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A/N: Before we get started, I just wanna say a few things. I recently, or have known for a long time I should say, that there is a shortage of Witcher/Naruto crossovers. Even more so that included our beloved Uchiha. Noticing this, I pondered on this concept and it struck me like a chidori (in the heart). Anyways for this story, it'll take place after Naruto's final fight with Sasuke since I like how this will tie into the Witcher universe later on. Also adding that for this chapter, Sasuke has accecpted Tsunade's offer about the Zetsu arm transplant.

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Disclaimer: Witcher and Naruto belong to their respective owners, the only thing I own is this fictional story.

"Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it."~ George Santayana

As Sasuke puts a hand on the door knob to the Hokage's office, he takes a breath in; then opens the door. Though only to sigh when he sees the Hokage sleeping with his head on the desk, drool starting to pool around his mouth. Also taking note of the pile of papers around him. Deciding to wake up Naruto he calls out to him.

"Oi, Naruto."

"...Naruto..."

Sasuke had enough and just simply said.

"Amaterasu." Also spiking his chakra a bit.

Naruto's eyes snap open at the words he heard then gets up immediately into a stance; ready for a fight. He relaxed when he saw Sasuke standing there casually with a bored look.

"Tsk, damn bastard. You know I don't like that."

"Hn." Was all the Uchiha said.

Naruto smiled a little rubbing his head. "It's good to see you again Sasuke." Naruto finished, taking a seat at his desk.

"I'm actually really glad you here, saves me from sending a message."

Sasuke raises an eyebrow. "What?"

Naruto looks away with a nervous smile. "I'm getting married." He looks back at Sasuke and continues.

"And I was wondering... if, you could attend?" He rubs his head.

The Uchiha gives him a thin smile. "I'll think about it." This earned a smile from the blonde.

"Heh, thank you. It's a few months from now, everyone will be there, and It's gonna be awesome since you're comi-"

"Naruto."

"Ah yes, sorry ya'know hehe. Anyways, back to business." Naruto said putting on the Hokage face.

Sasuke then takes out a scroll, throwing it to Naruto. Catching it, Naruto reads the contents of the scroll; reading the information Sasuke has gathered over the past year or so.

"Hmm, nothing out of the ordinary." Naruto said scanning the scroll again with narrowed eyes.

"I know. Soon my hidden contact up north will send me a message, said he was onto something big."

Naruto looks up noticing the Uchiha's troubled look. Which he rarely sees. "But why I'm here is for a different reason."

"Sasuke, what's wrong?" Naruto said while getting up.

"...I" It took a few seconds before Sasuke finally answered. "I don't know what to do now Naruto." Naruto frowned at that, he never heard nor seen this side of Sasuke.

"Sasuke?" Naruto slowly gets up noticing the Uchiha's face was getting desolate.

"Naruto, what do I have left on this world? What do I have left that's worth fighting or even living for?" He continuous.

"My brother Itachi, my mother, father, and my clan. Gone."

"Sasuke... what happened to you and Sakura? I thought you two were finally about to-"

"It... Complicated. After the things I did do her in the past Naruto, I can't. I just can't be with her." Sasuke looks away for a brief second, continuing. "After our fight... She's been avoiding me, even looking at me differently." He said quietly, almost sounding like a whisper, he continued.

"It's not hate, it's... uncertainty." He said silently while still staring at the floor. "Can't blame her. After all the things I did to her in the past; and to the ones she cared about." He finished.

Naruto got up from his seat, and makes his way to his distracted friend; putting a hand on his shoulder. Making the Uchiha react, and looking his friend in the eye.

"I'm sorry Sasuke... I didn't know." Naruto said with sympathy; the Uchiha appreciated that. The blonde than takes his hand off his friend's shoulder and walks towards the window. Staring out into the storm.

Sasuke stares at his friend's back while moments pass by. Naruto breaks the silence. "Sasuke..." He said closing his eyes.

"Yes?" He replied.

...

"Hinata is pregnant," Naruto looks at his friend who seems slightly surprised. "and I want you to be his guardian." Naruto said seriously.

Sasuke was caught off guard by the request, in all honestly he didn't know what to say. It was... almost, heart warming. If the Uchiha were to describe the foreign feeling.

Naruto smiles, seeing his friend's face, returning to the window. "I'm glad I at least, had some good news for you." He said with a thin smile.

"Does he have a name?" Sasuke asked.

"Hinata named him Boruto." He said, while Sasuke walked up beside Naruto. "The name suits him. I can already tell how he's going to act." Sasuke said with a ghostly smile, Naruto scoffed.

"Hmph, and let me guess. You're going to tell me he's going to seek you out, and ask you to train him." Naruto said sarcastically.

"Don't be surprised if he does." Sasuke said confidently, making the blonde chuckle.

Another silent moment greeted the two. Making the room quiet, and the sound of rain hitting the windows amplifying.

"Thank you... Naruto." Was all Sasuke said.

Naruto looked at his friend, who had a smile greeting his face; making him smile in return.

"Dattebayo!" He said loudly.

(Present)

Sasuke can be spotted sitting on a dead log, near a cliff side; staring off into the snowy mountains in the distance. Taking out his Hidden Leaf headband, he looks at the engraved Hidden Leaf symbol with a slash across it. Thinking about the memories he just had; the Uchiha sighs. Though he was knocked out of his thoughts when his clone called out to him.

"Oi, are you gonna keep sitting there and mop? You have a fire to start." The clone just stands there with a bored face staring at the original.

Sasuke looks at his clone with a small tick mark. "Why can't you do that?"

"Because you only ordered me to get logs." And with that the clone disappears on it's own will; dropping the logs it gathered.

"Tsk."

Sasuke looks back at the headband.

He felt like he wasn't apart of the Hidden Leaf anymore. Kind of felt like he was only there to help Naruto as the Hokage. 'Protecting' the Hidden Leaf from the shadows, nothing more.

Now as to why Sasuke was in the Land of Snow, his hidden contact finally made a breakthrough. Discovering that Kaguya was preparing for something or someone's arrival. And the answer to that, was in the Land of Snow somewhere in a hidden ruin. Sasuke had his doubts about this but, he figured he'd do Naruto a favor, his family, a favor.

Sasuke gets up from his seat and pulls out a scroll, unsealing it in the center of the forest clearing along the cliff side; a large tent appears. Walking over to the pile of logs his clone gathered, he picks up a few. Starting a fire with a small Katon jutsu, just little ways from the tent. He then pulls out a smaller scroll which contained some of his perishable foods, and some water. As Sasuke was heating up his supper, he glances at the sunset. Noticing the sun was going down too fast for his liking.

'Better get some sleep soon, might need to wake up early. Have a feeling I might need it.'

Sasuke later then eats his supper under the cold night sky, basking in the light of the campfire; though he was thankful the stars gave him company that night.

(Meanwhile, In the realm of magic)

A witcher clad in warrior's leather jacket with two swords on his back reaches the Pellar's house with a rat in his hand, Geralt opens the door to see the Pellar drawing milk from Princess.

'Must be for the ritual, or he's just really thirsty.' He thought to himself as he was walking towards him.

"Will this do?" Geralt gestured to the rat in his hand.

The Pellar looked with a bowl of goat's milk in his hand, then looked away. Grabbing a handful of seeds from one of his satchels, he proceeds to disperse the seeds in a half circle; after doing this he pours the goats milk on the scattered seeds. Putting out a hand so the witcher can hand him the rat, in which Geralt gave it to him. The hunched Pellar motions the rat around the half circle only to pull out a dagger and gut the rodent; spilling its blood on the circle earning a small squeal. The aged hermit fell to his knees while a grey smoke cloud formed around his head, then leans back staring at the ceiling with orange colored eyes before saying.

"They are not here. They have gone." The Pellar continues.

"Blood! I see blood!" The Pellar's eyes looks around frantically as he says that.

Geralt's eyes narrow at the Pellar, trying to interpret what the hermit is saying.

"Whose?" The Witcher responds.

"No Anna... No Tamara... Just a child." The Pellar continues his motion with his arms out stretched.

'This complicates things.' Geralt thought to himself.

"T-There's more... I see... I see. Darkness. Wait, there's something in the..." The Pellar's face starts to turn horror at what his vision was showing him.

"It's a shadow, a silhouette. Surrounded by purple... flames. It has. Red glo-glowing eyes... and it's. God's. There's this large... glowing monster." The Pellar falls forward on his hands; feeling drained.

The last bit of the vision got Geralt's attention, but decided to ask about Anna and Tamara first.

The Pellar slowly got back on his feet and faced the confused witcher.

"A child that lives not, yet did not die." The hermit said. Geralt narrows his eyes again, then responds.

"Mentioned a child. Whose?"

"Why, Anna's." The hermit replied.

"Anna was pregnant?"

"She was. And she miscarried."

'So the baron is withholding information from me, is he hiding something?' The witcher thought to himself.

"You look confused White Wolf, did the baron mentioned any of this to you?" The Pellar received a straight answer.

"No." Geralt said in his gruff voice.

"Afraid, perhaps, or ashamed, or forgetful... or perhaps he had no wish to remember." The old man replied shaking his head. Changing the subject, Geralt decided to ask about the ominous vision.

"Anyways, what was that about the shadow? You said it had red glowing eyes. Does this thing have anything to do with Tamara and Anna?" Sounded like a Hym to Geralt, and if it was a Hym; this could complicate things.

After Geralt said that the Pellar turned away from the witcher with an worried expression.

"Nay..." He replied in a whispered tone.

"The spirts warned me of... something." The Pellar said in a low voice.

Geralt slightly raised an eyebrow.

"Something? So this has nothing to do with Tamara and Anna?" Geralt was starting to get annoyed now; he came here for answers but only got more questions.

"White Wolf. The great spirits. They only warn me of great dangers that happen in the future. The White Frost was the first one."

The Pellar turns around facing the witcher with a serious face.

"That was the second time they warned me of a great danger."

Geralt sighed, he wasn't sure if he could believe such a claim; but then again he felt troubled by this little piece of information.

'I'm getting too old for this shit.' That was the only thought that came to Geralt's head.

(With Sasuke)

It was the crack of dawn, and Sasuke could be seen sitting on a dead log sharpening his Snake Sword. He figured the extra edge wouldn't kill anybody. Putting the small sharpening stone away, he reaches for his warm cup of water; while also enjoying a piece of his toast he cooked earlier. After finishing breakfast he heard a screech in the distance, his hawk he summoned earlier in the morning. Standing up, he puts out a arm so it can land. After the hawk landed, it gave a small chirp to it's master that in found something of interest. Like as if it spoke the same language as Sasuke, It told where a hidden ruin was. Sasuke looks away from the hawk and gazes into the distance.

"Hn." Sasuke hummed, looking at a particular mountain in the distance. While his summon disappeared with a cloud of smoke, Sasuke immediately notices dark grey clouds rolling in on top of his desired location.

"Tsk."

'Won't be able to fly in that weather, ruins are just located underneath that snowstorm. Unfortunately.' And with that, Sasuke began his trek down the cliff side. Leaving behind a smoking camp fire.

After hours of hard trekking, Sasuke finally reached to ruins, it was just up ahead. The snow storm caught Sasuke off guard, it came in early then he expected. Which delayed Sasuke from getting to his destination sooner than he wanted too. It was almost nightfall and the snowstorm was still at full force. Sasuke had to find shelter a couple of times to avoid hypothermia; also using a few katon jutsus to warm up. Luckily shelter was right there, carved into the mountain. Sprinting past a few broken pillars Sasuke finally reached the half caved in entrance.

Once inside Sasuke did a small katon jutsu to warm up his hands, also feeling slightly winded from the blizzard.

After catching his breath and warming up. Sasuke brushed some snow off his black cloak and hair, while taking in his surroundings. Finding a small torch handle on the stone carved flooring, he sets it alit with a small katon jutsu; giving him lighting so he could see what was around him. The first thing he noticed about the ruins was the architecture. The style of it, like it was built a very, very long time ago. Sasuke narrowed his eyes at the stone carvings, trying to trace the origin of the building style to a certain culture in his era. Nothing came to mind. Though he did notice they like flours a lot. Resemblance really. Looking at the gothic themed doorway opposite of where he came from, Sasuke continues forward; deeper into the dark ruins.

Sasuke was currently walking down the long hallway, he passes another large doorway; also realizing he stumbled upon a cavern with water in it. In this cavern was a stone pathway accompanied with pillars that was supporting the ceiling and had etchings on it, along this pathway there was water on either sides. Even though Sasuke didn't have a clue where he was, he found ruins quite attractive. Though he knew better, and with caution, the Uchiha persevered along the dark path with torch in hand.

As Sasuke disappears along the bend just up ahead, a rather large silhouette can be seen where Sasuke originally came from.

Watching.

As Sasuke was traveling down a dark hallway, he could make out a lighted room just up ahead. When Sasuke passes another gothic doorway; though he entered a well lighted room; this puts him on guard since someone was probably here too. Looking around in the room, he could make out two flights of stairs going up into the same direction, which lead to another door way. Though what caught his attention were these two statues. Sasuke narrowed his eyes.

'Sharingan.' Once Sasuke activated his Sharingan, he tensed a bit when he seen chakra infused with those statues; dormant. Though most of the chakra flow was coming from the ribbons that were wrapped around the statues, which contained strange glyphs in written on them.

When Sasuke got closer to the statues for a closer look, he noticed that they seemed like they were made of rock. For their hands, they were rather spiked clubs which also seemed like they were made of rock too. A spiked head? Their legs were very asymmetrical, and seemed like they could have a hard time standing up on just one of their legs.

As Sasuke got close to one of the statues, they both spoke in synchronization. "Intruder detected. Identity not recognized."

Sasuke leaped back while putting a hand on his blade; narrowing his eyes. The elementas got off their pedestal smashing their spiked hands together, ready to smash the Uchiha to the ground.

'I can forget about taijutsu and genjutsu, tough armor and it doesn't even have eyes. Ninjutsu it is then; chidori?'

As Sasuke was thinking, he saw a weakness in their armor. Sasuke then notices one of the golems decided to charge him. Growling and flailing his bulky arms in his path the golem runs towards the Uchiha at high speeds. But Sasuke was too fast, sidestepping the golem's charge; it destroyed a pillar instead.

As Sasuke was standing behind the golem's exposed back, he channels lightning to his sword; making the infamous sound of a thousand birds. Holding his blade horizontally, he extends his blade length which contained mostly of lightning, aiming for the abdomen with the gaping hole in the center; he slashes. Since the Golem was made of stone, and since stone is weak to lightning. The attack met no resistance, cutting the golem in half; both ends falling to the ground.

Thinking the Uchiha was distracted, the last golem charges him. Roaring, it runs fast as it can; destroying a couple of pillars in the process. Sasuke turns his head around with wide eyes, and immediately activates susanoo. As the golem's fist was about the make contact with Sasuke's susanoo, a large spear made of red energy peirce's the golem; going straight through and hits Sasuke's defence. The spear explodes on impact sending him flying into a nearby wall, though the golem was less fortunate; it died before Sasuke even hit wall.

'What the hell?' Sasuke thought to himself, deactivating his susanoo while stepping out of the hole he made. Dusting himself off, he finds out who attacked him. There, standing on a balcony overlooking the entrance Sasuke came from, was a heavily built pale man wearing a pale blue shirt with a high collar that covered most of his chin. He also had short spiky hair that was a mix between grey and a blue tint, also sporting a full beard but was mostly covered by the high collar. Though what Sasuke didn't like about this guy was that he had the byakugan.

"Leave." Continuing.

"I will not let some imbecile jeopardize my master's return!"

Sasuke narrows his eyes, deciding to probe for information, Sasuke asks the pale man a question.

"Master's return?"

The man gruffed. "Hmph, as if I would tell some simpleton who can't even tell me the difference between a kunai and scroll! And I believe I told you to leave!" It was quiet for a few seconds when Sasuke calmly walks towards the ashes of the golem who died by the spear; picking up his sword that he dropped.

Looking at the man standing above, he asks another question. "Do you know who Kaguya is by any chance?"

The burly man activates his byakugan. "What about it?"

Sasuke already received his answer. Kenshiki started to scowl. "Was it you and that damn brat who defeated the Rabbit Goddess?" Sasuke just stood there with a stoic face and a hand on his blade; which pissed Kenshiki off.

"Either way, It doesn't matter," A red energy ring formed behind Kenshiki's back, reaching behind him with both hands; he pulls out a twin set of daggers.

"You'll never leave here alive. And when my master finally arrives on this pitiful world, I'll give him your damned eyes." Kenshiki finished with a hidden smirk while getting into a stance.

Quickly jumping off the balcony Kenshiki brings down one of his dagger on top of Sasuke who quickly leaped back, then lunges forward to stab him; but was blocked with both daggers. Sasuke realized needed the extra edge so he decides to channel lightning into his blade. Kenshiki pushes Sasuke back with his daggers followed by multiple slash moves, Sasuke deflects every attack but is having a hard time keeping up with his strength. Leaping back again he does a ram sign for a jutsu.

'Katon!' Sasuke takes a deep breath letting out a huge fireball jutsu roar to life, Kenshiki saw this.

"Pitiful!" A weapon starts to materialize forming a hammer, he hits the oversized fireball with his weapon; exploding. Sasuke was Hoping for this. As Kenshiki was engulfed by the smoke, Sasuke appeared behind him; rinnegan blazing in the dimly lit room. Kenshiki eyes go wide eyed as he turns his head behind him; Sasuke's blade slashes one of his eyes; Making big man yell in pain. A dagger forms in Kenshiki hand and was about to stab the Uchiha, but disappeared.

Sasuke reappeared in the distance with a small smirk. That pissed him off.

Another red ring forms behind Kenshiki, pulling out another axe, twirling it around with his hand; he lunges at Sasuke with rage. Sasuke brings up his sword to guard but didn't predict the strength behind that charge, this causes him to be sent through the wall and into another room; a corridor. Sasuke makes a small grunting sound but recovers.

Though he didn't expect Kenshiki to come through the smoke again, immediately brings up his sword again to block but was too strong of a attack. He was sent yet again into another wall, and into a large room with light.

'Damnit' The Uchiha thought to himself.

Kenshiki came in through the smoke ready to send Sasuke into another wall again, but Sasuke wasn't having any of that shit, so he activates his susanoo and punches him into a nearby wall; which earned a loud grunt from the old man. Deciding to lead the charge, Sasuke leaps towards Kenshiki who was still recovering from the punch.

As Kenshiki shook his head and looked up, he didn't process the susanoo fist hitting him then sending him through the stone wall; ending up in another room yet again. But this room was strange. Sasuke walks through the hole in the wall, seeing Kenshiki getting up from a distance; forming a naginata in his hand. Sasuke takes the time to give the room a quick glance.

First thing he noticed was that he was surrounded by arches, followed by arches on top of them; he also seen the curved arches going around the center platform he was on. There was also a tower going up into the rock ceiling just behind Kenshiki who was staring at him. To Sasuke's left was a flight of stairs going down to who knows where, he also could feel a certain type of energy been given off by this room. looking around, he traced where the energy was coming from.

'Crystals?'

There were two, and it wasn't chakra that was being given off.

The byakugan user brought Sasuke out of his thoughts. "I was hoping not to bring the fight in here." He finished then lunges at Sasuke bringing down his naginata.

Sasuke redirects the blade to the side for a stab which got deflected as well, Sasuke side steps the horizontal attack cutting his arm; the Uchiha then ducks under the horizontal slash then cuts one of his knees then leaps behind him. As he was about to stab the burly man in the back, he gets body checked then sent into a wall; leaving a small creator. Kenshiki doesn't relent, he throws his naginata at Sasuke which he dodges and misses his head, he forms two daggers again then leaps towards Sasuke.

Sasuke coughs up blood due to force then looks up to see a naginata thrown at him, he leans his head to the side to dodge it. As he was about to get out of the wall Kenshiki comes in hard with dual daggers, he brings up his sword to block one of the daggers, holding the dagger at bay with his sword, he sees Kenshiki about to stab him with his second dagger. Sasuke immediately put a foot on his arm, preventing him from advancing with his second dagger.

They enter a stalemate for a few seconds; staring at eachother.

The pale man narrowed his eyes. "Your end is nigh Uchiha."

Sasuke replies back with a smirk. "I wouldn't count on it." He finished turning into smoke followed by lightning.

Kenshiki yells in pain and falls to his knees as ten thousand volts coursed through him. Sasuke comes in from behind with a lightning infused blade, he runs in; piercing the heart. Sasuke pulls out the blood covered blade and jumps back; he flicks the blade to get the blood off. Though he didn't notice that some of the blood got onto one of the crystals; it started to glow with a faint hum. Sasuke lowers his guard a bit, noticing his opponent's chakra levels were critically too low to support the body.

Sheathing his blade and deactivating his sharingan, he hears a loud humming sound to his right; looking he traces the sound. Sasuke slightly raises an eyebrow when he seen it was a glowing crystal. Glancing back at the nearly dead man, he decides to investigate it. With a slight limp, he nears it; also noticing the details on it. A well polished crystal with an azure mixed colour that got darker in the core of it. He narrows his eyes noticing strange glyphs etched into the stone.

'Definitely not known among my langu-' He was cut off from his thoughts when a dagger pierced his back. Sasuke internally curses himself for letting his guard down, grunting and blood coming out of the corner of his mouth; he turns his head to look behind him.

He's greeted with a half charred Kenshiki who's looking down him with one eye.

"Fool…" He then throws Sasuke across the floor, he slowly walks towards Sasuke; dagger in hand. The Uchiha makes an attempt to get up but fails.

"Weak... and undisciplined." Kenshiki says with hoarse breath, he continues.

"How did a brat like you defeat Kaguya? You can can't even kill an opponent properly." Kenshiki finished while wiping some blood away.

"...Look... me, in the eye and... say that." The Uchiha remarked coughing up blood.

"As you wish." Kenshiki neared the Uchiha, picking him up by the back of the neck.

Looking at the Uchiha with a dagger ready to pierce, he remarks back. "My face will be the last thing, your pathetic eyes will ever see." He raises his red dagger.

But Sasuke had a plan, he quickly raises a hand in which quickly turned into a chidori sharp spear. Piercing his heart yet again, finally killing him. The duo both fall to the ground.

Though what Sasuke didn't realize was that his spear attack went straight through his opponent and pierced the second crystal that didn't have blood on it; it ruptured. Sasuke brings up his head when he heard a loud shattering sound. Seeing the shards of the crystal flying, he curses his luck. On one side of the room, a portal was starting to form in the frame of a gothic door frame; the portal was trying to stabilize itself but the damage has already been done.

In Kenshiki's last breath he utters his last words. "F-Fool...f-forg-ive me...Momo...shiki." He said with his last breath.

Sasuke then turns his attention back to the room; which was collapsing due to the unstable portal. He then makes an attempt to getting, finally getting up but barely; he makes for the entrance he came from. But falling debris from the ceiling prevented him from doing so, turning his attention to the flight of stairs he seen earlier; he tries to run for it. As he was limping, a piece of an arch falls from the ceiling and on to his leg. Sasuke yells as his leg gets broken from the weight of the arch. He tries to wedge free but was proved to be futile.

He slams a fist on the ground. 'Damnit!…' The Uchiha thoughts himself. Thinking of a way to escape, he comes up with an idea. Activating his susanoo, he forms an arm to lift the arch up. But the portal went into a deep bluish purplish flame colour; dark lightning started to strike the crumbling room. Sasuke noticed this and realized he was in serious danger, he hurried. Successfully lifting the arch, he crawls out; deactivating his susanoo.

Crawling away from the unstable portal, something shiny catches his eye. His Hidden Leaf headband; his eyes widen a bit. As he was staring at it, a piece of rock lands beside him; bringing him back to reality. Crawling towards it, he finally reaches for it; leaning up against a nearby rock. His memories come flooding in, Naruto. His friend who saved him from the darkness. Staring at the headband, he traces the engravings with his thumb.

"Naruto." Sasuke utters.

'At least…'

The portal goes supernova.

'At least I got to say thank you…'

The Uchiha finishes his thought with a smile. The black hole then swallows the room expanding in size, sucking everything in it. As Sasuke gets dragged into the vortex, he feels excruciating pain all over his body. He then gives a loud shriek, filled with pain he never felt before. Survival instincts kicked in, he puts what energy he has left into his susanoo, which slightly lessened the pain but was still there.

'F-Forgive me… Naruto.' This was Sasuke's last thought to himself, before he was swallowed by darkness.

A/N: Hope you readers enjoyed my chapter. Next chapter will finally take place in the Witcher universe. This was also my first fight scene, and I'm kind of curious on what you readers thought of it. Constructive criticism welcomed.

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