So it seems that people do like this story, but no one has wanted to adopt it from me, I am thinking of rewriting it instead, but I need to tell you something. Some of you seem to think it was okay to demand me to write more and more, and that has made me not want to write at all, because of that, but some of you give great advise and ideas for the story and I love that, I love getting feedback from the people that seem to enjoy the story it self. So I would like to thank you, you helped me through writers block so many times.

Now I am rewriting the story, but I will not write because you are demanding chapter after chapter. I don't need the reviews of "You write more now" I love getting reviews and criticism on what I need to fix. The update will take a long while and it won't be a speedy updated chapter.