Hey everyone! It's your favorite (or second favorite) writer. If you read this story before, then yes is the old story I started doing months ago since April. The reason is I'm re-doing the story from scratch. Because, I notice how good, and well telling story some of the other people were telling. Examples Itjo56, and GigglesMcfiggles Tournament of Power stories are well imitative and so well done. They give each universe and characters the spot of the attention. The fights, the drama, the characters personality. Something that I can't able to get it right.
I do appreciate how you liked the story. And that did give me some success… However, deep down it isn't a story I'm hoping for. What kind of story is it without having the other universes fighting for survival? So, I decide to delete the other chapters and restart from scratch. And I hope… that this story is the one I am looking for.
Enjoy this new remaster version I made.
As Goku and the others arrived at the World of Void they looked around the area. They see an endless space of nothingness, on the stage are fighters from other universes. Some are big, others small, some are men, other women. Goku looked to see a familiar Supreme Kai from U10. And he turned to see three familiar wolves from U9. He smiled to see so many fighters from other universes and exited to face.
"So, many fighters." Said Goku slamming his fist into his hand "I can't wait face each of them!"
"Please Kakarot!" Said Vegeta "These weaklings aren't in any of my interest! The only ones I'm interested are these U11 warriors! The other universes aren't worth a damn!"
"Don't be too sure on yourself Vegeta." Said Gohan "The only reason they're here because they were chosen."
"And what make you so sure that they're even been chosen by their gods?" Ask Vegeta.
"The same reason why we're here." Said Piccolo as he looked at Vegeta and the other universes "They might be the best of the bests in their respective universes."
"Even so… what do we make of them?" Ask Tien.
"We're not sure." Said Gohan "All we know that we have no idea how strong, or what abilities they possess. We mustn't let our guard down."
"I'll keep that in mind." Said Frieza as the other sans Goku looked at the tyrant.
"Don't think about trying betray us Frieza." Said Gohan giving a cold stare at the dead overlord "We know how capital of. If we fall… us, you, Earth, and all of U7 will be erase. So, try and help us, we'll keep a close eye on you."
"Mmm…" Hum Frieza as he looked at Gohan "Don't worry… I'm fully aware about. I'll be on my best behavior fearless leader."
Krillin, Tien, and Roshi whisper to each other without Frieze hearing them "Do you really trust Frieza?" Ask Krillin as Tien narrow his eyes "No! I don't trust him one bit, even after all the terrible things he done!" Sneer Tien "It doesn't matter." Said Roshi very calm "Even if we don't trust him, we're all in this together."
"I don't care if you trust each other!" Shout Beerus catching everyone attention "Just don't lose to these weaklings! Especially that bunch!"
Pointing to the one of the universes the others' looked where Beerus is pointing. The universe has eight fighters, Quitela is right there talking to them as Team U7 continue staring.
"That's weird?" Said Gohan "That universe only have eight people."
"Yeah." Said Krillin, continue "I thought is only a team of ten. Shouldn't they be disqualified for having eight members?"
"Not quite." Said Tien "I sense two others… is faint but still there."
"They must be invisible men." Said Roshi.
"Invisible men?!" Shout Krillin "They could be a problem!"
"So, try not get knock off!" Shout Beerus as he about to leave "Or you'll wish I'll be the one who will destroy you instead!"
Quitela looked to see Beerus leaving as he looked at his set of warriors. He frowned when he sees that Beerus have all ten fighters. His fighters all kneel down as Quitela continue to at them. And spoke without looking at his followers.
"Tck, Sidra assassins failed to keep Beerus two fighters from coming." Said Quitela as he continues "Not only that but failed to erase that Frieze fellow."
"Don't you worry Lord Quitela." Said Ganos "We'll take care of U7."
"Not yet." Said Quitela "Let's see how this play out. But you all have my permission to attack U7… Understood?"
"We understood Milord." Union U4 fighters.
At the stand Beerus, Shin, Elder Kai, and Whis took their seats as they about to watch the tournament to start. Beerus with his arm folded as some other fighters appeared. He is gritting his teeth as Shin looked at Beerus.
"What's wrong Lord Beerus?" Ask Shin.
"Is nothing." Said Beerus.
"Nothing?" Mimic Elder Kai "You must be nervous, there is nothing to worry."
"WORRY?!" Shout Beerus as both Kais jumped "I'm just hoping those morons won't lose! Knowing Quitela and Champa they'll try and eliminate them first."
"Have a little faith Milord." Said Whis "I'm sure they'll be fine."
Beerus sigh as he looked at his team "I hope you're right Whis." Said Beerus.
Then soon, the Grand Priest appeared. He then begins his announcement to the fighters "Welcome all, to the Tournament of Power! Before we begin, Lord Zeno-sama's have some words to say!"
A golden house appeared and open its doors revealing two Zeno's "Welcome everyone! We hope you make this really fun!"
"Thank you for such kind words!" Said the Grand Priest as he looked back at the fighters "And now I'll review the rules that we made since the Zeno Expo! All items such as healing items, weapons, and any kind poison needles are prohibited! Killing your opponents is also prohibited which leads to a disqualification! The time-limit is 100 taks, at Earth time 48 mins! Once all fighters are eliminated the losing universe are eliminated from the tournament! Those who are born with wings are allowed! Two ways to win, if a universe with most fighters by the time is up wins! Or the last fighter in the arena is the last one standing still wins! And the reward for the winner of the tournament" The Grand Priest shows the hologram of the Super Dragon Balls "Will received a wish from the Super Dragon Balls!" As the Grand Priest is finished with all of that "Now time to introduce to the team universes!"
The Grand Priest flew to U2 "The Gentle Universe, Universe 2!"
The line-up of U2 fighters, and to Helles "With our universe love, we'll sure to win this!"
The Grand Priest flew to U3 "The Spiritual Universe, Universe 3!"
The line-up of U3 fighters, and to Ea and Mosco "Our fighters have strategy!" Said Ea.
"(BEEP!) Mosco said 'U4 only have eight warriors, so it won't be a problem!'"
The Grand Priest flew to U4 "The Conspiracy Universe, Universe 4!"
The line-up of U4 fighters, and to Quitela "Kekeke! Those chomps won't know what hit them!"
The Grand Priest flew to U6 "The Challengers Universe, Universe 4!"
The line-up of U6 fighters, and to Champa "Beat anyone who cross you!"
The Grand Priest flew to U7 "The Perseverance Universe, Universe 7!"
The line-up of U7 fighters, and to Beerus "They better not lose."
The Grand Priest flew to U9 "The Improve Universe, Universe 9!"
The line-up of U9 fighters, and to Sidra "Our fate is in their hands now."
The Grand Priest flew to U10 "The Macho Universe, Universe 10!"
The line-up of U10 fighters, and to Rumsshi "Time to show them the power of muscle, and strength!"
The finally the Grand Priest flew to U11 "The Justice Universe, Universe 11!"
The line-up of fighters doing poses (minus Jiren) as color smokes appeared behind them, and to Belmod "Our universe surely will win!" Said Belmod as Khan smiled "From the look of the other universes, they're nothing to worry about."
The Grand Priest flew towards the Zeno's and looked at the fighters "With the introduction finish, let the battle…"
Short looks from other universe's from U4, to the Kamikaze Fireballs, to Hit, to Trio De Dangers, Krillin Tien and Roshi, to Cabba Kale, and Caulifla, to U3, to U10, to Piccolo and Gohan, to Dyspo and Toppo, to Frost, to Vegeta, to Jiren, and to Goku.
"BEGIN!" Shout the Grand Priest.
Soon, all the fighters came charging. Bergamo jumped towards Saonel as both of them clashes fists. Ganos traded blows with the Preecho, Napapa and Nink slamming into each other, Rabanra fighting with the Pride Trooper Kunshi. Basil fired his Shining Blaster, Caulifla fired her Crush Cannon, and Toppo fired his Justice Beam. Explosion everywhere as the battles rain hard. Goku and company watches the chaos, he then saw Jiren just standing there. He took this opportunity to fight him.
"Jiren!" Shout Goku leaving the others.
"Wait dad!" Shout Gohan.
Soon Vegeta, #17 and #18, even Frieza left them. They all went separate directions as Gohan looked annoyed.
"Don't waste your breath Gohan." Said Krillin "They're stubborn bunch.
"You're right." Said Gohan "But let's stick to the plan alright!" As the others nodded.
Goku charges in the chaos as he is about to reach Jiren. However, one of the fighters got in his way. Goku and Ganos then swing punches at each other. As these two are fighting the other universes begin to use their Ace warriors.
Narirama charges out from the explosion as he begins his attack.
"Narirama!" Shout Narirama as he started to spin.
Rubalt and Hop who were fighting see Narirama coming for them in full speed. He hits both of them and send them flying. The Kamikaze Fireballs turned around only to get hit away.
Helles saw this was shock "Is not beautiful when they haven't transformed yet!" Shout Helles.
"HA HA!" Laugh Ea "This Narirama Super Survival Mode! He's programmed to fight in the tournament. His only mission: To knock everyone off the stage!"
Narirama then hit both Cabba and Dyspo. Then hits Shosa, Caway, Methiop, and Oregano. Soon later, he hits Murisarm, Kunshi, And Zarbuto.
"(BEEP!) Mosco said, 'Knock them all off, as quickly as you can!"
"Don't worry Mosco." Said Ea push his glasses up "Narirama will do it in few mins. HIS SUPER SURVIVAL MODE IS UNBEAT…"
Soon, Hit appeared and kicks Narirama left hand by crushing it. "Hit! Nice hit!" Shout Champa joyful then moments later Basil appeared and crush Narirama right hand by his kick while laughing. "That's our Basil!" Shout Roh. Both Basil and Hit jumped away as Narirama fell. But they're not finish yet.
"Back off mutt." Said Hit "He's mine."
"Yeah right!" Sneer Basil "As if I let you take my prey away!"
"Didn't work!" Said Zeno "Yeah, it failed!" Said Future Zeno.
"Narirama Super Survival Mode strategy had failed!" Said the Grand Priest.
As Narirama about to stand up Hit uses his Time-Skip. He hits both Narirama arms off with within seconds. As Hit's Time-Skip past Narirama arms fell, Hit and Basil then attacked.
"Flash Fist Crush!" Shout Hit as a vaccine-like attack fired.
"Shining Blaster!" Shout Basil firing a red orb.
Both attacks hit Narirama directly at his power core. The attacks the flew him off the stage as his comrade shouts his name. "Narirama!" Shout Nigrisshi.
Ea is shocked as Narirama teleports onto the bench. The others see Narirama on the bench as they see what it means.
"Narirama of U3 has been eliminated!" Said the Grand Priest.
GodPads appeared in the two Zeno's hands as they use it to cross out fighters. Zeno looked into U3 to look for Narirama.
"Tap!" Narirama picture went black.
"Let me get the next one!" Said Future Zeno.
"Okay." Respond Zeno.
"So, the fighters get teleported to the stands." Said Anat.
"That's a relief." Said Helles sighing "So, they don't get erase automatically."
"If any of our fighters does get erase like that. It'll be a tragic lost." Said Gowasu.
"You hear that Milord?" Whisper Kuru to Quitela "At least we won't lose our fighters like that."
"It doesn't matter!" Shout Quitela "We'll still be if we lose our ten fighters!"
Lilibeu is flying in the air as she looks for fighters. Red Ki Blasts went past her as she turned to see Vikal firing red beams from her eyes. Lilibeu did some spins and turns as both ladies are near the pillar. Lilibeu turned around as she is covered by blue energy. She charges at Vikal as Vikal herself is covered by pink energy. Both of them clashes as blue lighting sparks the sky, both women struggles pushing one another. Vikal looked at her opponent as she still struggles to beat Lilibeu.
"I won't let you beat me!" Said Vikal "My power of love will beat yours!"
"Not quite enough!" Shout Lilibeu.
Lilibeu overpower Vikal as Lilibeu hits her. Vikal fell onto the stage around as Lilibeu looked for someone else. She sees Basil fighting against Jilcol. She then covered herself with energy as she charges in. Rumsshi sees Lilibeu heading towards Basil as he cheered.
"Go Lilibeu!" Shout Rumsshi "Save Jilcol!"
Jilcol sees his teammate heading towards him. He abandons his fight with Basil. Looking confuse he smells a power-level heading towards him fast. Turning around Basil sees Lilibeu about to hit him enough for him to fall off the arena. Basil then jumps as he dodges Lilibeu assault. She may be fast, but Basil is faster. Looking back, she glares at the red wolf as she about to attack again.
"Curses!" Curse Lilibeu "You hyper mutt!"
"Don't get cocky just because you can fly!" Shout Basil as he jumped with his leg glowing red "Shining Blaster!" Shout Basil.
The orb hits Lilibeu head-on. Lilibeu struggles as she is being overpower by Basil Shining Blaster. Basil jumped in the air again with his leg glowing.
"Let's see if you can handle two!" Shout Basil as h fired a second Shining Blaster.
Feeling overpowered Lilibeu energy disappeared as she is launch off the arena. As she screams, she teleports onto the benchers. Noticing that she lost she low her head in shame.
"Lilibeu of U10 has been eliminated!" Said the Grand Priest.
"Bye! Flap!" Lilibeu picture went black.
"I'm a disgrace." Said Lilibeu sadly.
"Of course, you are!" Shout Rumsshi "Because of that, we're down to nine!"
"Even so, you did your best." Said Gowasu calmly "Let's cheer on the rest, shall we?"
Lilibeu nodded as she looked at the stage "Let's go U10!" Shout Lilibeu.
Bergamo and Lavender appeared beside Basil as Bergamo places his hand onto his little brother shoulder.
"Good job Basil." Said Bergamo proudly "Seems your training payed off."
"Thanks, Big Bro!" Said Basil.
Goku and Ganos still trading blows as they're neck to neck. Goku swings a punch which Ganos counter by using his left to push Goku arm away. Ganos then spins around with his right arm straight out with his hand clutch. Goku tilt his head as Ganos fist misses but only graze Goku's cheek. Goku then swings a kick only for Ganos to backflip away from him. He then fired multiple Ki Blast at Goku, he then dodging and reflecting the Ki Blasts away. Knowing is faultily Ganos fall back as more explosion is heard.
Goku turned around as Toppo is fighting Auta Magetta. As Toppo manages to push Megetta away Toppo looked to see Goku. But before he could attack Murichim came out of nowhere and slammed him away to reveal Jiren still standing. Goku sees as his chance to fight Jiren. However, Nink appeared and grabbed him into a bearhug.
Beerus, Shin, and Elder Kai became shock to see Goku trapped in Nink clutches. Goku elbow at Nink abdomen but didn't do much. He then punches Nink at the face, like before didn't do much. Nink now laughing when he felt that.
"More hit me more!" Shout Nink.
He then tightens his grip as Goku screamed. Quitela laugh to see Nink have Goku in his bearhug.
"Good work Nink!" Shouted Qutiela "Jumped off the edge along with him!"
"Quitela you bastard!" Shout Beerus "You're willing to have one of yours to jumped off like that?!"
"Of course!" Answer Quitela "With your special Saiyan out the way. The rest is history!"
Nink took Goku near the edge as Goku is still trapped in his gasp.
"Fall… Fall with me to the abyss!" Shout Nink.
"Not… A… CHAAAAANNNCCEEE!" Scream Goku as he is covered in a blue glow.
Goku broke free from Nink gasp. Nink fell off the edge, while as Goku grabbed hold onto the edge as Nink fell into the abyss. Nink then teleported to the stands with his arms folded.
"Plan failed!" Said Nink as Quitela kicks Nink at the head.
"Nink of U4 has been eliminated!" Said the Grand Priest.
"Nink? Nink? Pop!" Nink picture went black.
Goku pulled himself back in the area in his SSJSSB form. He then went back to his base form as he scratches his head with a smile.
"Boy that was a close one!" Said Goku.
"GOKU!" Shout Beerus "YOU ALMOST GOT YOURSELF KNOCK OFF!"
"Sorry Lord Beerus!" Said Goku "It'll won't again!"
"I HOPE SO!" Shout Beerus.
"That was a close one." Said Whis "Goku carelessness almost cost him out of the tournament."
"I hope that youngling pay more attention, because that was a close call!" Said Elder Kai.
Near at Goku location three figures are laughing. Goku looked behind him to see Lavender, and looked at Basil, and in fount of him is Bergamo. The Trio De Dangers with their smug grins on their faces as they stare at Goku. Goku in battle stand stares at the eldest brother of the trio. Goku and Bergamo rematch is about to happen.
(Preview for next DBS chapter)
Greetings everyone! Names Sidra!
Goku and Bergamo disappearing as Basil and Lavender run on different sides
It looks like the Trio De Dangers are about to fight that Saiyan Goku.
The Trio De Dangers surrounded Goku as a white glow covered his body.
But, he's not the only one whose fighting. The other U7 members seem to be also.
Vegeta fighting the Pride Troopers as Gohan and co. fighting five warriors.
Hope the trio won't fall off! Universe 9 is in their and they're teammates hands!
Goku turning into an SSJ as Bergamo with red fists charges, both his and Goku's fists clashes creating a bright light.
Next time: Goku vs Trio De Dangers! Ultimate Rematch!
Red aura erupts from Bergamo with both hands glowing with Goku doing the Kamehameha Wave.
Don't miss this!
Time 47 mins
Fighters 77/80
Universe 2: Ribrianne, Kakunsa, Rozie, Zarbuto, Rabanra, Jimeze, Vikal, Zirlon, Prum, Hermila
Universe 3: The Preecho, Maji Kayo, Katopesla, Bollarator, Koitsukai, Paparoni, Viara, Panchia, Nigrisshi
Eliminated: Narirama
Universe 4: Damon, Ganos, Caway, Dercori, Shosa, Monna, Majora, Gamisaras, Shantza
Eliminated: Nink
Universe 6: Hit (1), Frost, Auta Magetta, Botamo, Cabba, Saonel, Pirina, Kale, Caulifla, Dr. Rota
Universe 7: Goku (1), Vegeta, Gohan, Piccolo, Tien Shinhan, Master Roshi, Krillin, Android 18, Android 17, Frieza
Universe 9: Bergamo, Lavender, Basil (2), Hop, Sorrel, Comfrey, Roselle, Oregano, Hyssop, Chappil
Universe 10: Murichim, Jirasen, Murisarm, Methiop, Napapa, Rubalt, Jilcol, Obuni, Zium
Eliminated: Lilibeu
Universe 11: Jiren, Toppo, Dyspo, Kahseral, Vuon, Kunshi, Tupper, Zoiray, Cocotte, Kettol
Hope you all enjoyed this. Now for all the U9 fans (include me) U9 isn't to lose. This is the version that I see how it should happen. I'm going to keep them in this story. So, for right now hope you enjoy this remake of mine.
Put a review or comment, and I'll see you all later.