Cry: Sorry, just got into writing stories! heh, heres a redo of chapter one

A ballerina, so elegant, so graceful, her twirls were so beautiful. She gets into position then-

"BALLORA! I need help!" A small bear cried.

Ballora looked down at the little green and white bear and she was holding her green ribbon.

"I can't get this on" She said

"Of course Cryptic. Allow me" Ballora offered.

Ballora got Cryptic to turn around and tied the bow on her back. It goes perfectly with her fur. Good thing I suggested it. Ballora thought.

"Thanks!" Cryptic waved and walked off to the Breaker Room and headed inside.

Her father, Funtime Freddy (Ft Freddy for short) greeted her with his booming voice "HEY BAWN-BAWN, I THINK THAT'S THE BIRTHDAY GIRL!"

"Dad..." Cry groaned.

"DON'T BE SILL-"

"FREDDY, INSIDE VOICE!" Baby shouted.

"Geez, party pooper" Ft Freddy muttered.

That is true, though. It's her 19th birthday, and the day that soon, she will become a rental, and she will be adored by everyone.

SORRY ITS SO SHORT! I will get a bigger chapter soon, I promise!