Hello everyone! Here is the rewritten chapter of the first chapter of Renaissance! I rewrote this chapter as I saw a lot of flaws here. I want to make it better so you can realize its awesomeness.

Gohan could only feel pain as the wind rushed against his face. His shoulder was now gone, destroyed by his strongest enemy to date, Cell.

He couldn't help but scowl inwardly at himself. He could, should, have killed Cell as quickly as possible. He would have saved his father. His mother would have a husband and his brother, soon to be brothers, would have a father.

Because of his stupid ego and stupidity, that was all gone.

Gohan could feel the pain alright, but it wasn't from his destroyed shoulder, but from all the things that had just happened.

Compared to that, his lack of a shoulder was barely a sting.

Naruto could honestly say that he enjoyed this new life. A good family, his mate, even if they were both in 4-year-old forms, and a lot of excitement from what he had seen.

He had to say, while he did enjoy the latter parts of his previous life, he also liked this one.

He still couldn't believe his luck in his reincarnation into this world, along with Satsuki.

Right now though, he was slightly, but genuinely angry.

His brother for fours years had just dealt with a threat that had nearly killed Satsuki a few days ago.

He had been useless. He couldn't control his powers here like he could Chakra. His body was weaker, his energy was low.

'Never again! I will not be useless. I will protect her!' He thought to himself in anger. The black-haired kid knew that Satsuki could protect herself, but he couldn't help but feel very protective of his mate.

She was the same way, very protective of him.

Now, he needed a plan. His body had to grow. He had seen it before. Even as a baby, due to his previous life, he was aware of everything. He could remember Gohan being so much weaker when he was seven, even after 3 years of training, he was still very weak compared to his father in this timeline.

Yet, when he had gone into the time Chamber, he was hundreds of times stronger.

Naruto could easily tell that it was because of his drive and his body with his mind.

Chakra was similar, being part physical, and being part spiritual/mental. If his body was out of proportion with his mind, he would not become as strong as he wanted. The opposite had been true during the previous timeline, his yang part overpowering his yin by margins.

Naruto was thankful that he had been a Saiyan. That would help him become stronger much faster. Now, if he could use the dragon balls to become older, he would be alright. First, he needed a way to do it without suspicion.

'I could find them then say I wanted to become like Gohan and become 11. Satsuki could come with me as well,' a good plan if he had to say. Even if he was weak and could barely control his KI, the energy of this universe, he had been taught by both his father and Gohan to fly.

He was pretty fast, faster than the cars he had seen before on tv going around the track in a stadium.

He had no doubt that Satsuki could steal the radar and they could find them before anyone found out.

Naruto's plan would never work out since Dende and Piccolo would see, but he didn't know about them being able to read his mind. Fortunately, they hadn't used it on him, ever.

Satsuki scowled towards Dende when he said that he couldn't heal the scar on Gohan.

She liked the older brother of her lover. The boy had been very helpful to her, even though her own father had trained her.

She liked this family a lot. They couldn't replace her old one, but they were certainly there for her. Vegeta was like her father, prideful, very confident, borderline arrogance, but this one was stronger and more family loving.

"Dende, I'll do it," Piccolo gruffly said as he stepped forward. His usual cape had been destroyed during the fight with Cell. His body was beaten with purple blood coming out of cuts, but it seemed that his devotion to his student was stronger.

He kneeled down next to Gohan's right arm and placed his hand on it.

Chichi had originally hated Piccolo. He had tried to kill her husband, rule the planet, kidnapped her son, and turned him into a fighter, but after Namek, when he had comforted Gohan into a happy boy again, along with helping her second child Naruto, she began to like him.

She could finally see why Gohan respected his master so much. He was like an uncle to Gohan, being there for Gohan when Goku was not, just like now.

He was so injured yet his hands glowed with energy as he placed it on his student's scar.

He yelled as his energy left himself. Gohan started to struggle on the ground, but he eventually stopped.

He stopped glowing as Piccolo took his green hands of her son, his scar completely gone.

A few minutes later, Gohan awoke. He was greeted by the sight of his mother hovering over him, looking concerned.

The Demi-Saiyan groaned as he held his head. He had a major headache now from his fight…with...Cell.

Gohan let out another groan as he clutched his head. All the memories were coming rushing through his head. His father giving up and calling him. Cell trying to get him angry. 16's destruction. Him getting enraged. Turning into a new form before he lost consciousness. He could remember losing control to his Saiyan side. Torturing

Cell. Him trying to blow up. Dad dying. Eventually killing Cell.

Gohan widened his eyes as he felt his body going numb. 'Dad died! It's my fault. I couldn't control it,' he gritted his teeth, forgetting everything around him as he clenched his fists. 'Never again. I will not lose control. I will become stronger, control that form,' he snapped out of it as his mother shook him.

"Gohan, sweety, are you ok?" she asked.

She saw his eyes glazing down at the ground and could guess her son's thoughts.

She tried to assure him, telling him that the dragon balls would revive him, but she could see that it didn't help.

After Gohan finally came down from thought central, he got up and looked around. His brother, friends, and everyone else were looking at him in concern.

After telling them that he was ok, although he knew that Piccolo didn't believe him, they summoned Shenron.

The starred balls glowed with bright orange light before it shot out into the sky, spiraling and twisting until it eventually stopped and faded into a figure.

The mighty dragon's voice boomed across the lookout as he demanded why they had interrupted his rest.

"Shenron! Can you revive the people killed by the androids?" Bulma asked.

"So be it!" the green dragon's eyes turned a bright red before some of them felt many lives come back to life.

"Speak your second wish so I may return to my slumber!" he roared as a few like Yamcha and Krillin celebrated a bit.

Before anyone could say anything, Gohan stepped forward. "I wish to-"

'Guys, No!' a childish voice yelled through everyone's mind. Gohan was stunned to hear his father's voice, causing his voice to stop.

'What is it, dad? We're going to wish you back,' Gohan said.

'I can't Gohan. When I teleported Cell, I brought him to King Kai's planet. I accidentally caused his death and released some space pirate named Bojack. The Grand Kai punished me with 10 years before I could be revived by the Dragon Balls,' he told them.

Gohan widened his eyes as he fell to his knees in shock. He gritted his teeth in anger as his eyes flashed teal.

He smashed his fist into the lookout, causing spider cracks to form.

'It's my fault! I let him die! If I killed Ce-' he was interrupted by his father's voice in his head.

Goku sighed as he heard his sons thoughts. He needed to take responsibility before Gohan got worse and got too angry.

'Gohan! It isn't your fault!' he yelled to his son.

'But dad-' he was once again interrupted by the full-blooded Saiyan.

'No buts son. We can blame a lot of people. Gero for creating them. Me for letting him live. The androids for not hiding. Cell for blowing up. We can blame a lot of people Gohan, but you know the truth! It isn't your fault! You might not have killed Cell right away, but you still did! You saved everyone on the planet from him. Besides, I can always come back! You are now the protector son. I was entitled protector of Earth by Kami, but now, I give it to you. You need to train! You need to become stronger!' Goku continued.

'Dad! I can't! I'm not you! I could protect you when it came to it! I-' Gohan tried to protest.

Goku sighed. What he said next would be a little harsh, but it would be necessary to keep Gohan going.

'Gohan! You are the new protector. If you don't train, what might happen? What happens when the next threat comes? You must be prepared! You need to protect your mom, your brother, your friends, everyone! If you don't train, what will happen to them? Remember Cell? What would have happened if you didn't beat him? He would have destroyed Earth then went on to the rest of the universe! He would have killed everyone! Do you want that to happen?'

'No-'

'Then stop blaming yourself! You killed Cell! You saved them!' he told his son, finally calming down.

Gohan sighed as he looked at his brother, now standing at the same height as him, and Vegeta's daughter, Satsuki.

"Why did you do that?" he asked the black-haired kid.

He was referring to when his kid brother had weirdly wished to be as old as him. The dragon had granted the wish and disappeared.

They had also left the lookout afterward, his mother wanting to mourn her husband's death.

He was still upset with himself and had decided to dedicate himself to training his new form until he was in full control. Now, he just had to get the idea past his mother.

Naruto looked at Satsuki, silently asking if she agreed with telling Gohan.

She imperceptibly nodded her head, causing Naruto to release a sigh of relief before taking a deep breath and proceeding to tell his brother all about his and Satsuki's previous life.

Gohan had been avoiding Naruto and Satsuki for a week now. He still couldn't believe it. His own little brother, a reincarnation of a ninja who had killed hundreds of innocents and thousands of non-innocents in cold blood, just for revenge?!

He had tried to think up of anyways to justify it, but he couldn't.

In the next room, Naruto sighed. He had told Gohan what they did in their previous life, only the middle parts of it, before he ran off. He didn't hear his or Satsuki's early life or their later years when both had been happily together, even with the.

Naruto shook his head. He had enough of Gohan brooding around. He needed to become stronger, both him and his lover.

He left his room and busted down Gohan's room. Before his surprised brother could do anything, he growled at him to shut up and listen.

Gohan decided to comply, wanting to know why, and sat down.

After he had the permission to read his mind, Gohan closed his eyes and concentrated on Naruto's thought.

He could see everything, from the beginning when he was a child, to when he died.

After calming down a raging Gohan, something he was glad his mother from this timeline didn't see or hear, Naruto asked him to train Satsuki and him.

Gohan agreed, but he told him that he would have to bring it past Chichi.

Naruto, having read his mother's diary, smirked at said to not worry about it before runnindownstairs.

Chichi looked up when she heard her son calling her from the stairs and raised an eyebrow.

"What is it, sweetie?"

"Well, you see, I want to become strong so I asked Gohan to train me," Naruto said quickly. Seeing her about to protest, Naruto quickly went into his plan.

"Mom, if you do this, I can convince Gohan to go to high school," he whispered.

Chichi snorted. She knew her son a bit better now and knew of his devious mind. She knew what he was going to do, but she wasn't letting it go easily.

"And why should I allow that?" she asked him.

"Because Gohan might meet a few friends. Some lady friends," he smirked as he wiggled his eyebrows at her.

Chichi pretended to think for some time before agreeing but set down some rules.

"One, you will go to wherever I choose. 2, You and your brother will still need to study at least 3 hours every day. 3, Gohan must get a girlfriend when he's 19, or else, I won't ever allow training, got it?!" she asked, although it wasn't really a question.

Of course, Chichi was kidding. She wasn't going to ban one of their connections to their father. She could see that both of them enjoyed it and she wouldn't take one of the few things that did that away.

Naruto agreed and Chichi called out Gohan to get down from the stairs.

He sheepishly came down and told his mother that he agreed to her rules.

Naruto grinned as he and Gohan did a fist pump of victory, not seeing Chichi's victorious smirk.

Gohan took Naruto and teleported them both to Capsule Corporations before both went in using Gohan's full access card.

Vegeta, while a stoic person, did love his daughter and treated her as his most prized thing, even above Bulma.

As such, when the most important person in his life had requested to train him barely a month after being born, he was immensely proud.

He had immediately begun training her, although he had been very gentle, teaching her lessons in KI and a few more things.

Unfortunately, a toddler could only handle so much and he knew it, even as a Saiyan, so he didn't go hard on her.

One thing he taught her was KI sensing, which she was currently using to get to Naruto and his older brother.

After a few minutes, she traced them to her mother's lab.

"...you do it?" Gohan asked.

Bulma smirked at the two. "Of course I can. I just need a day to make 3," she told them.

Satsuki coughed into her hands, bringing her mother and lovers attention to her. Gohan already knew she was there.

In a deep cave, many scattered pieces of technology started to wiggle and shake before they all levitated.

The pieces came together to form a head, but it was nothing like a normal head.

Teal eyes snapped open as a figure came towards him.

The figure, whose body shape declared was a male, picked up the head and walked towards a holding tank filled with green liquid.

After being dunked into it, the head looked outwards, only to see his minions creating a body for him.

Using his voice, he protested this, saying that he would make his own body when the time came.

They obliged and stepped away from the body.

The head looked around his nearly destroyed lab.

All that had been left after they had come were a few regeneration tank and a large computer.

The men, when they destroyed his labs, had, fortunately, not checked everything thoroughly.

They had not checked to see what had survived before they left nor did they ever discover his secret pathways to different labs.

After a few weeks, his minions had checked upon him and brought him together using metals and technology.

They put him back together, though he was almost dead, aside from his head.

With all the technology he had created before dying, it had been easy to bring him back.

Now, he would take vengeance. They destroyed everything he ever had. His lab, his creations, and everything else.

While he was in the tank, his supercomputer had been processing all news from outside and cross-referenced the important ones to check.

"Dr., Alpha 5-8g has failed his mission and has been destroyed. Here is a picture of his killer," a female, mechanical voice echoed throughout the cave.

'So he has also failed. So many fails! Too many!' he brewed in his thoughts as he saw the picture.

The one there surprised him. The blond had defeated his creation?! Impossible! Inconceivable!

Omake: How Goku and Vegeta beat Cell.

Goku was currently rushing towards Cell, trying to lengthen the battle so his son could see the green grasshoppers fighting style.

Cell laughed as he kept countering Goku's attack.

"You can't beat me Goku! I am perfect!"

Vegeta was getting very annoyed at the purple-eyed android's rant.

"Maybe I'll even torture your family and friends! After all, it's not like you can beat me!"

Goku was gritting his teeth.

Cell was right. He was too weak against the android right now.

"I think Chichi should be first, what do you think?" Cell knew everything about them, his stupid creator having installed a bug yo just follow them. It had not been destroyed and programmed into Cell, both this timeline and the alternate one.

Trunks had just turned into his Super Saiyan form.

He rushed towards Cell, intent on killing the bastard. He wouldn't let him kill his mother, not from this timeline or his own!

Cell was too strong, however, and quickly blocked his attack before blasting a thin beam of KI through the lavender-haired teen, killing him instantly.

Vegeta's anger soared through the heavens as his KI began to flare.

He instantly turned into Super Saiyan, but his power kept growing, stronger and stronger, until he finally reached the limits and ascended into an unknown form, the second level of the Super Saiyan transformation.

Cell kept taunting Goku. "Maybe that son of yours, Naruto?"

Goku's eyes turned crimson red as he roared out.

His golden ki became covered by a crimson outline. His eyes had become totally white, no iris or pupils, just pure whiteness.

Cell laughed out loudly as he felt both Goku and Vegeta power up. Finally, they would challenge him!

Cell could not do anything much longer as both Goku and Vegeta rushed towards him, ignoring their rivalry to kill the fucker in front of them.

Cell stood no chance as they quickly beat him around before they both got ready for their final attack.

Cell, still arrogant enough to believe he could win, decided to counter it.

"KaaaaaaMeeeeeeHaaaaaaMeeeeee...Haaaaaaaaaaaaaa!" Goku shouted as Cell did the same attack. The two blue attacks clashed, but Goku's quickly become encased in a crimson light and began overpowering Cell.

Omake 2

Cell tried to rush towards Goku, trying to kill him while he was eating.

The blond was not expecting the attack but sensed him fast enough to dodge.

Unfortunately, his food was destroyed by him. Goku got enraged and started to power up.

He past level one, two, and three and became a Super Saiyan 4. He looked like he did in GT, but with all hair being golden.

Goku rushed towards Cell and proceeded to destroy him. He then tortured Cell for what he did to the food until Cell tried to blow up.

Goku scowled at him and teleported them to Pluto before continuing. Cell came back 10 times, but still got his ass kicked by Goku before dying.

Done! Foreshadowing at the end. I hope you know who the doc is. I used careful wording, but the head probably clued you in.

I did a few things, so look at the wording of a few things, both dialogue and story. That's all the hint I'm giving you.

Power level:

Gohan Base: 25 million.

Naruto and Satsuki: 100,000.

The only reason they are so high is because of their Ki level.

I let Gohan know because I want him to know. He will understand them more this way. He dislikes what they did, but he understands why. He doesn't like it, but he accepted it, got it?

Besides, now, Gohan will be darker. Not that different, but if he experiences that, he will be easily prepared for other stuff. He himself won't change much though, but will be less naive.

Any questions? PM or review.