Here is an idea that I decide to put up for adoption lol I've never really finished many of my projects if there are any of my story's you'd like to adopted just pm me to ask even active story's. I had a lot of idea I never put down and I'll only put down any that I think have promise enough that I would have made a story with them some are more flexible than others. Also I'll likely include one shots here as well however I will put that in the title if it's the case...

Janus look around the higher plain that he was in and sighed. It was going to be lonely in this new universe and worst he still didn't understand how he got here he had just finished helping Ganos and Oma destroy Adria and Anubis after they attempted to team up to break out of their eternal battles so they could get back to trying to take over the universe. Of course he would figure it out maybe in a hundred or so years. But he could get back to his own universe before that. After all there had been a number of technology's that let people travel from one universe to another and he knew the quantum signicher of his universe.

Still being able to interact with the lower plains without punishment from the others would be nice especially to help the humans of this reality against what he sensed was coming for them. And wasn't that a surprise that human's evolved without his own peoples interference to create them.

Thinking back to Elizabeth Weir the human who sacrificed everything so that the Atlantis expedition could survive as well as all the good that the humans in his own universe had done strength the desire.

With that decided he thought about what he could do to help... he knew that he would not appear to any on the lower plain as he had already decide to go back home after he helped. And giving them all Alteran or Asgard knowledge is both stupid and likely not needed. They not proven themselves worthy of it but at the same time they needed an edge and he wasn't going to stick around to see the results. Not like he could come back either the time spent helping and getting back could be explained away as trying to get back but he would be watch carefully for a while after he does.

That's not even getting into the fact that the main elements needed for most of their technology don't exist naturally in any kind of abundance. His people created it when they terraformed Avalon and then seed it far and wide from when they expected to expand. It never happen before the plague struck his people but that wasn't plan for. How could they have known the Ori would have found out and then sent a plague to kill them.

That when it hit him the Goa'uld and Tok'ra had fascinated him. Thou their technology had just been badly copied rip off's of his own peoples technology it had massive room for improvement and would be a good base to work of. Even just getting the technology more power would improve it. The Tok'ra where much better than their Goa'uld cousins but they lacked the manpower or resource to have amounted to anything. This would give their fascinating species another chance and likely help the humans here if he could set things up right.

First he choose the technology level and decide just to throw in everything they had ever and all the improvement to their technology that the Goa'uld had come up with. Even if it had been lost he added in basic fusion based creation of naquadah and trinium. He didn't include neutronium as it's to unstable to create with fusion and none of the technology's made by the Goa'uld needed it anyway. He did include the way to convert naquadah to naquadria. A Goa'uld had figure it out even if he hadn't live long enough to tell anyone. However no technology had been developed that used naquadria or even anyway to use it without it destabilizing. But it would be something for them to research on their own.

Now for the designs he would let them have a newly design ships based of ships the Goa'uld had used at their height just as earth was dragging them to their downfall.

First for a fighter his people didn't use them but he could see their usefulness so based of the death glider just removing the wings adding a dual plasma repeater(two up sized plasma repeater join together) in the nose based on the Kull warrior's plasma repeater. Two normal glider cannons on the sides facing forward for heavy cannons as well as upping the gravity engines strength to allow it to hover in place adding in a shield, cloak and a hyperdrive making it the strongest fighter he could think of based of Goa'uld level technology.

Next he started work on the Alkesh one of the few Goa'uld design that are useful straight of the bat as the Terran's say espically with it's shields and cloak. Moving the bridge down and a few feet back so as it was covered by the front armor. Then flattening the pyramid shape at the top so it matched the bottom and adding the turret from the bottom to the top as well as adding three dual plasma repeaters to the right and left sides of the ship and six each to the top and bottom for a total of eighteen dual plasma repeaters to add anti-fighter corvette duties to it's already inbuilt medium bomber, scout and troop transport ability's. The ring platform inside also allowing it to act as a reinforcement point if landed.

The Hatak itself was a different beast all together the basic shape was good and it had it's strong points. The biggest of which was that no matter what side you attacked it from it would be able to bring the same number of weapons to bare against you. Which is not something normally seen in a ship design. Normally they would have a strongest side to bring to bare against a target. Whether that is the front of the craft, one of it broadsides, above and/or below it didn't matter. However this advantage is wasted because of the rest of the design.

The first thing he did was remove the pyramid from the middle of the craft and fill in the support structure so as the Hatak was more of a circle then increased the length and width from 700 meters to 1000 meters with a height of 320 meters. Then he resized the corridors. Really they were a massive waste of space at their current size. With a main reactor core with two backup reactor that can be all active at the same time to boost power output to shield's, cloak, com's, sensors weapons and engines(both hyperdrive and sublight) two shield generators one on the top of the ship and one at the bottom and 24 ring platforms spread thought the ship. With four hanger bay's with one each to the north, south, east and west each hanger bay has retractable blast door which open to allow ships to enter and exit along with force fields to hold in an atmosphere each hanger bay is separated into four different levels and each level has two constructor each able to make a Alkesh or six death gliders at a time as well as any parts smaller than a Alkesh. Each level also can holds two to four Alkesh's(32 to 64 total) each as well as 24 to 36 death gliders(384 to 576 total) depending what is held in each level.

The Hatak itself is now arm with 180 anti capital staff cannon and 720 dual plasma repeaters for anti fighter as well as to intercept incoming energy pulse weapons fire(a beam would overpower the magnetic dispersion) or projectiles weapons. All spread evenly so as to maintain the ability to equally attack any target(however also meaning only being able to bring a maximum of 50% of it's weapons to bare on a single target). Of course they could also set the magnetic field strength so as to have the cannon act like flak cannons to create a wall of plasma that the repeaters can help reinforce or have the pulses have a homing effect(within a certain small range). Don't know why they would do so but they can if they want to with the program he included to be able to do so. The main bridge being right in the center of the craft. And a medical bay with 10 fixed sarcophagus and 20 stasis jar's for symbiotes. And a hydroponics bay.

Of course one of the hanger bay's(the south one) was totally taking up with two levels holding breaking down ship construction platforms that act as Goa'uld shipyard each able to build a Hatak at a time spending around 6 months to make one(eight total four to each level) the next level was holding AG-4(looks like the AG-3) satellites each the size of an Alkesh acting as a sensors and com's platforms. Had 6 dual plasma repeaters for anti-fighter as well as death glider sublight engines to be able to move into position along with shields and cloak that with enough around a planet could be used to shield or cloak a planet. Along with it's super heavy particle beam(which isn't used on ship based weaponry as it puts of a massive amount of radioactive subatomic particles which are very deadly to biological life forms even if it only affects the target and it's self)

For personal weapons and armor he take Kull armor and fashion it based on the armor he'd seen in star wars worn by Mandalorians. But without the jetpacks. In the helmet he Embedded sensors, com's, Breathing filtration system and a HUD. In the boots only a magnetic lock was included. However the gauntlets included a plasma repeater that could act as a plasma blade, a personal cloak and shield(Apophis version able to stop slow moving object as well) and a healing device. For weapons a pistol made with a plasma repeater and a under barrel zat(looks like the WESTAR-35 from star wars clone wars) and a rifle with a holographic sight that uses a plasma repeater for the top barrel and has a underbarrel staff weapon( looks like an a bigger two handed WESTAR-35 with a modern holographic sight on top)

With the design done Janus made evidence of the Tok'ra and Goa'uld to exist in a barren galaxy(ironically he notes that it's the Pegasus Galaxy as the terrans would come to call the last galaxy his people inhabited) close to the Milky Way as the terran's called Avalon. Which he made look like they wiped each other out barring the 17 "Tok'ra" that he put in the stasis jar's in the new medical bay. Three of which he made Queens. He gave them a story of civil war erupting over their psychological differences. And a plague hitting their host species. The Tok'ra sending this Hatak class mothership out to this Galaxy as a last hope for the survival of their species. Before he set up the Hatak to meet up with the humans in 10 years time and with all of that done Janus departed back home. Hoping he did the right thing.

it's a good premise that I hope someone picks up. For the universes I would suggest the following in no real order the first would be Babylon 5 with the ship being found shortly before or after the start of the Earth-Minbari war, next would be halo about two-three years before the fall of reach, next Battlestar Galactica(2003 remake) shortly before the start of the second Cylon war to just about after discovering the Pegasus any time between those two would work. And the last one that I can think of would be Mass Effect before the discovery of the Prothean ruins. It could work with others but I can't think of any outside of who I talked about. At least that are spacefaring enough to find the ship but not powerful enough to need tech level of the Goa'uld. Star trek fits in some regards that but really doesn't fit the theme I started with the reason Janus is helping is to give the Tok'ra a get chance at life as well as empowering humans to be able to defend themselves against a threat of extinction