moan from her mouth, while grabbing the bed sheets.

The salmon haired boy has successfully stripped off his girlfriend's bra which gave him the access to her breasts. Natsu attacked her pointy nipples, which suddenly made the blonde moan once again, "Ah!". He sucked her nipples like an infant. While busy playing with her two big mountains, he used his other hand to pull her lacy panties down to her ankles. And as he successfully stripped off every garment that covers up her body, he started positioning himself between her legs. Natsu gave Lucy another kiss before slamming himself inside her. Lucy could feel Natsu's erection touching the thing between her thighs. She felt Natsu's hand caressing her womanhood, teasing her.

Lucy knew it was wrong. Her father will kill both of them once it finds out about what they're about to do. But this is just the chance they have. The once in a lifetime chance to be freed from Jude Heartfilia's sight.

"Natsu," she gasped for air, breaking the kiss.

"What's wrong?" Natsu asked, being cliff hanged.

"I'm scared." The blonde answered. "I might get pregnant. And...father will kill us if that happens."

"Shh," Natsu placed a finger on her lips. "Don't worry. I know how to. I can control it. You won't get pregnant and your father won't find out about this. I promise.

Just trust me."

"Okay." Lucy just nodded, and just relaxed herself before Natsu takes her soul.

Lucy whimpered in pain as she felt Natsu going inside her body. She felt like something is being terribly ripped inside her. "Ahh!" She cried.

"Shh. I'm sorry. I'll be gentle." Natsu said and locked his lips with hers once again as he continues digging into her.

She could just wrap her arms around her boyfriend's with her nails dug as she tried to ease the pain. It was surely painful at first, but then she just told herself it'll be in heaven once her walls get loose.

Natsu was feeling more aroused and aroused as he explored her tight virgin walls. At first, he just moved slowly in and out of her.

After a couple of minutes, as Natsu felt Lucy's walls becoming loose little by little. He started moving faster. The bed was shaking so fast as if there was an earthquake.

Their pelvises kept bumping each other. And the room was being filled by moans and groans. Lucy held tight on Natsu the moment she felt like she was instantly taken into heaven. She felt like in a minute her whole body is gonna explode from the intense pleasure she's receiving, as well as Natsu. "Natsu!" She screamed in pleasure.

As what Natsu promised earlier that he knew exactly how to control himself. Because of the intense yet kinky pleasure they're giving each other, Natsu completely

forgot about that promise. They both screamed for each other's name in pleasure as they were about to climax.

"Lucy!" Natsu moaned loudly as he realized he finally reached his climax, and released his shot of load inside her. He slowly removed himself from her body, leaving a dripping white sticky fluid. He landed beside her, panting tiredly. He pulled the blanket to cover up their naked bodies.

"Natsu...I love you." Lucy told him with a pure smile before she falls asleep.

Natsu, instead of saying those three words and eight letters back to his beloved girlfriend. "Thank you for giving me your virginity."

When Lucy thought it was the most romantic night she had with Natsu, it suddenly turned out to be the worst and regretful night and moment she had with Natsu.

Meanwhile, when Lucy was half asleep in the middle of the night...

"Natsu, how was with Lucy? Was she good?" Gray asked.

"She's...so innocent...tight." Natsu answered and burst into laughter.

"You really did it. I can't believe you." Jellal said.

"Okay, Natsu, you won." Laxus sighed, accepting defeat in their bet. "As what I've promised...here's 30,000 jewels for you." Then, he handed Natsu a bundle of money.

"20,000 jewels from me." Followed by Gajeel.

"40,000 jewels.", said Jellal.

"And...50,000 jewels from me. Overall Natsu, you won 140,000 jewels from us." Gray said, and laughter burst between them all.

"Can I have the copy of the video?" Jellal asked, laughing. "Maybe it could educate me in having sex with Erza since she's also a virgin."

"Absolutely!" Gray tossed the video camera at Jellal.

"Hey! You guys already saw it. I'm gonna delete it already." Natsu retorted and aimed for the video camera at Jellal's hand.

"Oh, I thought we were gonna upload it?! Don't be a fun sucker!" Jellal cried and didn't let Natsu snatch the camera from his hands.

They were all alerted when the blonde suddenly mumbled and moved a little. "You guys shut up. You might awake her." Natsu hissed.

"Okay. See you tomorrow, then." Jellal handed the camera back at Natsu. Then, the four boys started going towards the door "Now, it's up to you if you'll tell her about our bet." Gajeel said before leaving the two.

This is for people familiar with 'the one that got away', there is a little addition and subtraction in every chapter. the overall story line WILL change. so please don't skip any chapter.