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                                                            Ruined

            It had been a long hard month for Urashima Keitarou. The girls had suddenly become more abusive on him for no apparent reason. They were working him harder and harder every day and beating him senseless if they found even a flaw in his hard work. Only Shinobu and Mutsumi were the same, the beatings were becoming more and more severe and his work load was getting bigger and harder. He was now down to 4 hours of sleep and hardly even two meals a day. In one week he had scrubbed and fixed everything in the Hinata sou at least three times or more, and his body ached severely He was just now returning to the Hinata sou from grocery shopping holding the bags in his arms. Sighing he looked out the trains window at the surrounding landscape.

            'I wish I knew what the girls are doing.  We all know I'm ridiculously immortal but this is going too far. I wish I knew what they were up to.' Sighing again he noticed people staring at him. He didn't blame them, they have all mostly seen him flying over the city several times, knew how his tenants abused him. Using him like a slave and general punching bag. The old men just shook their heads in disappointment. The girls either tried to cheer him up with encouraging words or admired him for being so committed. The middle age group wondered why he didn't just leave and also sent him their condolences for being used that way. Sighing again he resumed staring out the window waiting to get back home.

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            Climbing up the steps Keitarou found himself home once again. Or as people would tell him, his prison, Kitsune and Motoko were waiting for him at the door. Kitsune held up a watch so that he could see it.

            "You're five minutes late." Was all she said. An audible shing was head as Motoko drew her blade and quickly struck him with one of her special techniques. After wards he was forced to gather up all the food that had been spilled and take it to the kitchen. Motoko then gave him a quick shove and forced him upstairs where a bucket of water and a rag was waiting for him. Without a word of complaint he took it and began to walk towards the end of the hall only to be stopped by Motoko.

            "You're starting at the wrong end." She quickly and violently pushed him to the other end almost making him fall. Stumbling to the end of the hall he began to scrub the floor for the fourth time in six days. He made sure to scrub it hard and fast. Trying to make it as clean as possible.

            "You missed a spot Urashima." He hadn't even reached where she was looking yet to clean it. But before he could dwell on that thought he was sent flailing into the balcony rail with another one of her techniques. Groaning he quickly ran and got a hammer some wood and nails to fix it. After that was done he worked hard and fast to finish cleaning the floor. Getting hit about once every so often, sometimes just because Motoko was bored and wanted to hit him just for fun.

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            Keitarou was about to sit down for a minute or two when Kitsune sauntered up to him.

            "Oh getting lazy now are we. You still have to fix the heater and clean the Hot springs. Then you have to clean the living area." Kitsune handed grabbed him and pushed him downstairs. At least she wasn't as abusive as the others. The heater went rather well. The onsen was a bit more brutal. Kitsune whipped him for every flaw that he made. Or on spending too long trying to clean a certain spot, the living area was just too much. By the end of it Keitarou was tired. He just trudged to his bedroom and barely made it to his futon where he then lay down and covered himself. The pain in his body was harsh on him, but he would eventually fall asleep, even though he was hungry he was still too tired to make it into the dining area let alone eat.

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            "Where is that idiot" said Naru tapping her chop sticks against her plate. She looked at the others who just shrugged.

            "Do you think that maybe we're working him too hard Naru-sempai. I mean he has already done more than his fair share as manager for the next four months. I'm beginning to feel sorry for him." Stated Motoko who just put her glass down. She looked at the brown haired girl across from her who then put the sticks down.

            "I don't know, I mean he's so sexy when he's working hard like that. Also watching him get beat is always entertaining plus I get to use my whip on him. I've always wanted to use my whip." Said Kitsune smirking and opening up one of her eyes.

            "I like beating on Keitarou too." Said Su jumping onto Kitsunes' shoulders.

            "As much as I agree with Motoko, we can't just up and stop treating him like this; I mean we've been doing it for so long he might get suspicious that we're just doing it to amuse ourselves. That and he'll get a big ego about it. I say we just start to become a bit more lenient until it's back to how it was before." Said Naru. Motoko nodded her head slightly and sipped at her drink some more.

            "W-Where's Sempai. We can't eat without him." Said Shinobu clasping her hands on her lap. She had become more timid ever since they had almost all agreed to become more abusive to Keitarou just for entertainment.

            "Most likely in his room, lets all go get him." Stated Naru they all agreed and fallowed her to Keitarous' room.

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            Keitarou was almost asleep. His nightmares of the abuse that he received were haunting his vision as he lay in bed. The door suddenly opened and his eyes shot open. The shadow was unmistakably that of Naru. There were others as well, they had come to get him to do more work and to beat him. Despite his lack of any real strength he started to try and crawl away. Falling several times and just barely moving at all.

            "You lazy, perverted, idiot. We've been waiting for you in the dining room and here you are lying in bed." The covers were ripped off his body and Naru continues to yell at him. "Get up now and get in there or do you want another beating?" he couldn't reply or really move, the next thing he felt was a sharp kick to his back then a punch to the side of his face sending him flying upwards.

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            Naru kicked him high and then punched him. After he crashed into her room, the girls climbed in after him.

            "Urashima how dare you enter Naru-senpais' room without her permission." Drawing her sword she gave Keitarou a heavy strike which was fallowed shortly after by a Naru punch. He landed in Motokos room coughing. Su kicked him some. But he was met with Motokos voice again.

            "First Naru-senpais' room, now mine? You do not deserve to live here. I hate you begone from this place." Bringing her sword down again he flew back against the wall that joined her room to Kaollas room. But Motoko had stopped right there. Shocked with what she had just said. She couldn't do anything more to him. So she just stood there. Naru made the next move though. Kitsune was holding Shinobu who was crying. Su watched as Naru made her move towards Keitarou and instantly her mind figured out his trajectory into her room. Her eyes widened.

            'He may be immortal, but if he hits it, oni-san will be hurt badly.' Making a mad dash out the door she quickly ran to her room.

            "You Idiot look at all the damage you've done. You're going to repair this and your not going to eat until you do. Your so useless I hate you and wish I had never met you." Su was almost to the console. "I hate you. IDIOT." Keitarou went flying through the wall on the same course that Su thought he would take. She began working hard and typing fast at the console. She didn't even notice the others standing there watching him fly around her room like a tennis ball. Then there was the bright flash. She continued to type commands into the console ignoring everything else in the room, a tear silently sliding down her cheek.

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            They were just watching him bounce around like normal just a few seconds ago, enjoying the entertainment. Then there was the bright flash forcing them to cover their eyes. After wards they slowly opened or uncovered their eyes, and immediately regretted it. Keitarou had hit the reactor Su had built in her room to power most of the Hinata sou and cracked the casing. He was frozen there. Suspended on the reactor his face frozen in a look of absolute pain, agony. His mouth and eyes wide open in a silent scream. Back arching slightly energy crackling over his body every now and then. Su typing away at a console apparently trying to turn off the reactor. Everyone was frozen. They wanted to do something, anything, but they couldn't they couldn't move, not even thoughts were running through their minds. All they could do was watch Keitarou suffer, their hearts full of regret and their eyes full of tears. After what seemed like forever the reactor was shut off and the girls snapped out of it. Su had used something to ground all the power left in his body out and pulled him away from the reactor, the back up batteries now powering the Hinata sou. She just held him and looked up at the others.

            "Oni-san is still alive. But I don't know what is left of or to him." She said tears in her eyes. Motoko kneeled down and held the young girl as she cried, Shinobu went back to crying against Kitsune, Naru just looked down at their Kanrinin as tears ran down her cheeks. She barely gasped one word before going back into shock.

            "Keitarou."

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