{Hey guys, it'd be me, TheAceCard97, and I thought I'd give you a small little update. Now, I've been listening to a lot of your feedback and criticism, and I just wanna say that you guys are absolutely right. So far this story has been taking the generic route and the scenarios have been a bit cliche predicted, but hear me out guys It's only chapter two, and I have BIG plans for this story. Just give me time to work out the small little kinks and it'll get better and more well developed as it goes on. So far I'm the grey/mixed area of this where it could go several ways, and I'm currently still trying to work this out and make it better. I think my main problem is that I pushed this chapter out quickly so people won't lose interest in it, but in return it was underdeveloped and loose, which I apologize for. Now I know I sound like a broken record at this point, but seriously your criticism helps out a lot here and it helps me put out better stories by listening to the audience. Now, let's talk about the characters for a sec, starting with Lori.}

{Now, I know the whole "Abusive Oldest Sibling" thing has been played out many of times, but that's NOT what I'm going for here. I'm trying show a more human and compassionate side of her and as the story progresses you'll see more of it as the story progress. And BTW, the whole point of bringing up the "Human Pretzel" thing was to show how meaningless it actually was. It was Hollow Threat, and the only reason she hit Lincoln in the first place was because he was bad mouthing her. Speaking of which..}

{Yes, Lincoln is acting like a little whiny bitch right now. There is a reason behind that, but that's spoiler territory so I don't wanna go into that right now. As for the swearing, I don't get that complaint really. He only swore at his sentence during his rant in the first chapter and it wasn't anything major. Chill my dudes.}

{As for Luna's behavior, I was just basically trying to do the whole "Good Cop Bad Coop" thing with her and Luan . Showing Luna's impulsive side really helps out with showing Luan's sympathetic side. It helps out even more considering they're roommates. I know it seems a bit sketchy, but again, it's only chapter two. Give it time.}

{In conclusion, I screwed up and I apologize. The chapters will take longer to make now, but that's a good thing because it'll give me time to flesh out the chapter and make it better for me and you, A.K.A., the audience. But the general idea of the story will stay the same. It can still work and I think I can make a great fanfic out of it. I'm not gonna promise that it'll be the best fanfic out there(again, this is my first), but I can promise you it'll be the best I can make it.}

{To be entirely honestI didn't want to make this as I'm trying to follow the "Show, Don't Tell" idea I was given in the first chapter, but if people start getting the wrong idea about this story, that it'll just be brushed off as "Another Genetic and Basic-Ass Loud House Fanfic.", and that's not what I want for it, because this can be so much more than that. So please, give me time to bring more into this story. That's all I ask. And if you have advice feel free to PM me. But I I'm not remaking this story because it'd be too easy in my opinion.}

{But with that being said, I'm out and thanks for listening you guys.}