I'm rewriting my Elsanna stories, wasn't really feeling them so :/ sorry if you did like my other ones but it's really hard writing something you don't really like ;P

Oh yeah this is the rewrite from Body language :D
And I'm rewriting YMWAM also :3

Lots of swearing yada yada also I'm using OC's because I'm original okay enjoy XD.


Elsa leaned against her bike, unlit cigarette hanging from the corner of her lips. She brought her metal lighter up and flicked it on, shielding it from the breeze that began to pick up. When her cigarette lit up she flicked it off and put it away, taking a drag as she let her eyes drift over the party in front of her.

If that is what you call too many college kids gathered around a bonfire with shitty music and beer that tasted like piss.

"Els what the fuck are we doing here." She looked to her side, seeing Ashton leaning against her own bike with a bored look on her face. "Yeah girl, seriously the burial of our dog was better than whatever the fuck this is." Haiden was also leaning against her bike, scoffing when she saw one of the jocks trying to impress some cheerleader with his 'muscles'.

"Well these are our new fellow students now so why not say hello, hm?" a wicked smirk made its way on the blonde's lips and the other two girls grinned back.

Elsa, Ashton and Haiden have been friends since 5th grade.

Ashton was a pretty tall girl, standing at about 5'9. She has curly, semi long chocolate brown hair, just under shoulder length. Due to her height she was pretty intimidating and her 'don't fuck with me' attitude really helped too. She was beautiful in the dangerous and rough kind of way. Freckles and dark blue eyes, full somehow always pink lips. In good shape. The only real 'flaw' if you could really call it that. Was a scar that ran through her eyebrow and stopped at the bottom of her upper right eye lid.

Then there is Haiden.

Haiden was actually fairly short, standing proudly at 5'3. She had short black hair at about just under her jaw length with silver highlights. Her temper was even shorter than her. Her girls and family really kept her in line but sometimes even they weren't enough to calm her down. she had piercing green eyes. When she smirked with her bow shaped lips her cute little dimples would show but don't let this fool you. Really. Don't. She had that, what Elsa and Ashton like to call, The puss in boots charm.

She also had one thing that would be called a 'flaw'

A scar that ran along her chest. From her right shoulder, over her left breast. It stopped at her armpit.

And then Elsa

Elsa sat about in between the two with height, standing at 5'6. Her platinum blonde hair always in her signature French braid with her bangs haphazardly slicked back. She was fairly calm, didn't really like picking or getting in fights but is she had to, she'd serve your ass back to you on a silver platter. Her ice blue eyes could bore into your soul and make you freeze on the spot. That really was enough to not even think about doing something.

Her flaw was a bit worse.

Various little scars, with various depths sat on her back and one big one that ran from her left shoulder to the middle of the right side of her waist.

It only made them stronger really.

Elsa flicked her cigarette bud away and stomped on it as the three of them made their way to the rowdy students. Their boots crunching the leaves and twigs as they approached the beverage table.

They passed a few students and said students stopped doing what they were doing in favor to stare at the new arrivals. Prompting others to do the same and stare.

A wolf whistle broke the sudden silence and everybody broke out in cheers, continuing whatever dumb shit they were doing.

The girls heard a horde of heavy footsteps and rolled their eyes at the same time. "Great" Ashton sarcastically muttered into the red cup. They turned just in time to see three jocks coming their way, hyping each other up in that stupid way where you slap and hit each other until you bruise.

"So ladies, are ya'll new here? Cuz I'd seriously remember hot babes such as yourselves." A lean guy in a letterman jacket said with a smile and a wink the girls assumed was intended to be charming. The boy was still rubbing his arm where his way stronger friend had punched him. "Well dude, we are, because I'd seriously remember a toothpick like you" Haiden said as she smiled and winked at the jock.

The 'athletic' toothpick frowned and growled. "I'd watch your mouth skank, you don't know who you're talking to" Haiden and Ashton guffawed while Elsa just chuckled with one brow amusedly pulled up. "Yeah I really don't and I'd really not like to boy." Haiden stepped forward and gave his cheek a few soft slaps, she then threw her cup away and headed towards a group that mostly consisted of girls. "I'm going to try to get some pussy tonight, don't wait up for me girls!" She quickly turned around and blew a kiss to Ashton and Elsa.

The remaining two girls chuckled at their friend's ridiculousness and looked at the three jocks again. "Well, this was real fun but I'm going to mingle too, see ya boys." Ashton saluted with two fingers, winked and took off towards the same group of girls where Haiden could already be seen with a girl on her lap.

Elsa was left alone with the three and she could already see them build the courage to say something. "Yeah sorry boys, not happening, have a great evening though." Elsa clicked her tongue twice and grabbed a new cup, stalking off to a quiet corner where she could keep an eye on her friends.


The night seemed to go by slowly, Elsa was still sipping on her beer and a lit cigarette was held between her fingers. She'd been keeping an eye on her friends who seemed to have found their lovers for the night. At one point, Ashton had walked over to the amplifier and plugged the cable out of the laptop only to replace it with an aux cord and plugged it in her phone. It was quiet for a moment before Grind on me began to blast through the amp and Haiden was nodding approvingly as the crowd cheered.

Ashton had walked to the middle of the dance floor and high fived Haiden when they started to dance for their one nights and eventually danced on the girls. one by one everybody started to grind with each other.

Elsa was watching the whole display with a little smirk on her face, scoffing at her friends. They're so extra.

The music changed to Ignition (remix) and everyone pulled someone close again.

The blonde was about to reach for a new cup of beer when she saw more people coming from the woods towards the party.

Curiously she looked at the newcomers, a tall but buff friendly looking blonde dude, a lanky black haired kinda short dude and an even taller and buffer looking chestnut haired dude.

But the last visitor really catched her eye.

God damn how could she not

A girl with strawberry brown colored hair, shyly walked behind the three boys. Her teal blue eyes visible from even where Elsa was standing sat behind two fairly thick rimmed glasses. She wore a plain light green sweater that was too big for her frame and it made her look warm and adorable. Her skinny jeans were torn and she had light pink beat up converse on her feet.

Wait what the fuck I don't find things adorable.

Elsa knew she was staring at the girl, the fire of the bonfire danced in her glasses and her eyes were big with amazement and excitement. She pushed her glasses up with her fingers and kept on looking around her.

She's definitely never been to a party before.

But still, Elsa was enraptured by her beauty, her thin lips were still so full and they looked so appealing, so pink and wanting.

Twenty minutes in their arrival and Elsa was still completely drawn to the redhead who was fluttering and squealing a bit with some girls. The boys who had arrived with her were all doing their own thing. The blonde hmm'd and dawned her third beer of the night in one go. Crushing the cup and threw it away as she licked her lips and stepped towards the redhead.

People seemed to part for her like the red sea did for Moses. She walked towards the back of the redhead so she couldn't see her approaching. But her friends sure did.

One of them noticed her and stared at her with wide eyes and a slacked jaw. The next one noticed her sudden silence and asked her what was wrong when her eyes also fell on Elsa, same reaction.

One by one this continued until the redhead was looking confusedly at her friends, really not getting what was going on.

Just as Elsa reached her she turned around and the blonde had never seen someone's face turn into the same color as their hair.

Elsa smiled at her and reached for her hand, brought it up to her lips and gave it a soft and solid kiss.

"Hey, I'm Elsa. Elsa Frosskald"


Yeah that's it for chapter one ladies and gentlemen! Hope you enjoyed it and forgive me for just pulling those stories but again. I can't write when it's not liked (by me :P)

Also, my fall break is next week soowsies. :O

Cheers loves!

~M