I'm going give this a try. Tell me if I should continue.

My sisters

I sniffed the air in search of my sisters Echo, Charlie, and Delta. The last I saw of them was when the she-demon promised us fake dreams. My name is Blue, and I was the beta of my pack until that she-demon turned us against our alpha. I, thanks to Rexy, aided in killing the hybrid. The humans left less than an hour ago and now I'm searching for my sisters.

"Bluuuee!" my sister, Echo, whimpers out, "It hurts!"

I turn my head to her cries of pain and my heart shatters. Echo's ribs have a large metal rod protruding from them. Her blood flows freely as she cries out in pain. Her once beautiful brown hide was covered in her precious red blood.

"Blue…" she weakly asks, "Is the monster gone?"

I nod and nuzzle her snout, "The monster is gone."

She weakly smiles and her eyes glass over. Her head slowly tilts downwards with a stream of blood pouring from her mouth.

"No. I won't let you die! Wake up sister! Fight!" I bark at her deceased body, "Please? Don't leave me, we're family; a pack."

My eyes water before I hear Charlie cry for any of us, "Sisters?! Alpha?!"

I jog to hear cries and feel my legs falter. Her right leg is gone, she is missing her back hide, and crying. I lower my head, I failed to protect my pack and sisters. I'm not fit to be beta!

"Delta, I… I can't see." Charlie begs then raises her head slightly to sniff, "Blue. Help me. End my life so I may die by my sister's jaw and not that beasts'."

I can't. She's my sister, she's my family. I can't kill someone I love. I nuzzle her chest and whisper soothing words to her. I open my jaw and prepare to kill my sister.

"No! I can't." I pull my mouth from her throat, "I don't want to lose you too! We're clutch-mates."

She doesn't reply as her lungs empty for the final time. I lower my body next to hers and I cry. Two of my sisters are dead.

Delta is the only one left that I haven't been able to find. My search for her lasts well into the night, her scent leads to an ember covered building. I swallow my fears and enter the scorching hot area. Her body is charred completely, she is nothing but a black shell of her once gorgeous hide.

I'm the only velociraptor on this island. I will die alone, no family, pack, mate, or hatchlings. My heart commands I screech to the sky for my sisters and I send my sorrow skyward.

If you listened to Alpha they would be alive. I am powerless. I'm sorry. They were my sisters and now I'm alone.

I exit from my sister's resting place and return to my paddock and wish this is all a bad dream.